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Two Different Worlds, Attempting my First Comic...
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post Jul 30 2011, 11:02 AM
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Uh, this is my first comic and the pages might be a bit big. Also, this will take a long time because I can't draw humans that well. It also has Pokemon in it though. This is going to be a "Reverse Pokemon Mystery Dungeon" story, where two Pokemon turn into Humans. That's all I have so far for the plot, so You can suggest what happens... Oh yeah, and my art isn't that good. I'm bad at Human Anatomy, so I'm wondering why I'm even making it a Reverse Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Story. .-. Uh... so... Yeah...

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post Jul 30 2011, 03:05 PM
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Looks good to me ^^ The names I might have might not fit well, but I hope you like them.

Sneasle - Glade
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post Jul 31 2011, 07:58 PM
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Oooh, sounds interesting! And the cover looks good! :3 Now, name suggestions...I have a couple.

Sneasel: Gelida. (Latin, means "cold, like ice.")

Charmander: Flammus. (The original Latin word is the feminine "flamma," which is, obviously, "fire." Since a male Charmander should not have a feminine name...I think the word would have been "flammus" if it was masculine, so...)


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post Aug 2 2011, 10:59 AM
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NextPage /Idon'treallylikethisbutwhatever/ (click to show)


I'll use Da Cubone's names later I guess~ cat.gif It just didn't seem like it fit.

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Should I type in the words or write them? XD Just wondering, because my handwriting isn't the best.

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post Aug 2 2011, 01:19 PM
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It seems very interesting ^^

Writing would be better in my opinion. Because I saw the first comic, and it seemed good enough~

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post Aug 2 2011, 01:28 PM
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Writing the words is fine.~ I can read it easily so far, so as far as readability goes, both ways are fine. ^^

Anyway, I like the new page! :3 Yeah, it's short, but that's okay. ^^


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post Aug 3 2011, 11:03 AM
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post Aug 4 2011, 07:26 AM
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So now that she knows that he's a human, what's gonna happen...? Flame will spend one day and then he will be gone? Or... will something else strange happen...?

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post Aug 4 2011, 12:11 PM
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Oh gosh, it's Gemmy. Whoa, I didn't know you changed your screenname...

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Oh yeah, I'll choose the option where something else happens. cat.gif

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post Aug 4 2011, 01:10 PM
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Awesome comic :D I like your drawing style and the idea. Can't wait for more c:
I think I know what's gonna happen :D

Oh by the way, I've been stalking this since you made this topic, I was gonna suggest names but then I got distracted on youtube for like 2 hours D:


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post Aug 4 2011, 04:35 PM
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Good going Thunder~ I bet you'd do even better if you'd use some time to draw a bit of the background! I'm just saying, if you don't want, there's no reason to. =b

It's good until now~
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post Aug 8 2011, 01:18 PM
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NextPageWarning: Looks bad, 'cause I rushed. :I (click to show)


Sorry, had to update, haha... I'm just eager to get to the, the, the, next part of the comic. Ew, it looks terrrible...

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Haha, I can't do backgrounds and/or too lazy to draw them. noes.gif

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It's oookaay. Even though you can't make backgrounds, you still make it really good! Keep it going, I wanna see more! cat.gif
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post Sep 25 2011, 09:53 PM
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I love it, Thundery. cat.gif


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post Sep 25 2011, 09:57 PM
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/shot/ Reminds me I should finish this. I forgot all about it. Darn... /lazy/
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post Sep 26 2011, 01:11 AM
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Somewhat rushed and done two in the morning. WHY?
Pffft, this is why you don't move into a suddenly different environment. Fever/cold/flu.

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Oh how and soo...? o^o How did that cold occurred all of sudden?

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