Two Different Worlds, Attempting my First Comic... |
Jul 30 2011, 11:02 AM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
Uh, this is my first comic and the pages might be a bit big. Also, this will take a long time because I can't draw humans that well. It also has Pokemon in it though. This is going to be a "Reverse Pokemon Mystery Dungeon" story, where two Pokemon turn into Humans. That's all I have so far for the plot, so You can suggest what happens... Oh yeah, and my art isn't that good. I'm bad at Human Anatomy, so I'm wondering why I'm even making it a Reverse Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Story. .-. Uh... so... Yeah...
Cover Page (click to show ) Page #1 (click to show ) Page #2 (click to show ) Page#3 (click to show ) Page#4 (click to show ) Page#5 (click to show )
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Jul 30 2011, 03:05 PM
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Gym Leader Group: Members Posts: 463 Joined: 14-June 09 Member No.: 34 496 googoly mooogoly |
Looks good to me ^^ The names I might have might not fit well, but I hope you like them.
Sneasle - Glade Charmander - Vatch -------------------- |
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Jul 31 2011, 07:58 PM
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Pokémon Champion Group: Members Posts: 3 344 Joined: 12-November 09 Member No.: 72 338 egg |
Oooh, sounds interesting! And the cover looks good! :3 Now, name suggestions...I have a couple.
Sneasel: Gelida. (Latin, means "cold, like ice.") Charmander: Flammus. (The original Latin word is the feminine "flamma," which is, obviously, "fire." Since a male Charmander should not have a feminine name...I think the word would have been "flammus" if it was masculine, so...) -------------------- BLUH Made by Z e x i o n. Thank you! <3 Here is a thread crediting everything else made for me, including the things that won't fit in my signature: ClickY |
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Aug 2 2011, 10:59 AM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
NextPage /Idon'treallylikethisbutwhatever/ (click to show ) I'll use Da Cubone's names later I guess~ It just didn't seem like it fit. [EDIT] Should I type in the words or write them? XD Just wondering, because my handwriting isn't the best. This post has been edited by Thunderpaws: Aug 2 2011, 03:35 PM |
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Aug 2 2011, 01:19 PM
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derp Group: Members Posts: 5 008 Joined: 22-July 10 Member No.: 106 673 Active Squad |
It seems very interesting ^^
Writing would be better in my opinion. Because I saw the first comic, and it seemed good enough~ This post has been edited by Kirbyz: Aug 2 2011, 01:41 PM |
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Aug 2 2011, 01:28 PM
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Pokémon Champion Group: Members Posts: 3 344 Joined: 12-November 09 Member No.: 72 338 egg |
Writing the words is fine.~ I can read it easily so far, so as far as readability goes, both ways are fine. ^^
Anyway, I like the new page! :3 Yeah, it's short, but that's okay. ^^ -------------------- BLUH Made by Z e x i o n. Thank you! <3 Here is a thread crediting everything else made for me, including the things that won't fit in my signature: ClickY |
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Aug 3 2011, 11:03 AM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
Page #2 (click to show )
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Aug 4 2011, 07:26 AM
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derp Group: Members Posts: 5 008 Joined: 22-July 10 Member No.: 106 673 Active Squad |
So now that she knows that he's a human, what's gonna happen...? Flame will spend one day and then he will be gone? Or... will something else strange happen...?
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Aug 4 2011, 12:11 PM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
Oh gosh, it's Gemmy. Whoa, I didn't know you changed your screenname...
ThirdPage (click to show ) [EDIT] Oh yeah, I'll choose the option where something else happens. This post has been edited by Thunderpaws: Aug 4 2011, 12:18 PM |
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Aug 4 2011, 01:10 PM
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Idk what zbx stands for Group: Members Posts: 587 Joined: 15-May 09 From: EVERYWHERE Member No.: 23 314 I dont even |
Awesome comic :D I like your drawing style and the idea. Can't wait for more c:
I think I know what's gonna happen :D Oh by the way, I've been stalking this since you made this topic, I was gonna suggest names but then I got distracted on youtube for like 2 hours D: -------------------- STARTING TO LOOK LIKE A TRIPLE RAINBOW Awesome Places! (click to show ) I don't like charizard :P (click to show ) Credits (click to show ) Shiny Hunts (click to show ) |
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Aug 4 2011, 04:35 PM
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derp Group: Members Posts: 5 008 Joined: 22-July 10 Member No.: 106 673 Active Squad |
Good going Thunder~ I bet you'd do even better if you'd use some time to draw a bit of the background! I'm just saying, if you don't want, there's no reason to. =b
It's good until now~ |
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Aug 8 2011, 01:18 PM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
NextPageWarning: Looks bad, 'cause I rushed. :I (click to show ) Sorry, had to update, haha... I'm just eager to get to the, the, the, next part of the comic. Ew, it looks terrrible... @ Gemmy Haha, I can't do backgrounds and/or too lazy to draw them. This post has been edited by Thunderpaws: Aug 8 2011, 01:19 PM |
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Aug 8 2011, 05:12 PM
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derp Group: Members Posts: 5 008 Joined: 22-July 10 Member No.: 106 673 Active Squad |
It's oookaay. Even though you can't make backgrounds, you still make it really good! Keep it going, I wanna see more!
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Sep 25 2011, 09:53 PM
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Be careful for what you wish for... You might just get it. Group: Members Posts: 3 555 Joined: 9-August 09 From: San Francisco, California Member No.: 55 477 Gijinka Academy |
I love it, Thundery.
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~~~ Adoptables and Stuff (click to show ) Personalities of Mine (click to show ) Zodiacs (click to show ) Huh? |
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Sep 25 2011, 09:57 PM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
/shot/ Reminds me I should finish this. I forgot all about it. Darn... /lazy/
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Sep 26 2011, 01:11 AM
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Group: Members Posts: 8 088 Joined: 17-February 10 From: In the Middle of Nowhere Member No.: 85 033 Active Squad |
FifthPage (click to show ) Somewhat rushed and done two in the morning. WHY? Pffft, this is why you don't move into a suddenly different environment. Fever/cold/flu. This post has been edited by Thunderpaws: Sep 26 2011, 01:12 AM |
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Sep 27 2011, 07:57 AM
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derp Group: Members Posts: 5 008 Joined: 22-July 10 Member No.: 106 673 Active Squad |
Oh how and soo...? o^o How did that cold occurred all of sudden?
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