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Wildivlax
post Feb 13 2011, 04:24 PM
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Felisha's Team!



Exploring Demalr Cave has died away, but has over 15 posts.

RPers:
Felisha Roke (Pibbler)
Branwys "Tinkertot" Muphenz (Master Houndoom) and Lysander Kirby Doyle (Umbrae Calamitus) dropped out.

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Important Events:
Felish obtains a new Pokegear.
Branwys drops her phone into the sea.
Lionheart pukes on Felisha.
Branwys gets very mad and embarrases herself in front of a lot of people.
Felisha is knocked out by her own Pokemon.
Felisha catches Trouble the Dustox.

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post Feb 14 2011, 04:45 PM
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Ranch Sitters has concluded! 

Players: Summary:
Eron Ingress finds himself helping out at Loch Ranch — albeit doing it unwillingly. Seemingly unable to give up his glamourous life, he dreads the mud and the heavy rain, especially when a man clad in orange runs into him and gets the wet dirt all over him. Enter Celino Molenaro — deaf man that's unable to speak. 

Eron begrudgingly tries to be nice to the creepy man and they end up bonding slightly. Celino, having recognised the rockstar, cuts his hair to make him less recognisable. Even their pokemon bond — Celino's stuck up Pichu named Pride finds himself caring for the sick Runner, another Pichu. They place Runner near the generator in the egg incubator, where they've been storing unique eggs that the two have never seen before, and go eat...

...when an explosion sounds, sending tremors through the farm house. It turns out, Team Deception, disguised as farmhands, has caused the generator to explode, and they quickly take as many eggs as they can. With Runner still in the now aflame incubator, the two dive into action, attempting to stop the team whilst the farmhands' water pokemon try to halt the fire. In the end, they get Runner and a majority of the eggs out. However, Team Deception has taken some rare ones. Angered at this, Eron leads Celino to them and they take them out. Although, Eron's dad has been alerted to Eron's whereabouts... 

Important Happenings:
  • Celino acquires a Sewaddle egg, whilst Eron gets a Blitzle egg. 
  • Team Deception is spotted near Loch Ranch


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post Mar 12 2011, 04:35 AM
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I want to thank you all for your patience. There are some of you that have been purged from PANE, but you still get grades anyways, in case you one day decide to return and collect them.

The build in the rp was very slow. Since you had so many characters, it took FOREVER to get everyone to even meet. There was a lot of interaction, but I'm surprised no one took the time to talk to one another. "Where are you from? What pokemon do you have?", etc, until much later. Since all of the characters were starting their journeys, wouldn't that be the sort of thing to talk about?

A technical aspects: Houndour evolves into Houndoom at Level 24. Most of your pokemon were at least ten levels lower by comparison, if not more. Combine this with three other Houndour, it's borderline ridiculous. At least the Muk was taken out by an Empoleon.

I know it's hard to create an interesting story when characters are dropping out left and right, but I appreciate your work in pushing through.

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post Mar 12 2011, 01:06 PM
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Since Master Houndoom and Umbrae Calamitas left the roleplay, their contributions will not be graded.


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Short but sweet, this roleplay was a pleasure to read. A shame luke39 dropped out after one post... but your scores have not suffered as a result. Clearly, Celino and Eron are a good team and I'm keen to see where they head next. As a pair, you were pretty even in my grading so I've lumped you together in the spoiler.
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post Apr 4 2011, 07:49 PM
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Banished Bugs Has been completed.

Kaya Rovera-FirePower
Willow Deacon-Jansen
James Stanley-luke39

Plot:A bug pokemon reserve near Artho town had been recently plagued with the mysterious disappearance of several tagged pokemon. In hopes to discover the source of the problem, the head researcher, Professor Peyton, decides to hire a few trainers to follow three pokemon around the reserve for a few hours and see what happens. After a while, some men in lab coats come and try to steal the weedle James was following, the Sewwadle Willow was following, and the caterrpie Kaya was following. Even though each of the scientists lost in a pokemon battle, they made off with said pokemon. The three of them ran after the thieves, eventually losing them when coming to a cave guarded by three deception grunts. After sneaking past the guards, they go though the cave until coming to a large chamber with a few more deception grunts. After beating the criminals in a battle, the trio learns that most of the pokemon have already been shipped to Deception HQ and the bad guys had pulled off by posting spies disguised as scientists in the facility. Eventually the bad guys got away, though they left behind two smoke balls, which went to Willow and James. After freeing the remaining bug pokemon, They went back to the building and told their story. As a reward for helping the scientists, Kaya, James, and Willow each got twenty dollars and were allowed to catch a pokemon on the reserve. After leaving, the three of them decided travel together to Barley.

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post Apr 5 2011, 02:24 AM
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Banished Bugs:

With no real exposition, it’s kind of hard for the reader to follow what’s going on right away. If I hadn’t read the synopsis from your RP Grading post, I would’ve had no idea what was going on.

It’s a very battle heavy roleplay, which is okay. I would’ve liked to have seen more interaction between the three of you. It’s hard to believe that you became fast friends when you hardly talked to one another.

Overall, not a bad rp. There’s plenty of room for improvement, so I hope you guys do!

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post Apr 12 2011, 11:45 PM
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Arasam, That Toddling Town is complete.

Dramatis Personae:

Taggarty Lee - Played by Kamaitachi
Raven Amaranth - Played by Tymid

Otis of Arasam - Played by Bogart, then recast and played by Living Arrow

Summary:
Tag and Raven, fresh off of their ordeal in "When Crime Pays" spend the day in Arasam. Raven ends up purchasing a blind shiny Vulpix, whom she names A Capella. The two discuss Raven's past a bit, and it's revealed to the masses that Raven has been spotted in Arasam, drawing the attention of many people. Tag goes on to challenge the gym, earning himself an Emberwing badge. The duo leave Arasam.

This is mostly something of a set-up for the next rp. At least, it wasn't that way at first, but it totally is now.

Things of Consequence:
Raven acquires a Shiny, Blind Vulpix
Tag's Kyoko evolves into a Bellossom
Tag wins the Emberwing badge.

Tada.


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post Apr 17 2011, 05:55 PM
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Toddle Tale: Review of “Arasam, That Toddling Town”

A very good RP from start to finish. In this RP, we see Tag and Raven getting closer to each other, without interference from kids and TD members :P. Let’s move on, shall we?

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post Apr 22 2011, 04:39 AM
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In the Jungle, the Mighty Jungle has [finally] come to an end.

(V E R Y) B R I E F C O U R S E O F E V E N T S
This RP follows the course of events from Port Barley to Fidona, where Alex and Tikal have their gym battles (Tyson was meant to, but never did.) There are plenty of events occurring, such as a lot of activity on the boat and even more as we reach Fidona.

C H A R A C T E R S
Alex Slasher- Proby
Tom Hawk (Alex's Partner)- Proby
Tikal Faylen- rt117
Tyson Parker- Protoman
Nate Redwood (Now an dead profile)- Metal Nate

P R O B L E M S
Metal Nate left the RP quite early, and soon was cleared out in the Great Purge anyway. We tried to do this nicely, but saying they didn't notice that he hadn't left the boat.

Protoman, who we are desperately hoping will come back, has apparently, if I am correct, has password issues with both his Gts+ account and Yahoo mail, meaning there is no way of contacting him. He left just before we launched into the gym battles and hasn't come back since.

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post Apr 22 2011, 03:21 PM
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In The Jungle, the Mighty Jungle Grading


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I can't really grade Metal Nate's one post; most I could give him was a 1 in skill for the post that he wrote. If he decides to come back, he can have that one point.


It was a good read, guys! Don't take my advice in a negative manner, please. I've watched all of you RP before, and the advice I give is simply to help. ^_^.gif






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post Apr 27 2011, 06:25 AM
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Lopsided Leviathan of Languid Lenoilia is finally complete!

Pandora GIbbs- 2gamers
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Justin Smart/Nate Guzman- Yzarc Drowsnam

In 4L, Pan and Douken arrive in Lenoilia, which had been briefly taken over by a biker gang. With the help of Justin Smart and Nate Guzman, they set out to overthrow the gang and set things right in Lenoilia. The twist: the biker gang was put in power by Team Deception as an experiment to test the power of a shadow pokemon. Knowing this, Justin and Nate continue to help Pan and Douken, risking their careers and possibly their lives. Everything ends happily, but Justin’s abrupt exit leaves Pan a bit heartbroken.

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1. All bunnying was done with approval.
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post Apr 28 2011, 10:47 PM
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OKAY. Sorry this took so ridiculously long. I just finished my finals. Woo! Figured I'd get this done before I move. Boo. If you have any questions, please PM me. Thank y'all for a good read!


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post May 11 2011, 04:14 PM
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Finn missed his boat ride to the mainland. As he is waiting on a bench he meets Cesc, who is running and errand for his aunt and uncle. As any other trainer would, Finn asks for a battle. He gets a bit frustrated with his Pokemon and the battle gets cut short thanks to a raging bull.

Things get solved and cleared up in the end.

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post May 14 2011, 10:33 PM
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The Cow Goes Moo: Review of “Going Bovine”

It meets the posting length, but I think the RP could have lasted a bit longer. Their interactions were a bit limited, but still pretty good. Let’s see what we can do.

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post Jun 12 2011, 11:32 AM
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After a massively long delay, Why Angry Gyaradoses Are Red has decidedly been declared as dead (after discussing it with Duck Tape and Charlie Piers). Honestly, I'm not sure if it can even be graded anymore since both Charlie and Duck's characters have been moved to the Dead Profile archive (though both have expressed interest in reviving their characters), and because it's so old, but I just wanted to get it up here so that Alex could have some closure for it, so that she can move on to another RP.

Players Include:
Alex Treinem
Dynh Ariani (Dead Profile)
Mercedes Dorian (Dead Profile)

Important Events:
Dynh's caterpie CC evolved into a poor, abused Metapod-turned-football.
Alex and Dynh battled, and Dynh proved that not every trainer instinctively knows what moves their pokemon can learn.
Kuchi, Alex's new Mawile, was a smug bastard.
Dynh captured a Feebas almost by accident.
An angry Gyarados attacked the troupe.
Alex almost drowned, and Ouji was a BAMF.

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post Jun 12 2011, 05:14 PM
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Fishing Anyone? has been inactive for a very long time now, and I'm pretty certain that the only other RPer from me who was posting in it has vanished from the site. Since the RP has 24 posts, I understand that it is eligible for grading.

DC Moriarty (Current Levels) - Red Kitten
Christopher Portnoy (Current Levels) - Arcyena

Summary: Chris and DC happen to meet each other at a small pond south of Arasam, both trainers hoping to find a valuable Water-Type Pokémon to fill a vital role in their teams. The two soon get to talking, however, the conversation is interrupted when Chris hooks a Sharpedo of all things, quite the phenomenon when one considers a Sharpedo's usual habitat. After a tussle with the shark-like Pokémon, resulting in Chris' wire snapping, the two are relieved to find that the Sharpedo has vanished from sight, and opt to take a gentle swim to relax a little, not to mention allow the previously calm ambiance to restore itself to the pond, in order to make future catches more likely. However, the two still find themselves being interrupted by another pair of trainers, seemingly keen on making sure that their relationship-status was know to the world, one of them with their eyes set on Chris' Houndoor, intending to purchase the Dark-Fire Canine from the Hoenn-born male, both the Pokémon and her trainer not really too fond of this idea. An argument soon breaks out, escalating into a double battle between them, which DC and Chris win relatively comfortably, resulting in the intimate pair blaming all but themselves as they leave Chris and DC to attempt to carry on with their fishing.
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post Jun 12 2011, 10:50 PM
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Cliffhanger! Angry Gyarados is still Red!

So, it's incomplete, obviously. I can't rightly give you full marks for them.

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Go Fish! It's your turn!

This was also incomplete, so again, I can't feel compelled to give you full marks.

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Had this roleplay completed, I would've had no qualms giving either of you perfect marks. If Red Kitten returns to PANE, she's welcome to pick up her points from here.


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post Jun 18 2011, 01:10 AM
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Scarily close to a year, 20,000 Corsola Under the Sea has finally come to an end.

Joey J. Sweet - LittleShadowPokemon
Twila Reanne - SaphireShadows
Vincent Waters - Pumpkin King ....Archived.


Plot Summary:

Deciding to travel to Fidona together, Vincent and Joey board the S.S. Starlight Cruise ship and enjoy themselves. Before they reach their destination however, Joey meets a young girl by the name of Twila Reanne. They end up battling with Kimiko the Igglybuff versus Merle the Makuhita. As things got too heated for the baby Pokemon, Joey recalled her and forfeited the first round. Next, it was Babylon the Eevee versus Mai the Ralts. While both sides used some good strategies, Babylon ran back to his trainer and returned himself to his Pokeball after getting hit square on with a brutal Psychic attack. After a quick game of chase, Joey consented to get to know Twila better and during their conversation time, the boat strikes a wall of nesting Corsola who were having problems of their own. Problems with very sharp teeth.

Important Happenings:
The boat ends up docking at Petropolis.
Joey is now wheelchair bound, temporarily.
He has also lost his hearing, not so temporarily.

My apologies in advance for forgetting anything.

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post Jun 18 2011, 04:06 AM
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RP Grading – 20,000 Corsola Under The Sea


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Two introverted characters on a boat. Two characters unsure of their futures as trainers on a boat. Two characters… with awesome Roleplayers! Below are your grades (apologies for the wait) and I think you both deserve every point. I had been following this roleplay for a while and it’s not my first time grading you both either so I’m pleased to see you both taking on board comments from before and am keen to see Darryn or Lori come your way. ^__^
I love little Joey and Twila. They are a little naďve when it comes to being a trainers but they are beginners and it’s great to see that you haven’t lost sight of that just yet. Though, with the way they’re progressing, I’m sure Badges/Ribbons/Medals/Fame will be on their way soon!
Great use of PMs for your battle and everything was well written for the entire roleplay.

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post Jun 22 2011, 08:45 AM
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The Wonders Of Port Barley has been completed.

Xepidental as James Stanley (left)

Jansen as Willow Deacon(left)

Asterna as Rose Fiore

FirePower as Kaya Rovera


IMPORTANT EVENTS
*Willow, James, and Kaya arrive in Port Barley and decide to eat in a pizzeria
*Rose arrives, goes to the same restaurant as the others, and joins their group.
*James sees a pokeathalon poster
*Kaya meets Luke
*A double battle is proposed, but it never got started. RP turned in for people dropping out and inactivity.


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