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Living Arrow
post Dec 1 2011, 02:26 AM
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GRADING: THEFT IN BARLEY


All in all a very basic roleplay that was well-written. Albeit predictable, I found it interesting to read from you three as I’m not familiar with your roleplaying as members in this forum and was keen to see how you worked together. Below are your scores and a couple of general comments:

Minor note for all of you: Please remember that not everyone can follow every roleplay so nicknames for Pokemon are not descriptive enough at the individual’s first mention. For exmple: “Lady was walking down the street...” isn’t as good as “Darryn’s Vulpix, Lady, was walking down the street…”. After the first mention, this is less important.
Also, all three of you should watch out so spellings and grammar – reading through your posts once before sending them in should help with that.

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post Dec 22 2011, 04:14 PM
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War On Drugs: A Sequel to Gigarte Grotto

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Daniel Worthington-Amissa-CL*Thread Runner
Mack Echo Nima-Deyv87-CL
Amelia Himan-Jonahman10-CL
Delainey Triell-Ozzy-CL

Summary:
The cast is called back to help investigate the Gigarte Grotto Disaster, this time with a Pokeball specialist to help analyze the dreadful Pokeballs. After uncovering another facility in the mangled secret complex, Officer Jenny orders them to leave.

Note: After a prolonged absence of the thread leader and another member, we decided to cut the plot near the halfway point. Another continuation may be made if Amissa returns.


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post Dec 30 2011, 12:11 AM
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The Hundred Years War: Review of “War on Drugs”

I think “War on Drugs” has been the longest running RP in PANE’s history. It’s sad to see inactivity kill it off. There is precedent for RP members continuing the thread long after the leader had left. I wouldn’t have minded seeing Amelia and Delainey become closer friends during the mission. Perhaps another time. Anywho, on with the review!

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post Jan 1 2012, 02:07 PM
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Aridana's Absolutely Awful Adventure

Discussion and OOC topic

Characters:

Pokefan209: Kenz Issone - Current Levels (Thread Wrangler)
SaphireShadows: Christine Tennebraum - Current Levels
Pikalover10: Jason Goldan - Current Levels
Dragonwish2: Elizabeth (Liz) Nadira Shir - Current Levels

Major Events:

Jason caught a Poochyena.
Christine caught a Bulbusaur.
The quartet was kidnapped and taken to Aridana from Port Barley.

Summary:

After an exciting reunion of old and new friends in Port Barley, the group is lured into an alley by a strange man. Knocked out with a Sleep Powder attack, they are taken to Aridana overnight, waking to find themselves tied up and held captive by a gross evil man and beautiful cruel woman. They are told they must work in their circus act, threatened at the lives of their Pokemon.

Due to the other three cast member's profiles being archived, and their lack of activity (the last post was in September), and due to me not having any idea to even make a smooth ending straight out of the climax, I put this up to be graded. With only 34 posts, this was a fairly short RP.


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post Jan 1 2012, 07:49 PM
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Cut Awfully Short: Review of “Aridana’s Absolutely Awful Adventure”

Though this RP met the grading requirements, the story portion didn’t even really get started. It’s a shame, because according to the discussion thread, this had potential to be a pretty silly RP. I wish this went a bit further, but with only one member remaining, what can you do?

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post Jan 17 2012, 10:51 PM
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A Lost Gem is now complete.

Discussion Thread

Participants:

Liam West -- Angels Fall First
Kefka Gama -- Xehanorto
Jill Laurent -- Yzarc Drowsnam
Lysander Kirby Doyle -- Umbrae Calamitas

Start Date: August 19, 2011
End Date: January 17, 2012
Length: 32 posts

Summary:

When two people bump into each other on the streets, it's a simple accident. Another introduces himself, and it's introductions all around. Everything is fine on a beautiful morning in the city, until the one stranger's pokemon is stolen, and the chase is on. After initially failing to catch the thief, Jill Laurent is joined by Lysander Doyle, and the two chase after the thief, eventually catching him after a pokemon battle. As it turns out, he's already handed his stolen prize off. With a new comprehension of each other's skills, among other things, Jill and Lysander continue on after the next set of thieves, eventually catching up to them in another part of town.


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post Jan 18 2012, 12:33 AM
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A FOUND GEM!?

Overview: The roleplay quickly trimmed down into just Jill and Lysander. That sort of things sadden me a bit, when a thread-runner leaves. Anywho, good job, you two, for picking up the slack and continuing on regardless of absences.

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post Jan 19 2012, 10:45 PM
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The Tormented has been completed.

Justin Smart - Current Levels
Tag Lee - Current Levels
Nate Guzman

Tag goes back to Gigarte in search of Raven, while Justin and Nate go back there for a Team Deception mission involving protecting a sleeping officer. The three meet up again, but are afflicted by whatever was affecting the officer. They also work alongside a team of three other Team Deception members: Omar, Miriam and Ace. Begin a terrifying series of nightmares, controlled by a seemingly nefarious villain.

Thanks, in advance! it might be somewhat of a read, but Kam and I are quite patient.


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post Jan 22 2012, 01:01 PM
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Nightmare on Gigarte St: Review of “The Tormented”

This was a very impressive RP. Going through everyone’s worst nightmares gave added depth to their character. Combined with an appearance by Darkrai, this made for a great read. Check it out if you have a lazy Sunday afternoon ahead of you.

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post Mar 3 2012, 01:55 AM
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The Cusp of Twilight has come to a close!

Began:October 11th, 2011
Ended: March 3rd, 2012

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Master Houndoom - Jaima Kuonji - current levels
Umbrae Calamitas - Tuesday Berdison - current levels

(Thank you, Living Arrow, for playing Vega.)

One of their group has turned their attention to other horizons and left to pursue a dream elsewhere, leaving Jaima, Tuesday, and Meiko to travel to the Petropolis gym so that Tuesday may face the gym leader in her first ever gym match. The match is long and the confident, experienced gym leader is faced against a learning opponent whose mind wanders faster than their pokemon can attack. Still, by the skin of her teeth and more luck than a leprechaun, she comes out on top, only to head back to the pokemon center to find Professor Oak awaiting her call, with a mission for his research assistant to perform, as her friends leave for PokeCon.


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post Mar 3 2012, 11:31 AM
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Cusp of Twilight:

Well. The bulk of this piece is Tuesday's gym battle. There was some sideplot going on, with a recurrance of the villains from Divide and Conquer, unless I miss my guess. There was also some foreshadowing. I think it's safe to classify this as an 'in-between' roleplay, while you set things up for a future one. I'm hoping some of the plot-lines started here appear in "Changing of the Guard".

Blah blah blah, how I do go on!

In any case, I'd been debating on how to go about this roleplay. Well, I debated with myself.

Here's what I got:

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I look forward to seeing where these new threads lead. Thank you guys for the fun read. *Killed for a terrible rhyme*.


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post Mar 15 2012, 10:38 PM
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The Bug Catching Contest has reached its conclusion.

Cesc Rojas - Current Levels
Branwys 'Tinkertot' Muphenz Current Levels
Seiccan Serroc - Current Levels

Brief Synopsis in bullet point form:
  • There is a Bug Catching Contest
  • Branwys and Cesc reunite, also briefly meet Seiccan
  • Seiccan catches a Spinarak
  • Cesc catches a Scyther
  • There is great chaos due to a Spider Stampede, the cast is separated, and winds up with each others' pokemon
  • The source of agitation in the bugs comes from a sonic inducer (or transducer?) Our heroes all converge there, magically, and fight the two goons running the machine.
  • Aforementioned Goons are defeated.
  • No one of note wins the Bug Catching Contest, but great fun and adventure were had by all. Also kisses (but not for Seiccan)

Thank you in Advance


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post Mar 17 2012, 07:08 PM
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Insect Snatching Challenge: Review of “The Bug Catching Contest”

What started as a typical bug challenge turned into a race to stop crazed bugs from destroying everything, all this fuss from a tiny machine. This was probably one of the more innovative RPs I’ve seen. Switching pokemon and the disastrous results that followed was a rather humorous read. That sequence was rather confusing with all the names being thrown around, however. I wasn’t sure who was who >_>. Oh well, onward.

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post May 19 2012, 06:58 PM
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Gigarte Gemma has concluded. (It essentially ended all the way back in February but I was too lazy to post until now. My fault completely.)

Cast
1. Amelia Himan-CL- Jonahman10
2.Elizabeth (Liz) Nadira Shir-CL-Dragonwish
3. Darius Dovakin-CL- Toogee
4.Fenrir-CL-ShinyRalts

Synopsis: Mr. Darsey has a pest problem, so he enlists some volunteers. However, the volunteers discover a myriad of vague Pride and Prejudice references sabotage to the environmental controls in a nearby sector, leading to a brief conflict before several arrests are made.


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post May 19 2012, 10:45 PM
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Gigarte Gemma Grading!

The unique mix of this cast creates for an interesting story cocktail. It never once lost my interest, and I was constantly checking for updates while it was running at full speed.

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post Jun 14 2012, 10:45 PM
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PPPPPP is finally complete.

Featuring:

Pan Gibbs- Toogee
Douken Sota- Douken Sota
Darryn Kellor and Lyla Moore- Living Arrow

Pan and Douken take a nice break in Petropolis, crashing at Darryn’s apartment while Douken trains and Pan works. First on the list, Pan took her buddies to the museum for a fundraising event…which was quickly crashed by the Disciples of Darkrai. Fighting ensues, triggering the revival machine to unleash a shiny aerodactyl. Pan grabs on and goes for the ride of her life. Her friends follow to make sure she doesn’t get turned into a Pancake. Despite the crash into the streets below, everything works out (thanks to her newly evolved golurk) and Pan captures the aerodactyl .

Recovery at the hospital revealed that Pan was pregnant with Justin Smart’s baby. She had only confided with Lyla; she wanted to keep tight lipped until she met with Justin. Meanwhile, Douken fought to the last pokemon against the gym leader Vega, earning his second badge. Finally, Pan traded her cleffa for Darryn’s poliwag, hoping that Lima would finally be able to pursue her dreams while the poliwag gained a new purpose in life. The RP ended with Pan and Douken flying north for Gigarte while Darryn and Lyla prepared for the trip to Fidona.

Man, that’s a lot of stuff…


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post Jun 15 2012, 12:51 AM
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Looks like this one is up to me! Give me a few days, and I'll get it up and running.


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post Jun 15 2012, 11:03 PM
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Space Force? Pirate? Outlaw sounds nice...
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And alas, the stage has been set with Rocking the Waves of Fidona where Seiccan Serroc, Cesc Rojas, and Hunter Price each tried to take a chance at the spotlight.

Opening Event: Contest battle between Seican and Cesc, with Cesc winning and setting up the duo's rivalry.
Catching Event: The three race to try and catch a silly Castform, with Seican catching and Hunter getting distracted with a Scoropi and catching.
Contest Event: Cesc and Seican each took their hands to the stage, getting their chance to fight Carmen. As Cesc won with the double knockout, Seican lost via points.

Hunter left because of computer and RL issues and had planned a battle against Maxi Z. However, the du left him at the Pokemon Center, not caring about the kid.

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post Jun 19 2012, 01:11 AM
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post Jun 19 2012, 10:40 PM
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Pedagogues and Pugilists at a Particular Pageant in Prominent Petropolis.

It's a lengthy title with a packed plot. You guys manage to accomplish a lot in four pages of roleplay. Some "Wall-O-Text" joint posts easily helped smooth things along, so thank you for those. With Action and Drama aplenty, there was certainly enough to keep me engaged the entire time, so well done by you guys.

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