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A Tale in Which People Meet and Things Happen. Also Pokemon are There, Arden, Julie, and Cesc
Aura Dynasty
post Nov 1 2014, 08:18 AM
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Sorry that everything's taking so long, I'll make sure to post something by tonight!


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My body...
is made out of swords.
Iron is my blood
and glass is my heart.


I have overcome countless battlefields undefeated.
Not once have I retreated,
Nor once have I been understood.
Always alone....
On the hill of swords...
intoxicated by victory...


Thus, this life has no meaning...
This body...surely was...
Made out of blades.


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Tarbasilisk
post Nov 27 2014, 03:54 PM
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In my efforts to keep track of all the bees (so many bees), I noticed a slight communication problem. Kind of to be expected with so many of the same kind of pokemon running around. Some of the details of who is attacking who got a little muddled.

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The now-unpinned beedrill, while not possessing a particularly expressive visage, seemed even more vengeful as it beat its wings to become airborne once more. But the beedrill's movements communicated another feeling as well - pain. It was clearly injured from both the fight with Cesc's monferno and the sudden 'dramatic entrance' of the blonde girl. Its flight, which was previously quick and lethal, had now become wobbly and lopsided.

Acting on impulse, Julie fiercely commanded Princess to tackle it.


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Behind him, he heard Bardolph's cry of triumph. Turning back around to hear the full effect of his new combo, Cesc watched as the Beedrill that Jill had unceremoniously plowed into hit the ground with a dull thud.


In an effort to fix this continuity error, I have a proposed retcon solution which I shall demonstrate using this BEE DIAGRAM:
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Basically I'll just go back and change Princess's target to one of the 'secondary bees' that Julie lured in.

To summarize relevant plot points (since it's been a while):
  • There are so many bees
  • Bardolph saved Jill from certain death by the stingers of the tackled beedrill, rather than Princess
  • Cesc's crazy combos mostly served to weaken everything. KO count is as follows: Bardolph: 2 Princess: 1 Vex: 1
  • Oberon and Valentine are poisoned
  • Bardolph got singed by Vex


This post has been edited by Tarbasilisk: Nov 27 2014, 11:18 PM


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Aura Dynasty
post Nov 27 2014, 06:20 PM
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Gotcha! Hehe, that unearthly awesome BEE-DIAGRAM though... it looks more like a war strategy to eliminate all evil bee-forces, which I shall baptise Operation BEE-gone. cat.gif



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My body...
is made out of swords.
Iron is my blood
and glass is my heart.


I have overcome countless battlefields undefeated.
Not once have I retreated,
Nor once have I been understood.
Always alone....
On the hill of swords...
intoxicated by victory...


Thus, this life has no meaning...
This body...surely was...
Made out of blades.


PANE (click to show)

Uprising (click to show)
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Aura Dynasty
post Dec 11 2014, 06:46 AM
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Jill Cortoma



I'll get my post done by tonight, because I currently don't know what I'm typing...



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My body...
is made out of swords.
Iron is my blood
and glass is my heart.


I have overcome countless battlefields undefeated.
Not once have I retreated,
Nor once have I been understood.
Always alone....
On the hill of swords...
intoxicated by victory...


Thus, this life has no meaning...
This body...surely was...
Made out of blades.


PANE (click to show)

Uprising (click to show)
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