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Twila Reanne
SaphireShadows
post Jul 22 2010, 03:38 PM
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Name: Twila Reanne (pronounced: Twigh-la Ray-anne)
Age: 18 (Birthday: September 14th)
Hometown: Canalave City (Sinnoh)

Appearance:

She has long, thick, curly black hair that she likes to keep down, no matter how hot it is (she hates ponytails, they make her head hurt). Her eyes are a bright, almost lime green with flecks of greyish-blue in them. She wears minimal makeup, meaning she only uses masquera and eyeliner because her skin is - for the most part - smooth and acne free (not to mention a beautiful olive-y color). However, being out in the sun so much has given her countless freckles on her face, arms and legs, but she doesn't mind them. Her favorite color is blue, so naturally she dresses all in blue. Her royal blue t-shirt is loose fitting with no pattern on it. Her shorts are light colored jeans with frayed edges. Her long boots and fingerless gloves are a shade somewhere in between her shirt and shorts. This is the outfit she usually wears. However, when it gets cold, she wears a charcoal grey, tight-fitting sweater and long dark blue jeans along with her boots and gloves. She carries a black messenger bag that holds all of her travelling needs plus her Pokemon. She's of average height, being around 5'6" and also fairly skinny, being around 135 lbs.

Personality: She is a quiet, somewhat introverted girl when it comes to strangers. She gets very shy around people - especially guys - and blushes when someone compliments (or flirts with) her. On the flip side, when she's in a battle she's fierce and fiery, often shooting off smart remarks. When she's around friends, she's very sarcastic, and laughs a lot. She loves her friends and would go anywhere with them. She is very emotional, and can become angered or upset fairly easily.
She loves to be outdoors, although she hates it when it's hot. Usually you can find her at a pool or lake when the temperature gets above 85 degrees. She loves the cold however. She loves snow, and would frequently make trips to Snowpoint city just because it is always covered in snow.
She is very handy, and can fix almost anything. She has even made her own custom Poke balls. She has had dreams of working on the PC boxes to make them even more efficient, but her main goal is to train her Pokemon to be the best they can be.

Class: Other/Undecided

Biography:
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Starting Pokemon:

Kirlia (F) (click to show)



Nidorina (F) (click to show)


Makuhita (M) (click to show)


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Vulpix (F) (click to show)


Items:
Custom Pokeballs(one of each) (click to show)

Potion (x2)
Cell Phone
Bulbasaur Doll
iPod
Small tool kit

The biscuit's name:
Waldorf!

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post Jul 22 2010, 04:05 PM
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As said in the PM, you can't start with Ralts. You have to "catch" it.

Egg move is fine.

Add the things mentioned in your latest PM. I'll go through the bio later.


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post Jul 22 2010, 06:31 PM
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All right. I'll go and request a catch cat.gif


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post Jul 22 2010, 07:19 PM
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OK, I've taken a closer look and I have a few problems with this.

1. When RPing, please space out your posts for easier reading. While big posts are great, a bunch of text crammed together (like your bio) is headache-inducing. You do not want to give a headache to the mod grading your RPs. As a general rule, each person's dialogue is a paragraph. Press the enter bar twice when starting a new paragraph. It makes reading much easier.

2. I like the "ralts gets poisoned" storyline, but not the giant unknown tarantula pokemon. Please stick to canon pokemon only; 5th gen has not been introduced into this RP yet.

3. I am extremely wary of the custom pokeballs, especially the one that "has a 99.9% catch rate, heals the Pokemon caught in it, and makes it grow more friendly and obedient towards its trainer." We don't even allow master balls. As an alternative, how about Twila is a pokeball artist? She would design covers on regular pokeballs (or great, ultra, etc).


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post Jul 23 2010, 09:48 AM
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1) I'm sorry about that. I'll be sure to make it less headache-inducing in the future.

2) Okay. However that leaves me with a lot to go back over and re-do. I could make it an Ariados I guess instead of the unknown Pokemon. :\ I just thought that made it a little scarier *shrugs*

3) Woops, I was going to put in the Bio that she left the "almost-masterball" with Rowan because he said that "It would be dangerous if it got into the wrong hands." or something to that extent. That's why it's not with all of the other pokeballs. Along with the green pokeball with the red jewel, because she already used it on Ralts.

EDIT: Okay, spaced out the paragraphs and redid a few things to the biography. Hopefully now it will be acceptable?

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post Jul 23 2010, 08:07 PM
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Great, but I still don't like the custom balls. You sure she can't be an artist? I'll get another mod in here for a another opinion.


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post Jul 24 2010, 09:09 AM
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The Pokeballs don't make capturing any easier (save for the black and blue one, but she doesn't have that one with her), they just meet the needs of specific types of Pokemon. A regular Pokeball, for instance, is just a normal ball that can be used on any Pokemon, but is generic and doesn't do anything for the Pokemon inside of it. However, the pokeballs that Twila has tinkered with have special accomodations for specific types of Pokemon. Take a fire-type Pokemon for instance. The fire-typed pokeball can heat up on the inside to make the Pokemon more comfortable, yet stay cool on the outside so as not to burn the trainer's hand. The water-typed ball is moist on the inside to keep water Pokemon refreshed. The ice-typed ball is freezing on the inside to keep ice-type Pokemon from burning up. You get the idea, yes?

Twila is a great mechanic. That is one thing about her that is special to me, and the one thing that I think seperates her from other characters. I'd like for her to stay that way.

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post Jul 24 2010, 10:16 AM
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Yo.

For me, custom Pokeballs are not a problem but you should be aware that to make things realistic, we have to consider her profession when/if you decide for Twila to take part in Gyms/Contests. Being an apparently VERY SKILLED mechanic, she clearly has not had a great deal of time to build up any training experience. As such, I would expect for her to perform no more than averagely in battles and so you may have difficulty getting Badges/Ribbons. I'm not saying it is impossible, just harder.


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post Jul 24 2010, 11:07 AM
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Why would her skill in mechanics have anything to do with her experience in training? I had no intention of making her an above-average starter trainer happy.gif I wasn't really going to have her challenge a gym anytime soon anyways. I'm going to give her plenty of time to gain trainer experience before doing anything like a gym challenge.


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post Jul 24 2010, 11:52 AM
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OK, if there's no problems with pokeballs...

Approved. Go post in the Current Levels thread. Have fun!



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