[X] My Assistant

[Milly Tankerson]

Name: Hunni Lombardi

Personal history:
Hunni was born and raised in the Orre region until her parents were killed when she was 6 years old in a Tauros stampede near her home. Having nowhere to go, she ran away from child services into the Sacred Forest where she met Celebi. After Celebi took a trip though her past, it felt sorry for Hunni and sent her to the Johto region, where she was raised for 5 years by a clan of Ursaring. In that time, she became more understanding of pokemon and their emotions, their needs and things of that nature.

When she was 11, the Eldest Ursaring thought it was time for her to be on her own, learning more to life than being in a forest, so the clan released Hunni back to civilization for her first pokemon. Being introduced to Professor Elm for the first time, he happily gave her the only pokemon he had left, which was a Cyndaquil named Xan. Over the course of their journey, both Hunni and Xan got stronger, and Xan eventually evolved into a powerful Typhlosion. Xan was the only pokemon Hunni ever trusted, and the only pokemon she had, so the two were inseperable....almost. Xan had fallen in love with another Typhlosion they had battled in the wild once. He had left Hunni for a few weeks to spend some time with her. When he came back, he had bad news that his lover had died in giving birth to the egg that he now carried along with him. After a short while, Xan died, drowning to death in the Lake of Rage while trying to protect Hunni and his egg, leaving the two alone. Hunni, now having no pokemon, ventured on with a heavy mind and heart with Xan's egg to Mahogany town.

During her stay there, she became involved with a pokemon testing company, where they took pokemon and used them for cosmetic testing. This is where Hunni met Luna, the eevee with the strange blue streak on it's head. Shortly after saving her from the company, Xan's egg hatched into a healty Cyndaquil, which Hunni happily named Lance, after the man who helped her to save Luna from 'hell'. Luna and Lance are Hunni's two best pokemon, and the two get along so much that they are practically brother and Sister. Through many adventures they had, Lance evolved into a Typhlosion that resembled his father, Xan, and Luna had evolved into an Umbreon with a strange bang growing over her forehead's ring, which was still streaked blue. Now on they're adventure to make new friends, collect ribbons and beat the pokemon League, Hunni, Lance as well as Luna find themselves in constant adventures that they will remember for a lifetime.



General Info:
Hunni is a generally shy person when it comes to meeting new people, but once she's aquainted with them, she because somewhat of a nutcase. She sees the world for what it could be, instead of what it is, and always wished to help someone in need. She's a bit of a romantic and hates to impose on anyone.


Age: 15

Profession: Trainer/Coordinator

Gender: Female

Physical Appearance:

Height: 5'2"

Hair (Color and Style): Glossy blonde hair in dual up-style ponytails.

Eye Color: Honey Orange (Hence the name)

Distinguishing Feature(s): Her hair.

Apparel:
Hunni is normally dressed in long sleeved shirts and skirts, seldomly wearing pants and shorts. She's a boot-wearing kind of person who has a morbid fear of belts, and that they may suffocate her one day.

Clothes (Torso): A white long sleeved turtleneck with a red vest to cover it. On the vest's back is the design of a yellow paw print.

Clothes (Waist Down): A long red skirt that stops about two inches below her knees.

Clothes (Feet): Black tennis shoes with a Red sole design. She's a runner, alright~

Accessories (Head): Nothing, she hates hats.

Accessories (Neck): A black dog's collar. ( No, it was NOT previously worn. >>; )

Accessories (Wrists): A red poketch with a purple back screen. Although she's not too much of a technical person, she keeps it to make sure everything is alright when it comes down to her pokemon.

Accessories (Hands): Black biker gloves.

Bag: (Contents not required): A black handbag with red ribbons on it's front. Inside, she carries a various amount of healing supplies and stones used for such occasions, pokeballs of all sorts, her badge and ribbon case and her TM case. She also keeps a collapseable fishing rod.

Trainer’s Pokemon-

Starter:Lance the Typhlosion (Male)
Moves: Flamethrower , Lava Plume, Crush Claw & Protect.

Lance was hatched shortly after Hunni's encounter with Luna, and ever since he and Luna had become the best of friends, always supporting each other when needed and then some. He's a bit of a cocky pokemon who always gets a big head over when he's better at something. He lets his boredom get the best of him often and goes about setting anything in his path a blaze. When he does this, Luna's older brother, Magento, will come out from his pokeball and put Lance in check.

When it comes to the other pokemon, as well as Hunni, Lance is a bit of an annoying brother, but things get tough, he gets crackin'. 'Nuff said.

Secondary Traveling Pokemon:

Luna the Umbreon (Female)
Moves: Psychic, Toxic, Attract & Confuse Ray.

Luna was just hatched when she was snatched from her pack and used for experimentation for cosmetics. Due to all the prolonged exposure, a faint blue streak appeared on her fur and wouldn't come out- no matter what. When Hunni rescued her nobody noticed, thankfully, and they began to bond quickly after she made a gift of a soothe bell to her. When she woke up one morning, she found that she evolved during her sleep, yet the light blue streak was still there.

Luna is the mirror of Hunni, being shy and a bit of a motherly figure to those who are younger and smaller then her. She's often seem taking care of eggs that she's either found or is given to Hunni until they hatch.

Dosarian The Ariados (Male)
Moves: Spider Web, Sludge Bomb, Psychic & Signal Beam.

Hunni found Dosarian while taking a rest in the Resort area of the Sinnoh, simply training Lance. There's nothing special about Dosarian, other than the fact that he's a shiny pokemon. True enough, he's a purple spider who is rarely seen, only because Hunni allows him to roam around with his only daughter, Arainia. Her mother is unknown, seeing as Dosarian always disregards the subject.

Magento The Vaporeon (Male)
Moves: Substitute, Water Pulse, Ice beam & Dig.

Magento is Luna's older brother, but wan't found until she evolved into an Umbreon. When Hunni and Luna went swimming, they were attacked by a Violet-looking Vaporeon. Lance, being in the forest gathering berries at the time, wasn't able to help them, so Luna had no choice but to fight. She was quickly bested, and JUST as he was about to delivered, Luna noticed the look in his eyes, and how she remembered her brother looked the day she was kidnapped. Being reunited, the Vaporeon, now named Magento, happily joined Hunni on their adventures.

To all the pokemon, Magento is a guardian or a big brother. Everyone respects him and adores him. If anyone messes with Magento, all the other pokemon become enraged and seem to fight better, ten fold.

Squalo The Garchomp (Male)
Moves: Earthquake, Dragon Rush, Sandstorm & Flamethrower.

Squalo was a young gible who loved to pick fights when Hunni found him in Wayward cave. Seeing Lance, he desperatly wanted to fight him and get better. To keep in touch with Lance to go against him, Squalo kind of BARGED into Hunni's party by stealing one of her pokeballs and capturing himself with it. With her new pokemon, Hunni accepted him and trained him to be the fastest, and possibly the strongest member on her team. Now a Garchomp, he and Lance go about sparring everyday, keeping each other in shape as healthy rivals.

Big Bossu The Honchkrow (Female)
Moves: Dark Pulse, Fly, Aerial Ace & Pluck

Big Bossu was the head of an expert pick-pocketing band of birds that would go around picking poor innocent fools clean of their valuables. When Big Bossu tried to steal Hunni's things when her pokemon were resting in a pokemon center, The onlu thing she had to protect herself was her words. After talking some sense into the giant bird's head, she felt sorry for all the things she'd done and begged Hunni to change her. After she was accepted into the team, Big Bossu slowly but surely changed her ways, but now uses her talents to good use, such as plucking helpful berries from bushes and unwary pokemon.

The biscuits name would be Waldorf. =D

[Toogee]

First, please use the profile format in the Rules board. It makes it much easier for us to grade.

Second, you can't have any of those pokemon as starters. Please go back to the Rules board and look up the Starter list.

I will not make any other comments until the profile is in the proper format.

[Milly Tankerson]

First: Xan was a Cyndaquil.....I just kinda explained what happened later....

Second: But...I did use..... ._.

You know what, nevermind. You or anyone else can just close this.

This post has been edited by Hunni: Mar 26 2010, 03:47 PM

[Master Houndoom]

Hunni, here are the links I promised

Profile Template

Starter Pokemon

Profile Template Suggestions (or, just scroll down in the first template link)

[Milly Tankerson]

Thank you, Master Houndoom! I'll get started on it right away!

[Milly Tankerson]

Okay, so I took alot of time revamping this, and it almost looks COMPLETELY different, seeing as I had to back track through Hunni's life story. (Yes, I actually made a story of this. XD ) Anywho...hopefully I didn't do anything wrong with this one this time.



Name: Hunni Lombardi

Age: 15 Years.

Hometown: Eclo Desert of Orre.

Appearance: Hunni is a quite petite young lady, being only 5'2". Her skin is of a peach-like complexion, being as smooth as a baby's bottom. ( Never really got that expression, but okay... <<; ) Hunni's hair is a pure blonde yellow color, in up-style dual ponytails on both sides of her head, held up by red ribbons, and her eyes are a honey-looking orange color, hence her name.
Hunni always wears a long sleeved white cotton turtleneck with a black skirt that just stops about two inches below her knees. On top of the white turtleneck, she wears a silk vest with a golden paw print embedded on the back. Her shoes are simple running shoes, being black in color with a red sole design on the bottom. She always carries her bag, which is in a mail-carrier bag type, being all black with a red ribbon design on the front. She also has a red-colored poketch for keeping track of her pokemon and black biker gloves, which she almost never removes from her hands.

Personality: Being born with the ability to read other's hearts, she was closed off from the world at a certain point by her parents, so she wouldn't see the world for what it truely was. After a time, she was released and was ignorant to the things around her, so she had to learn the hard way about things, and eventually, her ability was forgotten.....for a time.
Hunni is a kind and caring person. You would think her heart was made of gold if it wasn't for the playful things she did to agitate her pokemon a bit. She's a bit of a joker, and always like to play around, saying and doing random things from shouting out something that didn't make sence to picking up a random stick and poking a stranger with it. Being an outgoing person, Hunni likes to go out and make plenty of friends, helping them whenever she can and always on the lookout for someone in distress.
When her friends are in trouble, however, it's as if Hunni snaps into a diffrent person and is on the case for a good rescue. Her temperment drops and she becomes more knowledgeable about the things around her. Becoming more serious than usual, she won't stop for anything when someone's on the line. Things she will not stand for is people who hurt/enslave/torture innocent pokemon, abuse on anyone's part, be them human or pokemon, or anyone who has anything to say about her hair.
Occasionally, Hunni's ability will kick into her mind when she least expects it, and it tends to upset her when she sees all the unhappiness in the world, and it gets to that point, her pokemon are the first on the spot ot cheer her up, which doesn't take long.

Biography:
Hunni was born and raised in the Orre region. Her mother was a gym leader and her father, a world-known contest winner. Both had wanted their daughter to take up what they loved best, until they discovered she had an unusual ability to see what people's hearts truely held within. Afraid of her taking everything in too fast, they kept her away from the outside world until they were killed when she was 6 years old in a Tauros stampede near her home. Having nowhere to go, she ran away from child services into the Sacred Forest where she met Celebi. After Celebi took a trip though her past, it felt sorry for Hunni and sent her to the Johto region, where she was raised for 5 years by a clan of Ursaring. In that time, she became more understanding of pokemon and their emotions, their needs and things of that nature, which only cause her ability to read hearts a little more managable.
When she was 11, the Eldest Ursaring thought it was time for her to be on her own, learning more to life than being in a forest, so the clan released Hunni back to civilization for her first pokemon. Getting back into civilization was a bit difficult, being introduced into alot of new electronics and such, but Hunni adapted very quickly.

Being introduced to Professor Elm for the first time, he happily gave her the only pokemon he had left, which was a Cyndaquil named Xan.. Later, after eating at a cafe, the two literally bumped into a Mareep in the street, which Hunni had captured and named Amphy.

From there, the 'family' of three went about going to beat every gym and get every ribbon that they could, enjoying everything every step of the way, finally deciding to start fresh in a new region- Furoh.


Starting Pokemon:
Xan the Cyndaquil
Level 10
Quiet Nature
Known Moves: Tackle, Leer, Ember, Headbutt.
Xan is Hunni's first pokemon, being as loyal as a pet dog. Xan was given to Hunni by Professor Elm in his lab, and from then on, it was just the two of them. Bonding quickly, Xan has a soft spot for Hunni, and only Hunni. Being quiet most of the time, he won't say anything to anyone unless he feels it's needed.

Amphy the Mareep
Bold Nature
Level 10
Known Moves: Tackle, Thundershock, Headbutt, empty.
Amphy was met by pure mistake, and was caught with a pokeball. Afterwards, Amphy quickly became a member of the family, and became close to Xan- almost like a brother. When it comes to battles, he's the first up for one, but outside of battles, he's normally a cassanova. Dispite this, he seems to be a bit too attached to Hunni for Xan's taste.

Items:
Potions x 5
Super Potions x 3
Full Heal x 5
Revives x 2
Pokeballs x 10
Great Balls x 5
Ultra Balls x 1
Berry Case
- Oran Berry x 3, Sitrus Berry x 1.
Pokedex
Ribbon Case
Badge Case ( Both cases and pokedex being inside the pocket inside her vest. )
Seal Case
Accessories Case
Collapsable bike
Collapsable tent
Sleeping bag


What is the biscuit's name?
Oddly enough, Waldorf.

Other Notes:
Surprisingly enough, Hunni doesn't actually like honey, is highly allergic to bees and TERRIFIED of Beedrill.
Another note would be that she loves all pokemon, Amphy some in more ways than one.
Also, after being released back into civilization, Hunni was still into gathering berries and such, and loves to sleep outside. She still stays in touch with the Ursaring that raised her via a pokegear they stole from an unwary trainer on the street.

This post has been edited by Hunni: Mar 27 2010, 06:39 PM

[Toogee]

This is much easier to read. Thank you.

However...

1. The starters need to be downgraded. You may have a level 10 cyndaquil and level 10 mareep, not their evolutions. Their combined levels cannot exceed 20, so that was why I reduced them.

2. I will need a second opinion on the bio. It's good, but we tend to be stingy on legendary encounters and we've rejected the "raised by pokemon" story arc in past profiles. I will need another opinion on that.

Other than that, everything is good .

[Toogee]

Update: Celebi is OK, but I'd like some expansion on being raised by Ursaring. How did she transition from living like an Ursaring to going back into human society? Did she retain any "ursaring" characteristics? Being raised at such a young age, she must have been affected in development somehow (trouble speaking, unusual habits, etc).

[Milly Tankerson]

Hunni was 6 before the Ursaring took her in, so she already knew how to speak the King's English. Other than being a bit closer to pokemon, living with the Ursaring was like living with her parents....with the exception of some electronic things, of course.

EDIT: I edited the above post. Is it okay now?

This post has been edited by Hunni: Mar 27 2010, 06:32 PM

[Toogee]

Hunni was 6 before the Ursaring took her in, so she already knew how to speak the King's English. Other than being a bit closer to pokemon, living with the Ursaring was like living with her parents....with the exception of some electronic things, of course.

And a house, an education, and human interaction. Though, I guess after nine years, she would have caught up by now.

Approved. Please post in the Current Levels thread. Enjoy!