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post Jul 27 2010, 09:07 PM
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In the VS Seeker tab, when you click on the 'View my past battles.' and the box opens up with your past battles, the 'Instructions:' part says either 'Balanced', 'Defencive', or 'Offencive'.

'Defencive' should be 'Defensive' and 'Offencive' should be 'Offensive'. cat.gif


I believe those are the correct British English spellings, which are used for a majority (all?) of words that differ between American and British spellings.

EDIT: Yet Google suggests that, although "offence" and "defence" are correct BrE, "offencive" and "defencive" are incorrect. So I dunno :/

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post Jul 28 2010, 02:31 AM
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They ARE incorrect.
Not just Google, any dictionary will tell you that, actually ^-^

Once you put the "-ive", it HAS TO BE with an s, no matter whether it's British or American spelling. wink.gif


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post Jul 28 2010, 12:11 PM
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Very minor error, but it bugs me nonetheless.

For the Destiny Knot:

"A beautiful red knot that bonds two compatible Daycare Pokémon together faster Limited to 1 per customer."

There's a period missing after "faster".


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post Jul 28 2010, 01:50 PM
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In the help section, under the Pokemon tab, 'Shiny Pokemon' header:

While they aren't nearly as rares as they are in Pokémon games, they are still extremely rare.

Should be 'rare' and not 'rares'


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post Jul 29 2010, 10:19 AM
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In the dex -

Fossil Aerodactyl - Fossil Fossil Pokémon. Is it supposed to be like that?


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post Aug 2 2010, 10:49 PM
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I'm looking through the lab right now and I noticed one of the descriptions:

"An gold egg with two black stripes running across it. It makes a buzzing noise sometimes."

It should be 'A gold egg...' ^_^.gif


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post Aug 4 2010, 09:32 PM
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EDIT: Nevermind, it was already said...

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post Aug 6 2010, 05:20 PM
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QUOTE(Ice Charizard @ Jul 29 2010, 11:19 AM) *
In the dex -

Fossil Aerodactyl - Fossil Fossil Pokémon. Is it supposed to be like that?


Well Aerodactyl's normal Dex entry says "Fossil Pokémon". Fossil Aerodactyl just follows the trend of fossil pokemon by adding "Fossil" in front of the pokemon type. (So Fossil Kabuto is a Fossil Shellfish Pokémon.)

I will, however, agree that the repetition is a little awkward. :/


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post Aug 10 2010, 10:56 AM
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Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so!

Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab.


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post Aug 11 2010, 09:05 PM
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Just me nitpicking but..
On any dex entry thats not fossilized, hover over the greyed out image. No fossil. right?
Hover over a corruption orb now. There's no . at the end..

And maybe for ones that are summonable put "This Pokemon is Summonable." instead of just "Summonable" (again with no . grin.gif)


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post Aug 11 2010, 11:27 PM
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Pokemon names are in all caps in these two descriptions:

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post Aug 12 2010, 07:45 PM
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An error occured: No new achievements unlocked - please try again later.

In this message, "occurred" needs a second "r." You could also try using "An error has occurred:" although it's not completely necessary. Same with the message informing you you don't have any more opportunities to check today.

Edit: Another error on Fossil Armaldo's entry-its name is in all Caps.

Edit2: The PC page says to "Drag&Drop;" shouldn't it have some spaces? ("Drag & Drop")

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post Aug 23 2010, 04:33 PM
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Shieldon flavor text!

"Shieldon is a Pokémon that lived in jungles around 100 million years ago.It is weak to attacks from behind. Its facial hide is extremely hard."

It needs a space. cat.gif
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post Aug 24 2010, 12:28 PM
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post Aug 24 2010, 05:30 PM
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I Was Looking at the Egg Shelter and It Still Says...

"If you wish to find out more information about an egg, simply hover your cursor over it, and it'll respond to you and stop moving."

But The Eggs No Longer Move.
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post Aug 24 2010, 10:27 PM
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When you hit "OK" to accept the starting of a shiny hunt, the word "successfully" is spelled without the second L.
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post Aug 24 2010, 10:31 PM
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QUOTE(Retrospect @ Aug 10 2010, 11:56 AM) *
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Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so!

Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab.


This. And was there ever a replacement for that? They said they were planning to give Pokemon experience in some other way, but if they made an update/post about it, I didn't see it. If I remember correctly, I think they said they did it to cut down on lag, but idk, it doesn't really make sense to me - Pokemon gain experience in the daycare in the actual games, so, not doing it here seems kinda... Weird. I don't know if it would help if they did the same thing they did with the Pokewalker, where the experience/level change would only be apparent once you removed the Pokemon from daycare...?
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post Aug 24 2010, 10:38 PM
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QUOTE(Lucy Monostone @ Aug 24 2010, 11:31 PM) *
QUOTE(Retrospect @ Aug 10 2010, 11:56 AM) *
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Note that we stop raising the Pokémon of trainers who don't come and see us for over a week, so if you plan on leaving your Pokémon in here for prolonged periods of time, make sure you do so!

Should probably delete that from the Daycare tab.


This. And was there ever a replacement for that? They said they were planning to give Pokemon experience in some other way, but if they made an update/post about it, I didn't see it. If I remember correctly, I think they said they did it to cut down on lag, but idk, it doesn't really make sense to me - Pokemon gain experience in the daycare in the actual games, so, not doing it here seems kinda... Weird. I don't know if it would help if they did the same thing they did with the Pokewalker, where the experience/level change would only be apparent once you removed the Pokemon from daycare...?


Don't double post. Use the edit button provided for you.

The training sessions in the Vs. Seeker provide experience for pokemon. Also, this is just for pointing out typos. If you have other issues, discuss them in the proper forum.





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post Aug 26 2010, 09:28 AM
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Repels, drinks, and Antidotes may be purchased in the Shop. Heart Scales, Flame Orbs, and Focus Slashes are only found randomly around the Site, randomly when hatching eggs, and in the Underground.

You can buy Flame Orbs, Heart Scales and Focus Sashes in the Back-room...

So I guess that could be updated in the Help page under Shop Items? sealed.gif

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post Aug 26 2010, 01:22 PM
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QUOTE(Immersion @ Aug 26 2010, 10:28 AM) *
Repels, drinks, and Antidotes may be purchased in the Shop. Heart Scales, Flame Orbs, and Focus Slashes are only found randomly around the Site, randomly when hatching eggs, and in the Underground.

You can buy Flame Orbs, Heart Scales and Focus Sashes in the Back-room...

So I guess that could be updated in the Help page under Shop Items? sealed.gif


Well, Flame Orbs, Heart Scales, and Focus Sashes are in the Back Room because someone that found them around the site, etc., sold them to the shop.

I think on the Help page it's talking about just the regular shop, since you have to buy the Secret Key in order to get access to the Back Room.

So then I think it wouldn't need to be changed?


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