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Posted by: Shirogane Jul 23 2009, 10:54 PM

THIS COMIC IS ON INDEFINITE HIATUS.

I'm extremely busy right now working on the VDex, and am unable to draw anything for it (I haven't drawn in over a month ahhh).

If/when it comes off of hiatus, updates will be posted over at VDex itself - I will no longer post my panels here.

I'm really sorry for the disappointment this may cause, but I felt I couldn't just stay in total silence and leave everyone hanging, so...

(This also means I won't be using the GTS+ forums anymore, baw I'll miss you guys.)

If anyone needs to contact me, just holler me over at VDex, or on Twitter.


HELLO

You have reached my retarded comic about Pokémon turned people. This comic updates every day, or nearly so.

Please visit the comic's website if you have the time! It just opened on August 22nd (almost a month after the comic started), and any support makes us immensely happy.

Warning!

It has occasional uses of the f-word, wounds that actually bleed, bound people, non-graphic torture, implied adult jokes and censored fanservice at non-crude angles. If you are pure, virginal, and not old enough to surf the internet without your parents' supervision, this is likely not for you.

BUT IF YOU AREN'T, THEN READ ON :Dbb The comic starts just below these character bios.

WHATEVER IS GOING ON HERE

You can find a full archive over at our website, seigane.net. It's still under construction, so please bear with us!

Chapter 1: Arrival (cont.) (http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=509508)
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Chapter 2: Dusknoir (http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=509508)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=407819
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Chapter 3: Rage (http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=510057)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=420289
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Chapter 4: The Future (http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=511881)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=433883
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Chapter 5: Dialga (parental guidance strongly advised) (http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=511881)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=450617
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Chapter 6: Twinleaf (http://www.seigane.net/reversed/sidea/recap.php?&ch=6)
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Chapter 7: Trapped (http://www.seigane.net/reversed/sidea/recap.php?&ch=7)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=484599
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Chapter 8: Puppy Love
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=501455
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Chapter Nine
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=532439
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=535081
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http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=546866

Ask Kadabra (Updates Saturdays)
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=422176
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=427870
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http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=482432
http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16549&view=findpost&p=517187

You can ask Kadabra questions! Every couple of updates Kadabra will pick a reader question and answer it. Don't mind him if his answer is completely useless, however.

to be continued.

Read http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=16806?

Posted by: TamamaFox Jul 23 2009, 11:08 PM

You have entered the TWILIGHT ZONE

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 23 2009, 11:31 PM

I imagine plenty of lulz to come from this for some odd reason....

Posted by: RedGardevoir Jul 23 2009, 11:33 PM

I love it already! keep working Shiro! *pulls out whip and makes you work* just kidding it's really good can't wait for the rest!

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 23 2009, 11:33 PM

...You are officially my fastest stalker.

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 23 2009, 11:36 PM

You have no idea how much that means to me Shiro

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 23 2009, 11:38 PM

...do i want to have any idea

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 23 2009, 11:39 PM

OHOHO THOSE SNEAKY MEOWTHS.


Please say Azzie isn't a male Nidoran cause that would be all kinds of creepy and awkward D.




*stalks*

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 23 2009, 11:41 PM

Depends on if you like sleeping peacefully at night without nightmares....anyhow
The artwork is really nice, expected a more serious story/character for some reason but I enjoy the funny pajama character pages (IE: Page 8)

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 23 2009, 11:43 PM

Azzie is that unfortunate girl there's friend who TURNED INTO A TREE no actually Azzie is nowhere to be seen.




ahhh )8

The story should have plenty of serious moments. The MC's just a total spaz.

Posted by: Ulqui Prime Jul 24 2009, 04:59 AM

This was quite funny. Please make more!

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 24 2009, 01:14 PM

Lol that was funny.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 24 2009, 01:18 PM

Aww man I know how being turned into a tree feels like. IT SUCKS AND SQUIRRELS BECOME OVERLY-FRIENDLY.

Posted by: Connie Jul 24 2009, 01:23 PM

EPIC shiro EPIC


You are a legend.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 24 2009, 06:54 PM

And now THE STORY GOES ON.

well HELLO there.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 24 2009, 07:08 PM

ROFL.
Niiice.

-stalks this- <3

EPIC SUDDEN COLOUR.

Posted by: Lieutenant Sadism Jul 24 2009, 07:12 PM

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 24 2009, 07:27 PM

So I recall you saying something about serious points in the story.....Can't wait for the next page of our MC Spazzing out.

Posted by: FlameWar Jul 24 2009, 08:25 PM

Lol it was funny^^

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 24 2009, 08:30 PM

Wait no longer.

Warning: Might be offensive if you're pure and virginal.



And MC has a name now! Meet Mari, the spazziest spaz to ever spaz.

Posted by: Indotastic Jul 25 2009, 01:46 AM

This thread is so followed.

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 25 2009, 01:53 AM

ROFLMAO!

'What if he BAD TOUCHES me '

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 25 2009, 11:45 AM

Pichu+Super Glue = Best Censor ever

I love that Spaz

Posted by: RedGardevoir Jul 25 2009, 12:03 PM

this is already epictastic. the male anatomy forced to been seen by a innocent girl is just to funny especially since it's her own pokemon. har-har!

edit: badtouches me, so using that, too wonderful not to. ^,.,~

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 12:56 PM

Sharpedo discovers the disadvantages of being a human male.

Posted by: CheckeredPenguin Jul 25 2009, 01:41 PM

Haha this is great! It's really interesting and adorable.
Can't wait to see more. ^^

Posted by: Ruusu Jul 25 2009, 02:03 PM

S-so handsome Sharpedo! And naked. It's like a perfect backage. *wnb-nudist* But stilll I kind a feel sorry for the girl. She's virginal after all. XD Poor "sensore Pichu" too, got hit. oxo Ouch. The comic is brilliant so far. Love the idea. I can't wait to see more. *immobilized by love* *Q*

Posted by: xGVx Jul 25 2009, 02:15 PM

lol

I love this! Awesome webcomic Shiro ^^

"CRITICAL HIT"
"It's super effective!"
xD

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 25 2009, 02:26 PM

*stalks this!!!*
LMAO omg this is amazing <3<3<3

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 03:33 PM

Warning: Wrongness ahead.

Some people would give a lot to be in your shoes, Mari.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 25 2009, 03:40 PM

Teehee. Wonderful drawings, as always.

THIS ONLY LOOKS WRONG, INDEED.

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 25 2009, 03:49 PM

*lmao-ed* Epic.

<3<3

Posted by: Shaymin Girl Jul 25 2009, 07:19 PM

LOL this is EPIC xDDD

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 08:19 PM

Nope, totally not a Sharpedo at ALL.

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 25 2009, 08:26 PM

Ditto looks like he enjoys being a censor ._.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 08:29 PM

Well if I was a Ditto I would most certainly enjoy that.

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 25 2009, 08:51 PM

Oright, forgot Ditto is a Whore pokemon that enjoys breeding with everyone....Dear god I hope there won't be any eggs after this...

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 09:25 PM

Do I enjoy making Sharpedo suffer? No, of course not.

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 25 2009, 09:27 PM

40 pages in, wheres that serious point? lulz

One thing I don't get doesn't sharpedo have rough skin?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 25 2009, 09:31 PM

Sharpedo just turned into a person. A person with fins, granted, but a person.

And that's 40 panels, not pages!

Posted by: knil1 Jul 26 2009, 12:47 PM

Well, We do have to take in to consideration that no, the sharpeedo person doesn't have skin, but, A sharpeedo doesn't have genitalia........
Well, it hasn't been recorded........
Maybe it's just really tiny

It's really funny Shiro.
I look forward to your next panels.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 26 2009, 01:22 PM

And when you THINK things might get serious, they don't.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 26 2009, 01:25 PM

-gives the Sharpedo a floatie ring-

rofl. <3
you're right.
Doesn't get serious.

Maybe next time?

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 26 2009, 05:07 PM

I love that spaz...

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 26 2009, 06:12 PM

She loves you too, DLG! ...A little.

WHO COULD THIS BE I HAVE NO IDEA brb nosebleed

Posted by: Connie Jul 26 2009, 06:17 PM

OMG Hot, i want him shiro, give him to me please !!! ?

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 26 2009, 06:26 PM

<3<3<3 XD

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 26 2009, 06:30 PM

WHY DOES THE GROVYLE HAVE CLOTHES?
Though, maybe it's better that way.

Still am liking. <3

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 26 2009, 06:35 PM

ALL SHALL BE EXPLAINED IN DUE TIME.

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 26 2009, 06:35 PM

Why is the Grovyle is colored and the rest is blank, but it's awesome still.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 26 2009, 06:38 PM

I add colors whenever a major character first appears (with the exception of MC). Sharpedo was also in color when he first showed up.

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 26 2009, 06:44 PM

O and are the rest of her pokemon the same pokemon as yours in your party image below your avatars?

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 26 2009, 06:46 PM

I SHALL WAIT OUT THIS TIME.

Posted by: knil1 Jul 26 2009, 07:12 PM

Seems as if a lot of people here have a pokejinka fetish.....

Posted by: ZaphodBeeblebrox Jul 26 2009, 08:20 PM

oh GAWD, the Pikachu "censor" bar did it for me, HILARIOUS.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 26 2009, 10:24 PM

:>





Sharpedo is not allowed to be badass for more than one panel.

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Jul 26 2009, 11:00 PM

Epic jokes = Epic win 8D
And oh my, your art is still as brilliant as ever
Since I'm the first one to reply about the new pages I'll take FULL ADVANTAGE of that
You've made me a fan of Sharpedo I used to think they looked... Well... Rather freakish... But it's all good now And OH, how I love Grovyle and his gijinka form and his whole 'here's-your-bag-why-are-you-glomping-me?' look and his HAIR and and and!!!
Satisfaction = yes
I also lol'd at how, in one panel, there was a Bonsly being the censor bar, then in the next he was a Sudowoodo xD Evolution, to the Max!!

Long post is long and still doesn't explain my enthusiasticness of being able to stalk this comic <3

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 26 2009, 11:20 PM

AWWW Sharpedo gets no love! *loves him*

Posted by: Luminey Jul 27 2009, 12:09 AM

this is so epic!! and what's this? is sharpedo jealous

Posted by: TamamaFox Jul 27 2009, 12:20 AM

Haha Shapedo can't get out of the water!

Posted by: Lady Entei Jul 27 2009, 01:30 AM

OmygoodnessI'msogladyoulinkedtothis<3

This is brilliant, Shirogane. I'm addicted already X3

Posted by: Entity Jul 27 2009, 07:02 AM

*enables Topic Tracking*

Hurrhurr. I'm loving this. xDD Keep up the good work Shiro. =3

Posted by: xGVx Jul 27 2009, 08:33 AM

What?! There's no more?! I wants

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 27 2009, 01:13 PM

Ahaha.
-huggles Sharpedo- Poor him.

<3

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 27 2009, 02:38 PM

Sharpedo finds this topic of discussion to be largely inappropriate.

Also, random colors a la Sei for no reason.

Also, character bios added to the first post~

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 27 2009, 02:44 PM

Heehee.

POOR SHARPEDO HE CAN TOTALLY GET SOME.

edit;;

I AGREE.
He's totally a tsundere. I can tell already. |D

Posted by: Raymond Jul 27 2009, 04:42 PM

Awww, poor sharpedo. I don't particuarly care for the pokemon in general, but the character... oh, oh my, how adorable is he? :*

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 27 2009, 04:45 PM

Goodness gracious. he's so very...

Posted by: Connie Jul 27 2009, 04:47 PM

Omg


i am shocked

Posted by: TamamaFox Jul 27 2009, 05:09 PM

Hahaha he has to wear girl clothes! But then again Sharpedo was a pokemon before it might not make much of a difference to him.... O_o

Posted by: Luminey Jul 27 2009, 05:23 PM

lol only sharpedo can fit in those pants XD

Posted by: Runi Jul 27 2009, 06:32 PM

Oh Dear Heavens. This is amazing. The random panels of colouring are very nice, and i love the character's personalitites. I love your art style~

Sharpedo is the sexiiest Tsundere i've ever seen in my life. Lordy Me





I so don't want to lock both of them in a closet

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 27 2009, 07:10 PM

SUDDENLY NINJAS SRS BZNS

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 27 2009, 07:23 PM

GAH you're a genius!!
XDXDXD

Posted by: Trixxie Jul 27 2009, 07:50 PM

+1 dead fish crazy stalkers

Shiro, your works are absolutely amazing. This may have become my new favorite comic series. And that Sharpedo kinda helped too.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 27 2009, 11:25 PM

Annnd that concludes the opening "chapter". So now, extras!



And that's it for today! The next chapter's first couple of panels will be posted tomorrow~ I said everything I wanted in extra #2, but just to reiterate - thanks everyone for reading! It's only because you guys gave such an awesomely positive response that we're continuing these comics. :>

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 27 2009, 11:31 PM

-was not here for the update-
OHMY.
Girly clothes are best.

AND SRS BSNS, JA.
nooo don't eliminate him. D.!

-huggles Sharpedo-
I'll take him if Grovyle doesn't let him have Mari.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 27 2009, 11:47 PM

Sharpedo's fine and all, but...


...I want Grovyle D.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 27 2009, 11:51 PM

p.s.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 27 2009, 11:55 PM

Niiice. <3

Too bad Seiii's isn't as popular. .___. It's just as good.

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 27 2009, 11:58 PM

ROFLMAO


"if he tries anything... I'll have to" Pause "ELIMINATE HIM"

Omai. Jealous Grovyle
Love interest with your Pokemon. Yay the world has come to it!!

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 12:04 AM

It's not that it isn't as popular - she makes more detailed panels, so it takes longer to update. This topic's been around a day longer, and I have about 50 more panels than she does. Tons of updates = more pages to read through = more views per visitor.

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 28 2009, 12:07 AM

Am I the only one who noticed the pokemon in #0080 are the ones that served as coverage for Sharpedo???
Then again that quite possibly could also just mean that I'm a pervert. XD

XD I thought that was hilarious <3
I love your art Shirogane!!
I am officially dubbing myself a Shirogane Fan!!

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 28 2009, 12:14 AM

I'm a Sharpedo fangirl. He's a hothead and most likely the one that Mari will be closer too.

uses bite!

=

Mari: Yayyyy

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 12:48 AM

And for the record

To be answered in the next chapter:

- What's this about being "lost in time"?
- How the hell does she fit all that stuff in such a tiny bag?
and
- WHAT HAPPENED TO THE POOR DEAD FISH

terrible questions that torment your confused minds, I'm sure.

Posted by: Hikki Jul 28 2009, 02:09 AM

I've... fallen in love... with your comic. Mari is so cute it's painful.

I really really like it, the styles change just enough back and forth that they are fantastic.

Posted by: Azuform Jul 28 2009, 05:54 AM

I really like the jokes you used! Sharpedo is hillarious!

And I really like the story till now.

The art is good as usual. =D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Posted by: DarkLord Guy Jul 28 2009, 05:59 AM

The bigger question I think most of the fans on this thread want to know the answer to is, when does Grovyle's shirt come off?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 01:25 PM

THERE IS NO ANSWER TO SUCH A QUESTION.

Posted by: Ruusu Jul 28 2009, 01:43 PM

That was a good point, Darklord. *giggle* Thought I'm more of Sharpedo fan for now. He's the evil guy after all? So exciting! ´w`
Things are coming more clear now. owo I can't wait to see more.~

Posted by: Runi Jul 28 2009, 02:38 PM

Sharpedo hasn't been clothed yet, so i'm happy i feel bad for him

Seiii's panels are VERY pretty though. It's just the matter that you have more.

Sharpedo was fishstick'd. At least he will be, if the fangirls get to him.




ELIMINATED. Most epic one i've seen in a while. 8D

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 28 2009, 02:39 PM

Awww. Frozen fish sticks. :c

-gives Sharpedo a blanket-

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 02:47 PM

Um, yes. I never said otherwise. Her panels take longer to make, so she has fewer - I have more views because I update more often. That's all there is to it.

FTR, I like her panels better. I don't have the patience to detail/fix/color all of mine, and if I don't keep my end of the story moving faster, I'll lose interest (I know myself).

Please don't compare us, though - it makes me, at least, uncomfortable. As if we're supposed to be competing, when they're actually complimentary comics. It's a joint project, we just go about it in our preferred styles.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 28 2009, 03:05 PM

FISHSTICKS.


Okay I retract my previous comment can I take both of them home? Please? I PROMISE I'LL FEED THEM AND KEEP THEM AWAY FROM SCARY PEOPLE.



Ilovethiscomic .D

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 04:25 PM

I'm not sure what exactly I was on.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 28 2009, 04:53 PM

MY GROVYLE SENSES ARE TINGLING.

I'm not sure what you were on either rofl.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 28 2009, 04:58 PM

WHatever you were on, I want some

Posted by: Lino Ludocx Kaito Jul 28 2009, 05:07 PM

epic epic epic

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 28 2009, 05:09 PM

Nice add for the S-caps.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 06:57 PM

I wonder what he could possibly mean by "funny".

Posted by: Lino Ludocx Kaito Jul 28 2009, 07:00 PM

lol that one was rofl

Posted by: xGVx Jul 28 2009, 07:22 PM

I want a team full of whatever she is

And yes all of those emoticons describe how much I love her

Posted by: Mercurii Jul 28 2009, 07:36 PM

Geez. For some reason I can't exactly grasp who the gal is. An Absol? *thinks about Seiii's Absol... not terribly alike ^^;*

Great comic, sooo funny! Meh loves Sharpedo. And wonders what Grovyle is up to... jealous much? XD

Posted by: RedRising24 Jul 28 2009, 07:36 PM

I really like this comic thus far. It's cute, funny, and just plain terrific. You're a fantastic artist, and your sense of humor is terrific. I'm interested to see who that new female Poke-person is. And to see why Grovlye is acting so weird. >>

I'm eagerly awaiting your next update.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 28 2009, 08:13 PM

That Umbreon puts every other Umbreon gijinka I've ever seen to shame. And possibly has Cute Charm from the way Sharpedo's acting XD

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 08:49 PM

Nope, not an Umbreon!



Umbreons can ever only dream of being this badass.

(Hint: Evolves from a Reaper's Cloth.)

Posted by: auron779 Jul 28 2009, 08:56 PM

I don't read much at all... But this is intriguing, and has lots of funnys... Me wants more... T^T But I also wants sleep... So night-night... <3

Well... Wasn't expecting that... Very sinister indeed. o.O

Pokeman battlez?

*Goes back to sleeping*

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 28 2009, 08:56 PM

Bwahhaha I KNOW WHAT POKEMON IT IS. But I'm not telling. Its more fun when people figure it out themselves!! n____________________n

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 28 2009, 08:57 PM

Not an Umbreon, evolves with a Reaper's cloth...Is about to hurt Grovyle...


Dusknoir? D. *dislikes them greatly after PMD:2*

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 28 2009, 08:58 PM

Mismagius? o.o no thats more purple.... DX

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 09:01 PM

Ha! Correct. And you got the PMD2 reference too. |Dbb

Posted by: TamamaFox Jul 28 2009, 09:02 PM

Ooooh I see what pokemon it is now =D. I didn't know that certain pokemon could steal your soul I thought that was Shednija O_o

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 28 2009, 09:03 PM

ROFL. 'Is it suddenly... hot in here?'

Dusknoir: I WILL DEVOUR YOUR SOUL OMNOM NOM

Posted by: CheckeredPenguin Jul 28 2009, 09:07 PM

Wha-? There's more? Haha it's so hilarious and its getting even more interesting. Can't wait to read more. ^^
You know? i was thiinking of PMD2 since I saw Grovyle. I wasn't really thinking anything just got reminded is all. xD

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 28 2009, 09:12 PM

rofl I love Sharpedo. <3

SRSBSNSTIEMNAO.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 28 2009, 09:29 PM

Yay!

And I loved PMD:2 which is where my love for Grovyle came from. I hated Dusknoir long before then - it looks weird - but that game just intesified my hate >.c

Posted by: RedRising24 Jul 28 2009, 10:13 PM

Wow, I leave for an hour or so and you update and there are a ton of replies. XD

I love the idea of a Dusknoir woman, and she's incredibly badass to boot. I'm just wondering how she knows Groyvle; me thinks that there is an interesting back story there, no?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 28 2009, 10:44 PM

I'd like to reiterate how awesome you guys and your feedback is. I was just telling Sei we know now what keeps professional artists and writers going in spite of the grueling work: reader feedback.

Knowing people are reading and liking it makes such a huge difference. I've even started to spend a bit more time on each panel - when I usually don't have the patience.

Thanks so much for reading and letting us know what you think with each update, guys. It means a ton to us.

O SNAP.

Posted by: Raymond Jul 28 2009, 10:44 PM

That dusknior... I think she could knock them out without using any special powers... just her breasts.

Posted by: Airian Jul 28 2009, 10:49 PM

RAYMOND! >: O

P-pffft, I think it's true....

Sh-Shirogane, I really admire yoouuu~~ :"D I never said so before because I don't want to sound like I'm sucking up... but... it's truuuee and I just can't hide it anymore. I really love your art. :"D

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 29 2009, 02:38 AM

Enemy DUSKNOIR used BREAST ATTACK against SHARPEDO!
Oh no! Critical hit!
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!!


I can barely wait for this to upload D. THE ONLY OTHER THING THAT MAKES ME THIS EXCITED IS SHARK WEEK. YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY A GOD OF SOME SORT.

Posted by: Entity Jul 29 2009, 07:49 AM

Dusknoir~<3 Too bad one of my favourite Pokemon is a complete psycho beyotch here. I'm likin' it though. Can't wait to see what happens next. Awesome job Shiro. =3

Posted by: Runi Jul 29 2009, 09:05 AM

Sharpedo is amazing. <3
Yes, it's now very hot. Towel man FTW

Such a purdy Dusknoir. And epic Grovyleness toooo~

OSHI MAN SHE WANTS TO EAT YOU. THINGS DISSAPEAR IN BETWEEN THOSE BEWBS.

And Shiro, sorry if you thought i was trying to compair you and Seiii. You guys are both amazing in your own right (:

Posted by: xGVx Jul 29 2009, 09:20 AM

I want Dusknoir to take my soul

Posted by: Luminey Jul 29 2009, 10:47 AM

NOM NOM NOM i'm gunna eat your soul >:E

Posted by: Pumpkin King Jul 29 2009, 11:04 AM

The King of Halloween has arrived and absolutely loves your work! I just started reading it yesterday, but I'm hooked. It's amazing! I'd say Sharpedo's my favorite character so far. He certainly makes the story very comical. Great job!

Posted by: Tora31 Jul 29 2009, 12:08 PM

This comic's gettin epic <3 It's awesome and funny!

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 29 2009, 12:18 PM

-gasps!-
NOOO. MARI WAS A LIKABLE GIRL. SHE CAN'T DIE. D.!

-puts Sharpedo on a leash and gives the leash to Grovyle- There.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 29 2009, 02:35 PM

I HAVE COLLECTED ALL STARS OF DESTINY. (cookie points to whoever gets the reference)

I would not want to make Dusknoir mad. Ever.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 29 2009, 02:40 PM

OH NOES


Epic Grovyle&Sharpedo vs Dusknoir fight?

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 29 2009, 02:49 PM

SCARY FACE IS SCARY.

eee, yes, he is going somewhere kthx.

Posted by: Entity Jul 29 2009, 02:53 PM

OHNOEZ! She's gonna OM NOM NOM them all! Also, getting dirty ideas over where those eyes used to be... Bewbs like that don't just disappear into thin air.

Posted by: Luminey Jul 29 2009, 03:21 PM

wow i love this so much. i can't wait to see Side A and Side B collide!!

Posted by: xGVx Jul 29 2009, 03:27 PM

I agree with you 100%

Posted by: Lady Entei Jul 29 2009, 03:35 PM

I love this comic :'D It's funny and exciting and ... awesome 'n stuff XD Keep up the good work Shirogane

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 29 2009, 04:08 PM

Hmm where have I seen this Houndoom before.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 29 2009, 04:11 PM

Uh oh it's Pedodoom from Side B D.


...Looks like he got kicked in the face. XD

Posted by: Simplyy Jul 29 2009, 04:13 PM

Waiiit O:
Now i'm confused. So Dusknoir is his master? o.e

Well that's understandable, since her boobs shredded like cheese would be an aphrodisiac.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 29 2009, 06:05 PM

...Remind me to not piss Grovyle off, either.

Posted by: Tora31 Jul 29 2009, 06:13 PM

Poor Sharpedo xD and I think i'm liking Grovyle as the pokemon more

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 29 2009, 06:14 PM

BUTBUT. why are Grovyle's eyes two different colours? o:

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 29 2009, 06:19 PM

IT IS A MYSTERIOUS MYSTERY.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 29 2009, 06:23 PM

HE HAS HETEROCHROMATIA, OBVIOUSLY.


asdfghjkl; SEE. THIS IS WHY I LOVE GROVYLE. YOU, SHIRO, ARE AWESOME IN WAYS NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 29 2009, 07:46 PM

OOOH. IS HE MAGICKS?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 29 2009, 07:51 PM

Puppy noooooo

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 29 2009, 08:00 PM

NOT PUPPY D.



I loves teh Houndooms .c

Posted by: Luminey Jul 29 2009, 08:07 PM

oooooh i think i get it now! Grovoyle is using Hidden Power which is Fire, right?

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 29 2009, 08:09 PM

Grovyle makes makes my face go like this ------>

Posted by: Lady Entei Jul 29 2009, 08:28 PM

But if it was Hidden Power, wouldn't it be water? Fire vs. fire isn't very effective, after all X3

edit: Ever since a panel back down the line, I've gotten the feeling that Grovyle isn't the good guy >>;

Posted by: L00N3Y Jul 29 2009, 08:35 PM

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 29 2009, 09:03 PM

I agree with Entei. D. I DUN THINK HE'S SUPER GEWD ANYMOAR GAIZES.

And poor puppy. :c

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 29 2009, 09:03 PM

Trade off. Person for a Person! Yay. Epic.

Posted by: Pikalover10 Jul 29 2009, 10:24 PM

I MUST have Dusknoir's... thingies! I'm a perv and I know it, but I don't care! I LOVE this Shirogane! Now, off to begin side B!

Posted by: CheckeredPenguin Jul 29 2009, 10:38 PM

More interestingness! Oh my! This is absolutely great. I love your style so much. And the way you put emotion into the characters is amazing. ^^

B-But Grovyle is protecting her so he can't be that bad right? xD

Posted by: ShadowCat13 Jul 29 2009, 10:42 PM

I can't believe I didn't notice this earlier... It's great!! Poor Houndoom Houndoom are one of my favorite pokemon. The more I read the more I wonder if Grovyle's a good guy or bad guy.

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Jul 30 2009, 02:08 AM

I know you know I know I know yet you know I know you know...
Wahh!! So confusing!! xD
It's a brain twister. And it's kinda funny, when Grovyle says it

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 30 2009, 01:36 PM

SURPRISE LEAF STORM



Yes, Houndoom did fall face first on the objects of xGVx's desire.

Posted by: Connie Jul 30 2009, 01:40 PM

I want to be her just so he can fall on me

I am jealous of your talent *flails* share it shiro.

Cloaked figure?

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 30 2009, 01:44 PM

I wonder if the cloak figure is a grass type? If it is I want to be that grass type. Weeeee!

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Jul 30 2009, 01:44 PM

I'm falling for Grovyle <3
Mhhhm *dowant*

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 30 2009, 03:17 PM

Tips for drawing portals:

- Make it big
- Make it blue
- Make it shiny

No matter how strange the result is, it'll obviously be a portal.

Obviously.

Posted by: L00N3Y Jul 30 2009, 03:41 PM

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 30 2009, 04:18 PM

So much for srs bzns badass epic battles.

Posted by: Pikalover10 Jul 30 2009, 04:29 PM

LOL! OMG! I STILL love this Shirogane. Keep up the good work!

Posted by: Runi Jul 30 2009, 04:41 PM

Grovyle has the badass.

That portal has the epic smell of lazinessWIN. AS DOES PUPPY.

...Sharpedobear was knocked out the whole time?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 30 2009, 04:51 PM

It is an amazingly detailed portal. I am quite proud of my craftsmanship.

He called Dusknoir an old hag. That's enough to kill a thousand men where they stand.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 30 2009, 05:12 PM

WAITwaitwait A PORTAL.

HMM.


I smell either a certain Dialga or a certain Celebi in the future, although I may be wrong...

*furiously finishes Darkness before Sky comes out&

Posted by: Luminey Jul 30 2009, 06:26 PM

do i sense a teleport beign used?

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 30 2009, 07:52 PM

And someone finally asks the quintessential question.

WHAT IS GOING ON?!

Posted by: Megchan Jul 30 2009, 07:53 PM

Oooo, I think I figured out where Grovlye got the clothes...He got them from Azalea, right?!

I'm absolutely loving this comic as well as Side B, keep up the great work Shirogane!

Posted by: xXseleneXx Jul 30 2009, 07:56 PM

*is dying to know as well!!* =DD
I cant stop checking this thread for updates mulitple times a day XD

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 30 2009, 07:57 PM

OH DEAR.


WHAT COULD POSSIBLY BE HAPPENING?


But really, I'm curious as to where this is headed. I'm also seeing quite a few parallels between this and PMD:2 but I may be looking into things too much P.


Keep up the great work~

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 30 2009, 08:49 PM

It's time for Grovyle to reveal his secret from his trainer. Sweet for Mari, but not sweet for the Grovyle. Nice drawings Shirogane, you're awesome.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 12:13 AM

Let it be said that DLG's (and the board's) question is answered.



A NEW CHALLENGER APPEARS wait where did those glasses come from

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 31 2009, 12:17 AM

HE MAGICKED THEM ONTO HIS FACE.


Hurr I'm liking where this is going XD Can't wait to see what other Pokemon join the group~


For some weird reason I'm starting to like the Abra line, which I've enevr been a fan of before. YOU AND YOUR DASTARDLY TRICKS AND USAGE OF PRETTY MEN.

Posted by: knil1 Jul 31 2009, 12:17 AM

Aww. He looks so intellectual
I love this comic (I know I don't sound much different from everyone else)

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Jul 31 2009, 01:41 AM

Amazing page! Simply glorious! Beautiful beyond compare!!
Yet there's a problem here...
...
The leaf's in the way

Posted by: L00N3Y Jul 31 2009, 02:32 AM

Posted by: xGVx Jul 31 2009, 06:54 AM

Oh noes! Puppy fell on MY pillows!!!! D=< I keel you puppy...this means war!!!!!!


As for Kadabra...awesome glasses, I need new ones so I'll take his >=D

Dusknoir 4ver!!!!!

Posted by: Luminey Jul 31 2009, 09:16 AM

lol kadabra looks like he has a fluffy kitty tail

Posted by: Megchan Jul 31 2009, 10:06 AM

Kadabra... Me likey. 83 Love how you did his ears and tail(so fluffy..). X3

Atleast Kadabra had some consideration to try to cover up. Heh.

Posted by: Pikalover10 Jul 31 2009, 10:26 AM

LOL! Kadabra looks awesome! I STILL love this comic, and oh... so Sharpedo gets a Pichu sign, but Kadabra gets a LEAF!? Favoratism!

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 11:03 AM

I transcribed Kadabra's answer:

"Indeed, it is a simple answer. You see, when you ventured into the time machine crafted by your father (ingeniously so, if I may add), we were in the past, traveling to the future. Therefore, it is to be expected that our existence is known in said future. Put simply, time did not fast-forward, it was us who "skipped" several years in the process. Thus, though we went missing in the past, people did not simply "forget" our existence. And since the time machine required a date input, they would not merely know who and what disappeared, but also exactly (or rather approximately, given there seems to have been a small problem in the process) when to expect us. Naturally, the location coordinates should also have given them an exact place, but given how we scattered the approximation principle applies. All that said, it does not explain this mysterious transformation, nor does it explain exactly where the process went wrong. This is all speculation on my part but I believe the transformation is not a direct consequence of the mishap that caused the temporal and spatial inconsistencies, but rather a result of something that trespassed during the time interval between our departure from the past and our arrival here. Though-"

It is all quite simple. He's not sure why you felt the need to ask.

Posted by: TamamaFox Jul 31 2009, 11:16 AM

Awww kadabra looks so cute =D. So they went into the future? So maybe pokemon don't exist in the future!

Posted by: Pikalover10 Jul 31 2009, 11:32 AM

aaaaahhhhh. my head....

Posted by: Emma Uchiha Jul 31 2009, 12:31 PM

Kadabra's freakin' hot... *Makes grabby hands* Er.... Maybe AFTER he puts some pants on I'll make these... *Puts hands down* xD AND HE'S SMART, TOO.


^^ Can't help but bounce up and down with anticipation for the next one. I'm thinking it's gonna be awesomeness!

Posted by: Leafears5838 Jul 31 2009, 12:35 PM

Too much info. Big and short words for one person hurts. My head!

Posted by: Luminey Jul 31 2009, 12:59 PM

i'm with mari. 'ow my head'

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 31 2009, 01:05 PM

...That surprisingly made sense. I think I've hit my head a time too many...


Can we just keep Kadabra without his pants~?

Posted by: xGVx Jul 31 2009, 01:53 PM

I vote we get rid of all the clothes

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 02:26 PM

...I vote we all take a cold shower.

MEANWHILE, ELSEWHERE

And this MYSTERY CLOAKED PERSON is painfully obvious now. This concludes Chapter 2! Extras next~

Posted by: xGVx Jul 31 2009, 02:35 PM

Celebi!!!!!!!!!!!! How cute!!!!

No cold showers, no clothes!!!!

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 31 2009, 02:37 PM

PFFFFFFFFFFF I KNEW A CELEBI WAS GONNA POP UP. But he's not pink D.


*sits and waits for Chapter 2*

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Jul 31 2009, 03:35 PM

OMG CELEBI IS BAD! XD

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 03:49 PM

158 aside, I don't think I can pick a favorite. ...For varying reasons.

Posted by: xGVx Jul 31 2009, 03:54 PM

Can't wait for the next installment Shiro!

Posted by: Runi Jul 31 2009, 06:00 PM

Kadabra is now smex. Ears and Tail all the more.
'I get the urge to push them up. It is quite puzzling'.
Live with it. Maybe that will distract you enough to not put on clothes.

I understood what he was saying, though. 0.0

And of course, even less clothes for Sharpedo.

That Celebi. Is the furking. Cutest i've ever seen. Oh. Dear. Lord.
The guyliner certainly helps though.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 07:20 PM

OK folks I am super tired for no good reason and will call it a night earlier today~ So expect Chapter 3 to start tomorrow.

I LIED AND NEVER EXPLAINED THE DEAD FISH UM. IT'LL COME BACK EVENTUALLY. I PROMISE.

For now enjoy towel!Sharpedo stretching sexily, and Grovyle's new beautiful hat.

Posted by: xGVx Jul 31 2009, 07:39 PM

Don't forget Dusknoir's pillows!!!!

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 31 2009, 08:21 PM

I actually don't like Celebi, the way you portrayed him. Though, I've never liked Celebi. No offense to you.

-sits on Kadabra's head- I like men with glasses he's now officially my favourite none shall pass.

edit;;BUT WHERE IS HIS SPOON? You should make it a spork.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 08:35 PM

Happened to check the thread before crashing - I'm curious, what precisely about it don't you like? TBH, I don't like Celebi's design as far as human-ifying it is concerned - I'm not fond of the hair pointing up like that, but that's pretty much spot-on for Celebi, along with the rest (small frame, big blue eyes, antennae, black outline around the eyes) EXCEPT for the side bangs, which I added to mostly make the hair more tolerable to draw. I'm open to suggestions, though.

There is no spoon. BUT IF THERE WERE, IT COULD BE NOTHING BUT A SPOON. Uri Geller reference ftw.

Edit: Unless this is about the personality idk I'm sleepy zzzz.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 31 2009, 08:46 PM

HETEROCHROMATIA SHIRT = WIN

Aw, I like the way she drew Celebi .C Mind you, I can't stand the little bugger (except in PMD:2, but that's just cause her crush on Grovyle is hilarious), but the Pokejinka design is pretty cool.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 31 2009, 08:46 PM

I'm...not exactly sure. It does resemble Celebi, almost exactly. I believe, though, you put too much eyeliner on him. It was...er, a bit too much for my liking. A bit is nice, to me, but that was just too much. I would suggest making it lighter, because it gives too much contrast as plain black. A dark shade of grey would be nice.

AND AWW I WANT A SPOON. ohwell.

Also, good night~ rofl.

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 08:56 PM

rofl the "eyeliner" was an afterthought. I was like WHAT AM I MISSI oh there's a dark outline around its eyes ho-hm.

It is, however, http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/251.png as drawn. Celebi just looks weird, man.

...But not as weird as Probopass. /makes note to NEVER INCLUDE ANY PROBOPASSES IN THIS STORY.

MAYBE THE SPOON MAGICALLY TRANSFORMED INTO GLASSES. How can you say you want it back to a spoon now huh huh

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 31 2009, 09:01 PM

I agree. Celebi does look weird.

Probopass =/= win. I WILL STOP READING IF YOU PUT ONE IN no pressure.

...
Nej, I don't want a spoon anymore. ;_;

Posted by: Shirogane Jul 31 2009, 09:04 PM

But it can travel through time and I needed that plot device OOPS DID I JUST SAY THAT.

if i ever put one in it'd be to make fun of its design i'm sure. THEN I'D WEEP BLOOD.

I knew you would understand. |D

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Jul 31 2009, 09:06 PM

Weeping blood =/= not good. D.

OOPS YOU JUST SAID THAT now I have theories.

|D Totally. You should put spoon-shaped designs on the frames rofl.

-shoves in bed- WE NEED YOU FRESH TOMORROW NEW CHAPTER GOOOO night.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Jul 31 2009, 09:54 PM

WEEPING BLOOD IS BAD. But a Probopass is worse, those things scare me on a such a deep level D.


I forgot entirely about Kadabra's spoon, but he looks good with just the glasses. And the leaf.

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Aug 1 2009, 01:39 AM

I missed so many updates!!!
And after frantically reading them (while drooling over a certain, smexily-stretching Pokejinka) I have come to my conclusion of this matter...
Celebi is pwn. With cuteness, siding with the bad guys (for once :P) and his hair <3 I love his hair very much, thx
Oh yes, I forgot to mention. This Celebi is officially mine now. I claim him. Period. *kidnaps* -w-

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 1 2009, 09:07 AM

I OVERSLEPT good morning GTS+

Posted by: Leafears5838 Aug 1 2009, 09:24 AM

Hahahahah*smiley will continue laughing for me* . That was funny, using animal biology or something on Sharpedo.Hahahah.

Posted by: Megchan Aug 1 2009, 10:05 AM

I just figured out what Kadabra's tail reminds me of...a fox!


Shirogane, I'm curious as to whether or not Mari will have any female Pokemon...Not that I don't mind all the male hottness! I just think that would be an interesting(and by interesting I mean funny) moment when she's found...

Posted by: Pumpkin King Aug 1 2009, 10:18 AM

For Kadabra, I post http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kw1fweV-Oqg&feature=related I thought it was appropriate. Though the entire episode is very enjoyable, only 3:20-3:45 really pertains to Kadabra, more specifically 3:40-3:45.

EDIT: Once again, great job!

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 1 2009, 12:03 PM

I thought a shark was a mammal not a fish owo

Anyway its awesome! I now luff all three guys now *Snuggles up to grovyle,sharpedo,and kadabra* *Stares at kadabra* o.e *Backs away to just grovyle and sharpedo* GET A TOWEL ALREADY KADABRA! XD

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 1 2009, 12:13 PM

Good morning Shiro I OVERSLEPT TOO.

Haha. XD Kadabra amuses me greatly. I think he will now, and forever, continue to amuse me.

I love how he's still holding the leaf. XD!

Posted by: Seiiii Aug 1 2009, 12:17 PM

Me and my silly knowledge.

No, they are fish. They lay (or rather, store) eggs.

Posted by: xGVx Aug 1 2009, 12:23 PM

Kadabra's smarticles reminds me of myself

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 1 2009, 01:20 PM

He insulted a shark D.


Er, anyways. *sets up camp outside the thread* WHO WANTS SMORES.

Posted by: Raymond Aug 1 2009, 01:21 PM

Some actually do lay eggs. There are two different kinds of sharks. Oviparous and viviparous. The others do store them within their body, though.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 1 2009, 01:30 PM

-raises hand-
Who else imagines Kadabra talking in a British voice?
|D

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 1 2009, 01:33 PM

*Hides behind grovyle* Sorry Sei I be stupid! *Grovyle stares at me like i'm an idiot* owo

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 1 2009, 01:44 PM

Kadabra always seemed very fox-like to me. :O

I can tell you she has at least one female Pokemon. But! Azalea has like a shitton of female pokes, so Mari has a shitton of males to compensate. |Db






HMM


@Lafayette

I have always imagined him with a British accent. |D

Posted by: TamamaFox Aug 1 2009, 01:44 PM

ME!!!! *steal smores* MINE YOU CAN'T HAVE ANY!!!

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 1 2009, 01:58 PM

YAY more British Pokemon~ *cuddles Kadabra*

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 1 2009, 02:04 PM

ksjfdWHO IS HE DRESSING?

@Shiro;;I always imagine really smart text to be in British-y talk. XD It's good to know that you also imagine him with British. ;D

edit;;
@Nezzie;;[/b]PFFT NO. -steals back- You can have Sharpedo, but I HAVE CLAIMED KADABRA. Starting now.

Posted by: LiquidStar Aug 1 2009, 02:17 PM

*squeals* This story is the epitome of awesome! Can't wait till the next chappie comes out!

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 1 2009, 02:17 PM

FINE HAVE HIM. I'll just talk to myself. Alone. BECAUSE WITH NATE GONE I'M THE ONLY BRITSH PERSON I KNOW IN AMERICA [/sob]

*cuddles Sharpdeo and force-feeds him smores*


...Wait who gets Grovyle.

Posted by: Runi Aug 1 2009, 03:13 PM

BRIT INVASION. I agree with Lafy and Shiro~

I...Is Kadabra getting the clothes? I can't tell. ):

ANOTHER MYSTERIOUSMYSTERY. Another question would be where Celebi gets enough guyliner to do lines that thick

Grovyle will get love. It just takes time~

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 1 2009, 03:30 PM

@Runi

It's tattooed on his skin. Like Sharpedo's and Dusknoir's body markings.

WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN

(see my active team to understand why Mari is so shocked.)

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 1 2009, 03:36 PM

MAGIKARP


HELL


YES



Although the Buneary hoodie is making me go ARGH. I hate Bunearies >.C

Posted by: Raymond Aug 1 2009, 03:38 PM

OK, BEFORE ANYONE SAYS ANYTHING ELSE, THAT LITTLE MAGIKARP NOW BELONGS TO ME. I AM GOING TO CUDDLE HIM AND HUG HIM AND SQUEEZE HIM UNTIL HE TURNS INT A GYARADOS AND TRIES TO EAT ME. AWWWWWW

*oh my gosh... I might as well been keysmashing. I was so excited. ; o ;*

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 1 2009, 03:44 PM

"Who gets grovyle?"

I DO! I claim him! <333

THIS ISH AWESOME SHIRO CAN'T WAIT FOR MOAR!



Um Raymond? I think teh Magikarp is a girl *Magikarp looks feminine*

Posted by: Airian Aug 1 2009, 03:47 PM

... I... I like Grovyle... b..but... .... THAT MAGIKARP IS SO CUUUUTEE. AWW. Now I'm going to have to catch every Magikarp I encounter in Diamond. See what you've done?!

Posted by: Sprite Mixer Aug 1 2009, 04:05 PM

Who was that girl? Was it a magicarp?

Posted by: xXseleneXx Aug 1 2009, 04:10 PM

I was going to claim Grovyle but Rowan beat me to him

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 1 2009, 04:16 PM

Yay I gets Grovyle! XD *Dances around with him*

Posted by: Runi Aug 1 2009, 04:31 PM

Shiro: Ah. It makes sense now. (:

Gender confused Magikarp is adorable. Bunny hood and all.

Mari's expression is just so epic though.

Posted by: xGVx Aug 1 2009, 04:40 PM

Magikarp = bishounen/bishoujo

Whichever one it is...it is mine! Magikarp is mine!!!!! And I don't share!!!!!


Dusknoir is mine too! AND her pillows!

Posted by: Leafears5838 Aug 1 2009, 04:50 PM

That Magikarp looks so cute in so many ways with the Bunery coat. Ahhhhh.

Posted by: Megchan Aug 1 2009, 05:04 PM

Really? Hmm, never really saw Kadabra, until now, as fox-like. =^^=;;

LoL, gotcha ya. =^-^=


Magikarp is soooo cute! LoL, Buneary hoodie. Don't let Luxray see Magikarp in that! XD

Magikarp could almost pull off looking like Entei. =^^=;;

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 1 2009, 05:55 PM

THANKS BUT NO THANKS

Posted by: Trainer Gwyn Aug 1 2009, 06:11 PM

I go away for a week then come back to all this sexiness?! It's too much, I tell you! *dies a blissful, blissful death*

Also, love the story so far, although I'm not sure who/what is "bad", "good", or "neutral" really.

Posted by: Megchan Aug 1 2009, 06:45 PM

Wait...when did Sharpedo wander off...? The last time we saw him in chapter 2 he was knocked out...

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 1 2009, 07:13 PM

@Megchan

Why don't you try...

You can now ask Kadabra your questions! Every couple of pages I will post another Ask Kadabra episode with reader questions. Note his answers might just be completely useless.

(to answer yours, though, Sharpedo woke up when Mari asked Grovyle what was going on, and snuck out unseen between that and her starting to treat Grovyle's wounds.)

Edit @ Pumpkin King

Late, but pfff the spoon comment. I lol'd.

Posted by: Runi Aug 1 2009, 07:16 PM

I KNOW THAT LINE.

BUGS BUNNY. THAT YETI DUDE.

I ALWAYS WANTED MY VERY OWN BUNNY RABBIT. I WILL HUG YOU AND LOVE YOU AND SQUEEZE YOU AND CALL YOU GEORGE.

Or something like that. >.>

Kadabra was shot down. Sharpedo was being nice. Magi's just adorable. Fwiiiiii~

And whoever claimed Grovyle, he's knocked out. Here's your chance.



EDIT: Shiro posts faster than me
This makes me love Kadabra even more.

Posted by: Megchan Aug 1 2009, 07:44 PM

LoL T-that was so funny! Remind me never to ask Kadabra a question. XD

And thank you for clearing that question up for me. =^w^=

Posted by: Trainer Gwyn Aug 1 2009, 08:08 PM

Kadabra = Favorite Character. I simply LOVE the nerdy type with glasses that go on and on and on. <3

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 1 2009, 09:02 PM

PFF.

May I ask Kadabra a question~?


How is that blanket staying around Sharpedo's waist? Magic?

Posted by: TamamaFox Aug 1 2009, 09:21 PM

*GASP* you too?

Posted by: Trainer Gwyn Aug 1 2009, 09:33 PM

Yes! Let us now bask in his Nerdy Awesomeness together! <3

Posted by: TamamaFox Aug 1 2009, 09:55 PM

Yes lets! *Basks* Er shouldn't we get him some clothes now?

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 1 2009, 10:46 PM

...
-runs off with Kadabra whilst everyone stares at the new!Magikarp-

Tamama och Gwyn. I already claimed him. |D You can't even speak his name.

Kadabra reminds me of myself.
"THE CAMERA IS OFF CENTRE FIX IT"
yes, that'd be me. I also like to answer questions in the form of rants.

Posted by: TamamaFox Aug 1 2009, 11:43 PM

No he is MINE! RAWR!! *attacks Marquis*

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 2 2009, 05:06 AM

*Snuggles up to Grovyle* <3~

Can't wait for more Shiro!~

(Teh magikarp is cute too~)

Posted by: xGVx Aug 2 2009, 10:38 AM

This is a reminder to all...

MAGIKARP IS MINE!

That is all...


PS. Ask Kadabra is very enlightening X3

Posted by: Airian Aug 2 2009, 12:47 PM

I almost had a question, but I'm not sure Kadabra would really have a helpful answer... plus, I forgot what it was anyway. Kadabra's kind of intimidating. I can't imagine being able to listen to someone talk non-stop for that long. He must have a spectacular set of lungs.

Actually, you were a little too late to lay that claim. Raymond beat you to it.

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 12:59 PM

Osht. I still love Sharpedo the best. Now I have to get a Kadabra, evolve my duskclops into dusknoir, get treeko to grovyle. And thats it Oh yeah, get a luxray o3o

Im making a Reversed side a-b pokedex on GPX+


Dear Kadabra,
Why does Dusknoir have weird clothing when everyone else's is casual. [Hers is more like battle armor.]



^ .___. ^

I've always wondered why :'D

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 2 2009, 02:35 PM

@Simplyy

That makes me all kinds of geeky proud. :'D

FINALLY AN UPDATE TODAY.

THIS STUPID SOLDIER TOOK ME FOREVER, GOD. And he still came out shitty, with his shittily drawn M-14 because I was too lazy to look up more refs for this kind of model and the nozzle wasn't fully shown in the picture I had. Stupid shittily drawn rifle. 8|!!!!

Posted by: xXseleneXx Aug 2 2009, 02:38 PM

*le gasp!* THE PLOT THICKENS!!! =O

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 03:03 PM

I know what you mean

Posted by: dark thunder Aug 2 2009, 03:19 PM

lol, who cares if it the rifle doesnt look that great. just say its a grenade launcher
it doesnt actually look that bad either. the scope looks cool to me especially since i cant draw that well for the life of me.

lol, theese things are AWSOME!!

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 2 2009, 04:00 PM

/plays Beethoven music

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 04:03 PM

OH NOOOO!!!



*Bends gun*
DONT YOU TOUCH SHARPEDO *ARGLESNARFLE*

Posted by: xXseleneXx Aug 2 2009, 04:04 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOO!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?! D=

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 2 2009, 04:05 PM

WHAT

NO

NO

BAD SNIPER



...if Sharpedo's hurt I am going to BAAAAW. D.

Posted by: dark thunder Aug 2 2009, 04:51 PM

this is one of those moments where i wish the thing that usually happens in the naruto happens. sniper shoots him, moves to next target, but in his scope he sees theese red eyes and he gets fricken powned no matter how many times he shoots the person, and then he goes to hell.
that is if he actually shot somone. DUNDUHDUUUUH!!!

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 2 2009, 05:15 PM

A TRUE HERO

(unlike Sharpedo who almost became an hero.)

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 05:16 PM

Yay Kadabra
You rawk.

Also: That scene suddenly reminded me of the matrix.

Posted by: HydroForce Aug 2 2009, 05:29 PM

YYAAAYY KADABRA
...
This comic is SO epic ^^

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 2 2009, 05:49 PM

*quickly runs off with Sharpedo to check for injuries*

*Kadabra can come too*

Posted by: xXseleneXx Aug 2 2009, 05:54 PM

*jumps on Kadabra and huggles him to death in appreciation!!!!*

Posted by: xGVx Aug 2 2009, 06:01 PM

Kadabra looked so awesome with that! O_O

Was that Reflect or Confusion?????

Posted by: Sprite Mixer Aug 2 2009, 06:22 PM

that was probobly protect scence reflect would shoot it back and confusion would make it stay in the air.

Posted by: Sprite Mixer Aug 2 2009, 06:23 PM

that was probobly protect scence reflect would shoot it back and confusion would make it stay in the air.

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 2 2009, 07:02 PM

Why would Confusion stop bullets D:

That was Reflect.

...Forget Grovyle, remind me to never piss Sharpedo off. Holy shit scary.

(Gen I Rage ftw. |Db)

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 07:05 PM

Sharpedo is hawt when he is mad.

Posted by: dark thunder Aug 2 2009, 07:11 PM

now THATS what im talkin about!

lols, sharpedos pissed


and the scene where kadabra stopped the bullet was even more epic for me cuse my computer took forever to load that picture

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 2 2009, 07:20 PM

spo;hgerut
NOO SHARPEDO DON'T KILL HIM.

Also, guys. I don't know why you all are all, "I'VE CLAIMED KADABRA!"
because I already have.

Kadabra IS a TRUE HERO ftw.

Posted by: ShakaBra Aug 2 2009, 07:32 PM

That is one hot Sharpedo
He looks even better when mad.
Great work Shiro. Can't wait for the next one

Posted by: Runi Aug 2 2009, 08:03 PM

Oh dear lord noooo don't do it Sharpedo ):
You're too hotYOUNG to go to jail

WHO FIRED THE MYSTERIOUSMYSTERY BULLET. That wut proved that it wasn't the soldier.
I keep forgetting Magikarp's a fish. The hood makes me think RABBIT IS GETTING SMOTHERED BY MARI.

Sharpedo is road ragingg.

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 2 2009, 08:07 PM

SEE. THIS IS WHY YOU DO NOT PISS OF SHARKS. We like to nomnom.


...Yes, I just referred to myself as a shark


@Lafa; fine have Kadabra. I CALL SHARPEDO THOUGH.

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 2 2009, 08:11 PM

NO YOU GUYS THAT WASN'T HOT.

THAT WASN'T HOT AT ALL. 8|

I am horrible. |D

THIS AWFUL CLIFFHANGER IS MY 20TH PANEL TODAY OHOHO. More tomorrow |3~

Posted by: Mechanical Lullaby Aug 2 2009, 08:13 PM

AW SNAP NO


...I really have nothing else to say D.

Posted by: Marquis de Lafayette Aug 2 2009, 08:27 PM

asdfjk
HE LOOKS SO HELPLESS. D.

Posted by: xXseleneXx Aug 2 2009, 08:33 PM

beautiful artz
D8 poor mari!

Posted by: Simplyy Aug 2 2009, 08:33 PM

OSHT. Post more

Posted by: ShakaBra Aug 2 2009, 08:43 PM

Oh no D.
Poor Sharpedo, he must feel so bad

Posted by: Leafears5838 Aug 2 2009, 09:03 PM

Oh noes! Mari's injured! Call the ambulance! *calls the hospital and waits*

Posted by: Luminey Aug 2 2009, 09:14 PM

omigosh WHAT HAVE YOU DONE???

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Aug 2 2009, 09:49 PM

AHHH!!! Why must my emotions be tugged every which way!?
Soldier appears, a gun is shot, and Sharpedo almost dies!! O_O
But then Kadabra saving him was very much appreciated And yes, now I see he is a sexy savior
And if that wasn't enough...
Now there's THIS?!?!
My heart... It beats so fast
*retreats to corner with comfort food to wait for the next panels*

Posted by: Runi Aug 2 2009, 10:12 PM

EPIC CLIFFIE.

Wry Sharpedo wryyy. Magikarp is still soveryadorable, but HE LOOKS SO ASCARED OF HIMSELF.

Posted by: Megchan Aug 2 2009, 10:28 PM

Well let's see what's going to happen next....

Grovyle is probably going to get mad as hell at Sharpdeo. And Mari will forgive Sharpdeo, 'cause she's just that kinda girl.

And yes, I am psychic.

Posted by: Raymond Aug 2 2009, 10:49 PM

O w O OH NOES. OH NOES OH NOES OH NOES. SHARPIE-DOOOOOOO. ; o ;

Well, she was warned right before she rushed in. That's the problem with these nice people these days. . . Airian would have done the same thing... only with his luck he would have been eaten or something. > _ >

Posted by: Sora aka Jessy Aug 3 2009, 02:08 AM

Hmm... Looking back at it now...
Maybe Mari wasn't the one who got hit. Maybe somebody else jumped in, just in time, to take the hit.
*continues eating comfort food* -w-

Posted by: Rowan the entei master Aug 3 2009, 02:38 AM

Oh noes!
I bet Grovyle took the hit TT_TT *Cuddles Grovyle* Dun't die! ;~;

Posted by: Pikalover10 Aug 3 2009, 10:47 AM

My brain is absolutely fried from reading those three? no four pages of comic texts! Aww. And wait! Sharpedo freaking hurt Mari! NOOOOOOOOO!

Posted by: Emma Uchiha Aug 3 2009, 11:03 AM

I'd be scared of myself, too, Runi, if I was gonna evolve into something like a Gyarados someday! xD

Emma be lovin' teh Sharpie... *Drool* But I think Kadabra's my favorite with his incredibly large words. xD I wonder if the universe would explode if he didn't talk so much?

Shirogane, again you amaze me with your ability to mess up my brain and make me want more. That was a 'WTFCLIFFOMG' if I've ever seen one. xD Keep it up, Shiro! You're both a talented artist and a talented story writer, and I WANTS TO SEE MOAR!

Posted by: Shirogane Aug 3 2009, 01:53 PM

Lame panels are lame fff.

Edit:

And now,



...In non-Kadabra words, please ask questions in my thread, since I probably will miss them on Sei's thread! And Kadabra will under no circumstances answer questions about Side B (he's not there, so he wouldn't know) nor will he answer plot questions, or we will submit him to horrible, terrible torture. :>

Posted by: ChroniclerC Aug 3 2009, 03:38 PM

Ah, glad I found the link to this in your request thread. Good times so far. Any chance of ya'll putting this up on a site with a "proper" (if you'll forgive the snobbyness of the term ) archive and browsing?

Posted by: Nuclear Porcupine Aug 3 2009, 03:43 PM

i wish it were a lil more 10 year old freindly. meh.