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Character: Kazuki Shu, Is this alright?
Shiro Azuma
post Jun 6 2013, 06:29 AM
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Name: Kazuki Shu

Age: 16
Hometown: Kokona Village
Appearance: His hair is light blue and somewhat spiky that ends at his neck, eye color is a light bluish color. He wears a white shirt with a jacket with his towns insignia and white shorts with brown boots, his backpack his a light brownish looking color made to carry whatever items needed on his journey. On his right hand is the families’ insignia which glows in certain situations that have helped him calm wild or frightened pokemon and understand them more. His accessories are Black/white fingerless gloves with his towns’ insignia and a necklace with a picture of him and his first pokemon. He's about 5'4 in height

Personality: Around other people he is very shy but around pokemon he is very friendly toward them. This was probably caused because of his ability to understand the emotions of pokemon. Most found him awkward so nobody would really hangout with him causing him to be friends with pokemon and his older sister and brother that moved to the Furoh Region. Often is mistaken as a girl as well because of his looks so that gets on his nerves

Biography: Given strange powers which allowed him to communicate with pokemon at birth, his family and the village elder were the only ones who knew why he was given such a gift. The same day he was born his mothers Ninetails had been given birth to nine baby Vulpix’s, one of the baby Vulpix’s somehow wandered off into Kazuki’s room and slept close to him causing him to stop crying and sleep soundly, which to his parents it was an adorable site as well as a message they decided that she was to be his first pokemon when he was baby.

. At the age of seven his ability began to be known to the other villagers which caused a light panic. Not understanding why they acted differently toward him he decided to become friends with the pokemon only since the people of his village treated him like he was curse

. As he got older the power showing up out of nowhere got even worse, though it had saved the village from being attacked by a wild flock of hungry staraptors . How he stopped them from hurting the villagers was using his physic power to communicate with them and find out what the cause of their attack but even after that the villagers treated him even worse than they had done before thinking that he may be the reason for the village’s destruction. His parents wondered why the other villager’s treated their son like the plague and decided to as the families that were supposedly close to them find out what was the problem. Most where jealous or scared to death by their son thinking that one day he’d call the pokemon to attack them . his parents finding this out talked to the village elder who became infuriated by the opinions of the other villagers about Kazuki. While talking to the elder Kazuki was outside playing with his pokemon that he named Vulpy, while playing a few of the other kids that use to be Kazuki’s friends saw him playing became angry as they watched. Now having the same thoughts as the other villagers they started to bully him calling him cursed, or a demon and among other things which confused him greatly. The bullying soon began to become abit more physical as they started hitting him, Kazuki fought back but with the help of his trusty partner Vulpy by his side and won the fight before it got out of hand. After all that had happened he ran home and hid in his room for a while until his parents came home already hearing about the scuffle that began while the town held it meeting, his parents could no longer take more of the mistreatment that they were giving their son so they decided that he’d move to where his older brother and sister in law lived, Furoh Region to see new things, and start his journey. They gave him a bicycle, a few pokeballs , and a ticket to catch the ferry..

On the way to the ferry Kazuki noticed that he had been followed. By what he didn’t really know until he stopped, looking at the time on his watch he knew he had enough time before the ferry headed off to the Furoh region.Calling out Vulpy to help him find whoever it was that was following him it surprised them both finding out that it was a Eevee that had a sudden interest in the young trainer. Happy to meet an Eevee for the first time he had asked her if she’d want to join him in his journey using his physic power to communicate with the female Eevee. Glad that he had asked she had excepted his invitation jumping onto Kazuki happily.

Now onto his way to the ferry he gets on the boat looking at the scenery with his partners Vulpy and Rena.A few weeks pass by as he finally made it into the Furroh region heading towards Petropolis since that’s where his older brother and step sister lived. Forgetting that he could’ve just called his brother he went on bicycle instead but before leaving port he bought a few other things he’d need to get used to such an area for instance town map some candy and a few more pokeballs. Now heading toward Petropolis his mind was set, until he felt something bump underneath his tire which caused him to flip over and land hard onto the ground. His bicycle landing almost on top of him as Vulpy and Rena quickly got out of there pokeballs seeing what caused the accident. Nothing was there at first but a hole, so Vulpy and Rena decided to get closer towards the hole. Still nothing was there, but whatever it was that made the hole reappeared right in front of Kazuki which surprised him scaring him alittle before realizing what it was. Looking at the Diglett with a slight chuckle he smiled seeing that the Diglett meant no harm to them, though he did have to apologize for scaring the pants off of Vulpy and Rena who were going to attack the Diglett if Kazuki hadn't stopped them. Getting his bicycle up and getting on he found Vulpy and Rena's pokeballs and asked them to return to them Vulpy wanting to stay by his side sorta not trusting the Diglett stayed and Rena tired from the trip went back inside of pokeball. While on there way to Petropolis Diglett had made its decision on the way there. to become Kazuki's third pokemon. Kazuki happy about his decision accepted his new team mate and friend..

Finally reaching Petropolis and amazed on how much technology it had was happy that he reached his destination. Finding his brothers house and staying there for the time he was staying in the Furoh region. to get use to being in Petropolis his older brother Isame Shu a teacher in the pokemon schools wanted him to check out a rumor that he heard from his students about a water ghost type pokemon near the lake that's been scaring a few of the kids as they play. Interested in this rumor now he listens to his older brother and heads toward the lake with his team Vulpy the Vulpix, Rena the Eevee and Digs the Diglett towards the lake.

While walking he hears some strange noise's coming closer with each step he took. Becoming scared as the sounds became louder and louder he called out Vulpy as soon as the unknown pokemon revealed itself to being a Frillish. Interested in the boy and the fact that he could communicate with him as they talked more he too joined the party. Returning back home and explaining to Isami that it was only Frillish that was scaring his students.

Class: Trainer

Starting Pokemon:.

Vulpix
Nickname: Vulpy
Gender: Female
Ability: Flash Flare
Lv: 5
Attacks: Ember, Tail Whip, Quick Attack, Growl, Helping Hand

Eevee:
Gender: female
Nickname: Rena
Ability: Run away
Lvl: 5
Attacks: Tackle, Growl, , Sand Attack, Helping hand

Diglett
Nickname: Digs
Gender: Male
Ability: Sand force
Lvl: 5
Attacks: Dig, Scratch, Growl, Sand Attack

Frillish
Nickname: Frilz
Gender: Male
Ability: Water Absorb
Lvl: 5
Attacks: Bubble, Water Sport, Absorb


Items: Poke’Gear, 3x Potions, 5 Pokeballs, 3 Oran berries, 6 Charti Berries, Bicycle

What is the biscuit's name? The answer is... Scheherazade

This post has been edited by Shiro Azuma: Jun 10 2013, 12:44 PM


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post Jun 6 2013, 12:16 PM
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I'm very skeptical on the 'psychic power' he uses to communicate with Pokemon - would you be willing to write a little roleplay sample, so that I can see how it works?

As for your starting Pokemon, their total combined levels cannot exceed 20, and at current, you have 30. The easiest way to do this, if you're starting with 4 pokemon, is to have them all start at level 5.

Do me a favour, and organize your biography into paragraphs, please. You've got some lovely stuff in there, but the story just bleeds together without any distinction for when an event begins and an event ends, and I think paragraphs might help that. Also, please pay attention to your switching of present to past tense. Check some of that grammar and punctuation a bit, too, please. In PANE, while grading, we pay attention to things like that, and it can affect your score negatively if you're too haphazard with it.


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post Jun 6 2013, 01:43 PM
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Douken told me you'd be skeptical of the powers, but I wanted to do this type of character anyway. Of course i'll do a roleplay on how it actually works though if that'll help. If not then i'll change the character.

I'll be working on fixing the biography right now, oh and where would you want me to make a starter for a example of his powers?


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post Jun 6 2013, 03:40 PM
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Go ahead and place it in the profile itself, just mark a new section off with a spoiler-tag (Get Douken to help you, if you need it), and place the rp sample in there.


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post Jun 6 2013, 04:24 PM
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Alright i'll have it ready for you


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post Jun 8 2013, 03:00 AM
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Sorry for the late reply, been having writers block for sometime now, but i'm working on the starter right now


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post Jun 8 2013, 08:31 AM
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Here you go.
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post Jun 8 2013, 07:55 PM
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Thank you for taking the time to do an RP sample; it is much appreciated.

So, we have a wee bit of a problem with the Pokemon-Telepathy, and we have a fix to help limit the overpowered nature of it.

Kazuki will be able to communicate with other Pokemon, but only with Vulpy as a medium/go-between. He can communicate with Vulpy directly, and she helps Kazuki translate Pokemon thoughts into words that he can understand. In order to do this, Vulpy has to be out of the pokeball and in range.

This power cannot be used on other humans.

Do those conditions sound fair?


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post Jun 9 2013, 04:00 PM
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No problem i'm glad that I was able to do it ^^.

Alright i'll use Vulpy when using the power to communicate with pokemon

Everything seems good and fair to me ^^



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Then you're accepted! Post in the current levels thread and have fun in Gigarte.


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Thank you ^^


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