I spotted something wrong on ______ page., Errors, typos, etc., Minor text fixes needed |
Jul 27 2010, 09:07 PM
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I think you underestimate the depth of my pettiness Group: +Donors Posts: 839 Joined: 18-August 09 From: Carrboro Member No.: 57 762 bluh bluh huge bitch |
In the VS Seeker tab, when you click on the 'View my past battles.' and the box opens up with your past battles, the 'Instructions:' part says either 'Balanced', 'Defencive', or 'Offencive'. 'Defencive' should be 'Defensive' and 'Offencive' should be 'Offensive'. I believe those are the correct British English spellings, which are used for a majority (all?) of words that differ between American and British spellings. EDIT: Yet Google suggests that, although "offence" and "defence" are correct BrE, "offencive" and "defencive" are incorrect. So I dunno :/ This post has been edited by Ghost of Starscream: Jul 27 2010, 09:11 PM -------------------- [align=center]add me for daily clicks [735/1000]
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Jul 28 2010, 02:31 AM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: +Donors Posts: 6 Joined: 19-July 09 From: France Member No.: 48 080 Moon's Rangers |
They ARE incorrect.
Not just Google, any dictionary will tell you that, actually ^-^ Once you put the "-ive", it HAS TO BE with an s, no matter whether it's British or American spelling. -------------------- |
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Jul 28 2010, 12:11 PM
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Konkon Group: Posts: 53 Joined: 21-October 08 From: Nin nin Member No.: 3 082 Konkon |
Very minor error, but it bugs me nonetheless.
For the Destiny Knot: "A beautiful red knot that bonds two compatible Daycare Pokémon together faster Limited to 1 per customer." There's a period missing after "faster". -------------------- Rawwr
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Jul 28 2010, 01:50 PM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Newbies Posts: 2 Joined: 7-May 09 Member No.: 20 450 Active Squad |
In the help section, under the Pokemon tab, 'Shiny Pokemon' header:
While they aren't nearly as rares as they are in Pokémon games, they are still extremely rare. Should be 'rare' and not 'rares' -------------------- |
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Jul 29 2010, 10:19 AM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Members Posts: 37 Joined: 9-August 09 From: Somewhere over the rainbow Member No.: 55 430 Don't argue with me. |
In the dex -
Fossil Aerodactyl - Fossil Fossil Pokémon. Is it supposed to be like that? -------------------- |
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Aug 2 2010, 10:49 PM
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Kitzie Kitz Group: Members Posts: 83 Joined: 1-September 09 From: Long Island Member No.: 60 963 Kitzie's Party |
I'm looking through the lab right now and I noticed one of the descriptions:
"An gold egg with two black stripes running across it. It makes a buzzing noise sometimes." It should be 'A gold egg...' -------------------- Kitzie Kitz's Crafts: http://kitzie-kitzs-crafting.tumblr.com Gotta Craft 'Em All Project: 118/721 Papercrafter. Bead Spriter. Fisheye obsesser. |
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Aug 4 2010, 09:32 PM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 4-December 09 From: INSIDE YOUR MIND Member No.: 75 195 Army of the Abandoned |
EDIT: Nevermind, it was already said...
This post has been edited by After the Explosion: Aug 6 2010, 11:13 AM -------------------- |
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Aug 6 2010, 05:20 PM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Members Posts: 53 Joined: 7-April 09 Member No.: 9 172 Active Squad |
In the dex - Fossil Aerodactyl - Fossil Fossil Pokémon. Is it supposed to be like that? Well Aerodactyl's normal Dex entry says "Fossil Pokémon". Fossil Aerodactyl just follows the trend of fossil pokemon by adding "Fossil" in front of the pokemon type. (So Fossil Kabuto is a Fossil Shellfish Pokémon.) I will, however, agree that the repetition is a little awkward. :/ -------------------- |
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Aug 10 2010, 10:56 AM
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Back from the dead... sort of. Group: +Donors Posts: 62 Joined: 17-June 09 Member No.: 35 279 Active Squad |
QUOTE Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so! Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab. -------------------- |
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Aug 11 2010, 09:05 PM
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And you call upon god ~ Group: Members Posts: 13 Joined: 15-June 10 Member No.: 100 989 Active Squad |
Just me nitpicking but..
On any dex entry thats not fossilized, hover over the greyed out image. No fossil. right? Hover over a corruption orb now. There's no . at the end.. And maybe for ones that are summonable put "This Pokemon is Summonable." instead of just "Summonable" (again with no . ) -------------------- |
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Aug 11 2010, 11:27 PM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Newbies Posts: 7 Joined: 7-June 10 From: in ur websitez makin old refrenses Member No.: 99 622 Active Squad |
Pokemon names are in all caps in these two descriptions:
BAGON harbours a never-ending dream of one day soaring high among the clouds. As if trying to dispel its frustration over its inability to fly, this Pokémon slams its hard head against huge rocks and shatters them into pebbles. CATERPIE has a voracious appetite. It can devour leaves bigger than its body right before your eyes. From its antenna, this Pokémon releases a terrifically strong odour. -------------------- |
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Aug 12 2010, 07:45 PM
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The Optimistic One Group: Members Posts: 38 Joined: 4-June 09 From: Utah Member No.: 30 523 My party |
An error occured: No new achievements unlocked - please try again later.
In this message, "occurred" needs a second "r." You could also try using "An error has occurred:" although it's not completely necessary. Same with the message informing you you don't have any more opportunities to check today. Edit: Another error on Fossil Armaldo's entry-its name is in all Caps. Edit2: The PC page says to "Drag&Drop;" shouldn't it have some spaces? ("Drag & Drop") This post has been edited by Torrita: Aug 15 2010, 08:04 PM -------------------- |
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Aug 23 2010, 04:33 PM
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Pokémon Trainer Group: Members Posts: 0 Joined: 8-February 10 Member No.: 83 619 Active Squad |
Shieldon flavor text!
"Shieldon is a Pokémon that lived in jungles around 100 million years ago.It is weak to attacks from behind. Its facial hide is extremely hard." It needs a space. |
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Aug 24 2010, 12:28 PM
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Birthdays=good. The more you have, the longer you li Group: Members Posts: 66 Joined: 24-July 09 From: Candy Mountain Member No.: 49 829 Active Squad |
On the Stat's page, under user census in the category skin usage some of the skins are cut off.
Also, on my Shiny Skarmory viewing page, the sprite doesn't show up. -------------------- |
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Aug 24 2010, 05:30 PM
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One Look Into My Sinster Eyes,and.....BAM! Group: Members Posts: 17 Joined: 7-April 10 From: U.S.A Member No.: 92 026 My Fav Pokemon |
I Was Looking at the Egg Shelter and It Still Says...
"If you wish to find out more information about an egg, simply hover your cursor over it, and it'll respond to you and stop moving." But The Eggs No Longer Move. |
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Aug 24 2010, 10:27 PM
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Your Resident Grouch Group: Members Posts: 73 Joined: 20-April 09 From: Canada Member No.: 13 842 Active Squad |
When you hit "OK" to accept the starting of a shiny hunt, the word "successfully" is spelled without the second L.
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Aug 24 2010, 10:31 PM
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Your Resident Grouch Group: Members Posts: 73 Joined: 20-April 09 From: Canada Member No.: 13 842 Active Squad |
QUOTE Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so! Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab. This. And was there ever a replacement for that? They said they were planning to give Pokemon experience in some other way, but if they made an update/post about it, I didn't see it. If I remember correctly, I think they said they did it to cut down on lag, but idk, it doesn't really make sense to me - Pokemon gain experience in the daycare in the actual games, so, not doing it here seems kinda... Weird. I don't know if it would help if they did the same thing they did with the Pokewalker, where the experience/level change would only be apparent once you removed the Pokemon from daycare...? |
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Aug 24 2010, 10:38 PM
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This one does not have time for your solid waste excretions. Group: Administrators Posts: 421 Joined: 12-May 09 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 22 312 Team Awesomecakes |
QUOTE Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so! Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab. This. And was there ever a replacement for that? They said they were planning to give Pokemon experience in some other way, but if they made an update/post about it, I didn't see it. If I remember correctly, I think they said they did it to cut down on lag, but idk, it doesn't really make sense to me - Pokemon gain experience in the daycare in the actual games, so, not doing it here seems kinda... Weird. I don't know if it would help if they did the same thing they did with the Pokewalker, where the experience/level change would only be apparent once you removed the Pokemon from daycare...? Don't double post. Use the edit button provided for you. The training sessions in the Vs. Seeker provide experience for pokemon. Also, this is just for pointing out typos. If you have other issues, discuss them in the proper forum. -------------------- Please use the Help Page and appropriate Help Forum instead of PMing me. Only PM if it's something you need me or an Admin for specifically. |
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Aug 26 2010, 09:28 AM
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Axew and Volcarona enthusiast Group: +Donors Posts: 4 056 Joined: 3-September 09 From: England Member No.: 61 211 Invisible Kyurem |
Repels, drinks, and Antidotes may be purchased in the Shop. Heart Scales, Flame Orbs, and Focus Slashes are only found randomly around the Site, randomly when hatching eggs, and in the Underground.
You can buy Flame Orbs, Heart Scales and Focus Sashes in the Back-room... So I guess that could be updated in the Help page under Shop Items? This post has been edited by Immersion: Aug 26 2010, 09:29 AM -------------------- Don't forget to love yourself. Add me for daily clicks: 873/1000 [align=center]--- Community Thread Shiny List! ---[/align] [align=right]Breeding Incentives: Mission Cards [/align] |
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Aug 26 2010, 01:22 PM
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Kitzie Kitz Group: Members Posts: 83 Joined: 1-September 09 From: Long Island Member No.: 60 963 Kitzie's Party |
Repels, drinks, and Antidotes may be purchased in the Shop. Heart Scales, Flame Orbs, and Focus Slashes are only found randomly around the Site, randomly when hatching eggs, and in the Underground. You can buy Flame Orbs, Heart Scales and Focus Sashes in the Back-room... So I guess that could be updated in the Help page under Shop Items? Well, Flame Orbs, Heart Scales, and Focus Sashes are in the Back Room because someone that found them around the site, etc., sold them to the shop. I think on the Help page it's talking about just the regular shop, since you have to buy the Secret Key in order to get access to the Back Room. So then I think it wouldn't need to be changed? -------------------- Kitzie Kitz's Crafts: http://kitzie-kitzs-crafting.tumblr.com Gotta Craft 'Em All Project: 118/721 Papercrafter. Bead Spriter. Fisheye obsesser. |
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