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Dec 30 2011, 12:11 AM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
The Hundred Years War: Review of “War on Drugs”
I think “War on Drugs” has been the longest running RP in PANE’s history. It’s sad to see inactivity kill it off. There is precedent for RP members continuing the thread long after the leader had left. I wouldn’t have minded seeing Amelia and Delainey become closer friends during the mission. Perhaps another time. Anywho, on with the review! Daniel Worthington- Amissa (click to show ) Mack Echo Nima- Deyv87 (click to show ) Amelia Himan- Jonahman10 (click to show ) Delainey Triell- Ozzy (click to show ) -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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Jan 1 2012, 02:07 PM
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Take a story and craft it well... Group: Members Posts: 878 Joined: 17-September 09 From: Where the wind comes sweeping down the plains... Member No.: 63 755 PANE Team |
Aridana's Absolutely Awful Adventure
Discussion and OOC topic Characters: Pokefan209: Kenz Issone - Current Levels (Thread Wrangler) SaphireShadows: Christine Tennebraum - Current Levels Pikalover10: Jason Goldan - Current Levels Dragonwish2: Elizabeth (Liz) Nadira Shir - Current Levels Major Events: Jason caught a Poochyena. Christine caught a Bulbusaur. The quartet was kidnapped and taken to Aridana from Port Barley. Summary: After an exciting reunion of old and new friends in Port Barley, the group is lured into an alley by a strange man. Knocked out with a Sleep Powder attack, they are taken to Aridana overnight, waking to find themselves tied up and held captive by a gross evil man and beautiful cruel woman. They are told they must work in their circus act, threatened at the lives of their Pokemon. Due to the other three cast member's profiles being archived, and their lack of activity (the last post was in September), and due to me not having any idea to even make a smooth ending straight out of the climax, I put this up to be graded. With only 34 posts, this was a fairly short RP. -------------------- Pane (click to show ) Percentages and Truths (click to show ) |
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Jan 1 2012, 07:49 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
Cut Awfully Short: Review of “Aridana’s Absolutely Awful Adventure”
Though this RP met the grading requirements, the story portion didn’t even really get started. It’s a shame, because according to the discussion thread, this had potential to be a pretty silly RP. I wish this went a bit further, but with only one member remaining, what can you do? Pokefan209: Kenz Issone (click to show ) SaphireShadows: Christine Tennebraum (click to show ) Pikalover10: Jason Goldan (click to show ) Dragonwish2: Elizabeth (Liz) Nadira Shir (click to show ) -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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Jan 17 2012, 10:51 PM
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Team Rogue: Espeon Group: Members Posts: 1 044 Joined: 25-March 09 From: United States Member No.: 5 443 Tuesday's Pack |
A Lost Gem is now complete.
Discussion Thread Participants: Liam West -- Angels Fall First Kefka Gama -- Xehanorto Jill Laurent -- Yzarc Drowsnam Lysander Kirby Doyle -- Umbrae Calamitas Start Date: August 19, 2011 End Date: January 17, 2012 Length: 32 posts Summary: When two people bump into each other on the streets, it's a simple accident. Another introduces himself, and it's introductions all around. Everything is fine on a beautiful morning in the city, until the one stranger's pokemon is stolen, and the chase is on. After initially failing to catch the thief, Jill Laurent is joined by Lysander Doyle, and the two chase after the thief, eventually catching him after a pokemon battle. As it turns out, he's already handed his stolen prize off. With a new comprehension of each other's skills, among other things, Jill and Lysander continue on after the next set of thieves, eventually catching up to them in another part of town. -------------------- |
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Jan 18 2012, 12:33 AM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
A FOUND GEM!?
Overview: The roleplay quickly trimmed down into just Jill and Lysander. That sort of things sadden me a bit, when a thread-runner leaves. Anywho, good job, you two, for picking up the slack and continuing on regardless of absences. Your scores: Liam West - Angels Fall First (click to show ) Kefka Gama - Xehanorto (click to show ) Jill Laurent - Yzarc Drowsnam (click to show ) Lysander Kirby Doyle - Umbrae Calamitas (click to show )
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Jan 19 2012, 10:45 PM
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Omar comin' Group: Members Posts: 889 Joined: 12-April 09 From: Texas Member No.: 10 745 PANE |
The Tormented has been completed.
Justin Smart - Current Levels Tag Lee - Current Levels Nate Guzman Tag goes back to Gigarte in search of Raven, while Justin and Nate go back there for a Team Deception mission involving protecting a sleeping officer. The three meet up again, but are afflicted by whatever was affecting the officer. They also work alongside a team of three other Team Deception members: Omar, Miriam and Ace. Begin a terrifying series of nightmares, controlled by a seemingly nefarious villain. Thanks, in advance! it might be somewhat of a read, but Kam and I are quite patient. -------------------- [spoiler=PANE - Justin Smart] Justin Smart Profile Current Level Post Wiki Currently In: Zoobreak! [align=right] Nate Guzman (Partner) Wiki[/spoiler] [/align] [spoiler=PANE - Jill Laurent] Jill Laurent Profile Current Levels Post Currently In: Back in the Zone[/spoiler] [spoiler=Uprising - Abraham West]Magma - Grunt Abraham West Profile Progress Tracking Currently In: Interception! :piloswine: :elekid: :shellder:[/spoiler] |
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Jan 22 2012, 01:01 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
Nightmare on Gigarte St: Review of “The Tormented”
This was a very impressive RP. Going through everyone’s worst nightmares gave added depth to their character. Combined with an appearance by Darkrai, this made for a great read. Check it out if you have a lazy Sunday afternoon ahead of you. Yzarc Drowsnam: Justin Smart (click to show ) Kamaitachi: Tag Lee (click to show ) -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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Mar 3 2012, 01:55 AM
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Team Rogue: Espeon Group: Members Posts: 1 044 Joined: 25-March 09 From: United States Member No.: 5 443 Tuesday's Pack |
The Cusp of Twilight has come to a close!
Began:October 11th, 2011 Ended: March 3rd, 2012 Posts: 35 Master Houndoom - Jaima Kuonji - current levels Umbrae Calamitas - Tuesday Berdison - current levels (Thank you, Living Arrow, for playing Vega.) One of their group has turned their attention to other horizons and left to pursue a dream elsewhere, leaving Jaima, Tuesday, and Meiko to travel to the Petropolis gym so that Tuesday may face the gym leader in her first ever gym match. The match is long and the confident, experienced gym leader is faced against a learning opponent whose mind wanders faster than their pokemon can attack. Still, by the skin of her teeth and more luck than a leprechaun, she comes out on top, only to head back to the pokemon center to find Professor Oak awaiting her call, with a mission for his research assistant to perform, as her friends leave for PokeCon. -------------------- |
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Mar 3 2012, 11:31 AM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
Cusp of Twilight:
Well. The bulk of this piece is Tuesday's gym battle. There was some sideplot going on, with a recurrance of the villains from Divide and Conquer, unless I miss my guess. There was also some foreshadowing. I think it's safe to classify this as an 'in-between' roleplay, while you set things up for a future one. I'm hoping some of the plot-lines started here appear in "Changing of the Guard". Blah blah blah, how I do go on! In any case, I'd been debating on how to go about this roleplay. Well, I debated with myself. Here's what I got: Umbrae Calamitas - Tuesday Berdison (click to show ) Master Houndoom - Jaima Kuonji (click to show ) Living Arrow - Vega (click to show ) I look forward to seeing where these new threads lead. Thank you guys for the fun read. *Killed for a terrible rhyme*. -------------------- Song Stuck in My Head:~*~Blank Space - Ariana Silvanas (Postmodern Jukebox Cover)~*~ Pane (click to show ) Uprising (click to show ) |
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Mar 15 2012, 10:38 PM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
The Bug Catching Contest has reached its conclusion.
Cesc Rojas - Current Levels Branwys 'Tinkertot' Muphenz Current Levels Seiccan Serroc - Current Levels Brief Synopsis in bullet point form:
Thank you in Advance -------------------- Song Stuck in My Head:~*~Blank Space - Ariana Silvanas (Postmodern Jukebox Cover)~*~ Pane (click to show ) Uprising (click to show ) |
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Mar 17 2012, 07:08 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
Insect Snatching Challenge: Review of “The Bug Catching Contest”
What started as a typical bug challenge turned into a race to stop crazed bugs from destroying everything, all this fuss from a tiny machine. This was probably one of the more innovative RPs I’ve seen. Switching pokemon and the disastrous results that followed was a rather humorous read. That sequence was rather confusing with all the names being thrown around, however. I wasn’t sure who was who >_>. Oh well, onward. Cesc Rojas- Kamaitachi (click to show ) Brawnys ‘Tinkertot’ Muphenz- Master Houndoom (click to show ) Seiccan Serroc- Douken Sota (click to show ) -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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May 19 2012, 06:58 PM
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Gym Leader Group: Members Posts: 490 Joined: 26-March 09 From: With Vivi of Final Fantasy IX Member No.: 5 608 Awsome |
Gigarte Gemma has concluded. (It essentially ended all the way back in February but I was too lazy to post until now. My fault completely.)
Cast 1. Amelia Himan-CL- Jonahman10 2.Elizabeth (Liz) Nadira Shir-CL-Dragonwish 3. Darius Dovakin-CL- Toogee 4.Fenrir-CL-ShinyRalts Synopsis: Mr. Darsey has a pest problem, so he enlists some volunteers. However, the volunteers discover -------------------- My websites (click to show ) My Acomplishmnents (click to show ) A pokeplush levels up when clicked, So click it! Click here to feed me a Rare Candy! Get your own at Pokeplushies! Friend's eggs My eggs; |
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May 19 2012, 10:45 PM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
Gigarte Gemma Grading!
The unique mix of this cast creates for an interesting story cocktail. It never once lost my interest, and I was constantly checking for updates while it was running at full speed. Amelia Himan Score (click to show ) Darius Dovakhin Grade (click to show ) Elizabeth Nadira Shir Marks (click to show ) Fenrir Adjudication (click to show )
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Jun 14 2012, 10:45 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
PPPPPP is finally complete.
Featuring: Pan Gibbs- Toogee Douken Sota- Douken Sota Darryn Kellor and Lyla Moore- Living Arrow Pan and Douken take a nice break in Petropolis, crashing at Darryn’s apartment while Douken trains and Pan works. First on the list, Pan took her buddies to the museum for a fundraising event…which was quickly crashed by the Disciples of Darkrai. Fighting ensues, triggering the revival machine to unleash a shiny aerodactyl. Pan grabs on and goes for the ride of her life. Her friends follow to make sure she doesn’t get turned into a Pancake. Despite the crash into the streets below, everything works out (thanks to her newly evolved golurk) and Pan captures the aerodactyl . Recovery at the hospital revealed that Pan was pregnant with Justin Smart’s baby. She had only confided with Lyla; she wanted to keep tight lipped until she met with Justin. Meanwhile, Douken fought to the last pokemon against the gym leader Vega, earning his second badge. Finally, Pan traded her cleffa for Darryn’s poliwag, hoping that Lima would finally be able to pursue her dreams while the poliwag gained a new purpose in life. The RP ended with Pan and Douken flying north for Gigarte while Darryn and Lyla prepared for the trip to Fidona. Man, that’s a lot of stuff… -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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Jun 15 2012, 12:51 AM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
Looks like this one is up to me! Give me a few days, and I'll get it up and running.
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Jun 15 2012, 11:03 PM
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Space Force? Pirate? Outlaw sounds nice... Group: Members Posts: 1 406 Joined: 28-April 09 From: Right here Member No.: 17 104 PANE |
And alas, the stage has been set with Rocking the Waves of Fidona where Seiccan Serroc, Cesc Rojas, and Hunter Price each tried to take a chance at the spotlight.
Opening Event: Contest battle between Seican and Cesc, with Cesc winning and setting up the duo's rivalry. Catching Event: The three race to try and catch a silly Castform, with Seican catching and Hunter getting distracted with a Scoropi and catching. Contest Event: Cesc and Seican each took their hands to the stage, getting their chance to fight Carmen. As Cesc won with the double knockout, Seican lost via points. Hunter left because of computer and RL issues and had planned a battle against Maxi Z. However, the du left him at the Pokemon Center, not caring about the kid. Cesc: 2 Seican: 1 -------------------- |
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Jun 19 2012, 01:11 AM
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Team Rogue: Pidgeotto Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 543 Joined: 9-January 08 From: Amazingstoke, UK Member No.: 814 PANE: Darryn Kellor |
Rocking the Waves: I'm on it. Latest for the result to be up will be Sunday but hopefully sooner.
~LA -------------------- Darryn Kellor ~ ~ PANE Moderator ~ ~ Lori Pardare PANE Characters (click to show ) LA's Plays (click to show ) Unovalocke (click to show ) |
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Jun 19 2012, 10:40 PM
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I'm dying to see how this one ends. Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 861 Joined: 22-December 09 From: Washington, DC Member No.: 77 254 Taggarty Lee |
Pedagogues and Pugilists at a Particular Pageant in Prominent Petropolis.
It's a lengthy title with a packed plot. You guys manage to accomplish a lot in four pages of roleplay. Some "Wall-O-Text" joint posts easily helped smooth things along, so thank you for those. With Action and Drama aplenty, there was certainly enough to keep me engaged the entire time, so well done by you guys. Darryn Kellor- Living Arrow (click to show ) Pandora Gibbs - Toogee (click to show ) Douken Sota - Eponymous (click to show )
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Jun 24 2012, 04:11 PM
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Team Rogue: Pidgeotto Group: RP Moderators Posts: 1 543 Joined: 9-January 08 From: Amazingstoke, UK Member No.: 814 PANE: Darryn Kellor |
GRADING: Rocking the Waves of Fidona Island! This one's got battles a'plenty and there was a whole bunch of characterisation throughout! Quite a lot to get through in this roleplay but thankfully I was involved with a portion so had a little bit of a head start this time around. NON-STOP BATTLING FTW! Douken Sota – Seican Serroc (click to show ) Kamaitachi – Cesc Rojas (click to show ) free oatmeal – Hunter Price (click to show )
-------------------- Darryn Kellor ~ ~ PANE Moderator ~ ~ Lori Pardare PANE Characters (click to show ) LA's Plays (click to show ) Unovalocke (click to show ) |
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Jul 5 2012, 10:03 PM
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Omar comin' Group: Members Posts: 889 Joined: 12-April 09 From: Texas Member No.: 10 745 PANE |
Back in the Zone has been completed.
Taggarty Lee - Current Levels Vernon Blazena - Current Levels Jill Laurent - Current Levels Still in Gigarte, Taggarty Lee decides to train in preparation for a gym battle against the gym leader, Chloe. He runs into Vernon from previous travels, as well as Jill Laurent, who recently came into a sum of money large enough to quit her job. She has decided on Gigarte's gym. The three team up when a bunch of pokemon from the nearby circus are set free and are integral in putting down the stampede. Afterwards, both Tag and Jill try their hand against Chloe. -------------------- [spoiler=PANE - Justin Smart] Justin Smart Profile Current Level Post Wiki Currently In: Zoobreak! [align=right] Nate Guzman (Partner) Wiki[/spoiler] [/align] [spoiler=PANE - Jill Laurent] Jill Laurent Profile Current Levels Post Currently In: Back in the Zone[/spoiler] [spoiler=Uprising - Abraham West]Magma - Grunt Abraham West Profile Progress Tracking Currently In: Interception! :piloswine: :elekid: :shellder:[/spoiler] |
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