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Living Arrow
post Jun 24 2012, 04:11 PM
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GRADING: Rocking the Waves of Fidona Island!


This one's got battles a'plenty and there was a whole bunch of characterisation throughout! Quite a lot to get through in this roleplay but thankfully I was involved with a portion so had a little bit of a head start this time around. NON-STOP BATTLING FTW!

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post Jul 5 2012, 10:03 PM
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Back in the Zone has been completed.

Taggarty Lee - Current Levels
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Still in Gigarte, Taggarty Lee decides to train in preparation for a gym battle against the gym leader, Chloe. He runs into Vernon from previous travels, as well as Jill Laurent, who recently came into a sum of money large enough to quit her job. She has decided on Gigarte's gym.

The three team up when a bunch of pokemon from the nearby circus are set free and are integral in putting down the stampede. Afterwards, both Tag and Jill try their hand against Chloe.


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post Jul 9 2012, 12:41 AM
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I'll take this one - expect a grade by the weekend happy.gif


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post Jul 12 2012, 07:47 AM
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After some discussion with one of the other players, In The Village, the Peaceful Village, Back in Fidona! is to be closed and reviewed for grading. It is technically incomplete, however it wasnt far from being finished.

Alex Slasher - Current Levels
Tikal Faylen -No Current Level Page currently (was removed during purge, a mod has already been contacted about this)
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Melissa “Mel” Sinclaire - No Current Level Page (Purged)

Following the events of 'In The Jungle, The Mighty Jungle', Alex, Tom, and Tikal gather together to go watch Tom participate at an event in the Fidona festival, while a disoriented Tyson (who awakens to find himself lost), meets Mel, who practice with a quick battle. Eventually the four meet up at the festival, where Tyson and Tikal go off on their own for awhile to have a practice battle, before returning to the contest that Tom signed up for. After the events, Alex and Tikal go off to explore some ancient ruins to kill some time.

Events:
Tikal's Igglybuff evolves into Jigglypuff
Alex's Torchic evolves into Combusken
Alex's Mudkip evolves into Marshtomp
Alex's Shinx evolves into Luxio
Mel captures a Kangaskhan
Tyson captures a Zorua
Tyson's Cyndaquil evolves into Quilava

Alex was supposed to catch a Riolu in the ruins, but we didn't get that far

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post Jul 12 2012, 02:25 PM
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That Lion Still Sleeps!? - Review for "In the Village, the Peaceful Village"

Overview:

When I read rps, I'm definitely looking for a story, something coherent that ties everything together. This appears to be a happenstance series of events, with each character basically just doing their own thing, then battling one another. I figure if the story had played out further, there would've been something, but as it stands, there's not much happening except individual events for each of your characters. The story also came off as just a means to have everyone's pokemon evolve. I can't rightly give full points for these things, you know?

One thing to watch out for, even though I enjoy it, is giving your characters' pokemon more personality than the human characters. Your characters' personalities need to be just as evident as the ones you display your pokemon with, otherwise Tyson, Tikal, Alex and Mel fade into generic blandness.

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Total: 10/15

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post Jul 17 2012, 03:59 PM
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RP Grading – Back in the Zone


Overview:

So so sorry for being late on this one, guys! Thanks for your patience and, more importantly, thanks for a great read! I always love the spectacle of gym battles and so getting to grade this one was a good thing for me! Let's hope the Channel 4 news group were filming in the audience wink.gif

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post Sep 25 2012, 09:43 AM
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The Ghostly Calls From The House Of Nightmares is closing because Pinsir went MIA and Huntman seems to be too busy to ontinue with pane (Life over RP). No use in grading it since it was only a set up to the set plot and it is not even half a page long.


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post Sep 25 2012, 04:04 PM
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Blargleblargh. I hate it when RPs die out like that!

As a consolation though, I can give you the 3/15 minimum score for an incomplete roleplay. Huntsman and Pinsir are free to retrieve their 3 points as well, should they ever deign to return to us.


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post Oct 11 2012, 01:08 AM
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Flowers in the Jungle is complete!

Participants:

Living Arrow - Lori Pardare
LSP - Joey Sweet

Synopsis:

Meeting for the first time on the outskirts of Fidona's main town, Lori and Joey get off to a shakey start with their introductions but it is rapidly evident that Lori has far less experience with Pokemon training than Joey. He agrees to help her catch a wild Unova Pokemon (as per her mission) and soon enough they find a Purrloin chasing a Minccino.
Lori's Piplup quickly falls in battle against the two wild Pokemon and so Lori asks Joey to battle with her so that she can catch both. Her Snivy and his Igglybuff battle well but the Minccino escapes and Joey accidentally catches the Purrloin himself! Lori is instantly offended but Joey assures her that he will continue to help with her first capture. Overjoyed with the assistance promised to her, Lori writes a letter to her sister Kino (Unova League Champion) and requests some strings get pulled so that Joey lands his own sponsorship deal so that he can have enough money to fed and clothe himself and his Pokemon better than he has been so far.
Back in the forest, both trainers locate the Minccino from the day before and Lori enters battle with it again. However, yet again, it gets away. Furious and determined, Lori goes in hot pursuit and ends up chasing it into the massive nest of a Braviary. Chased out of the nest while examining an egg she found in the nest, Lori and Joey find themselves defending from the massive eagle's attacks and work together to trap it under the roots of a tree. Shortly after, Lori puts everything she has into catching the Minccino and finally succeeds.
Just when it seems all is calm, both trainers are escorted by spear point to a local tribal village where they are requested to help with a bizarre marriage ceremony by battling Alomomola. They do and leave at the first opportunity.
Back at the Pokemon Center, the pair are joined by Lori's sister Kino who has brought along a potential sponsor for Joey - Jana de Vries. This woman offers Joey a Co-Ordinator sponsorship while Kino explains the terms of Lori's own deal to her in more detail.

The RP ends with Joey going to begin the first day of his sponsorship and Lori preparing for a Gym match at the Fidona Gym.

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post Oct 14 2012, 03:10 PM
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RP Grading - Flowers in the Jungle


Overview:
This took me a little while to get through. It was a long RP, and I gotta say, it moved painfully slowly towards the beginning. The plot moved around quickly, but the focus was on the growth of the relationship between Joey and Lori, so the constantly shifting plot points were of little consequence to the ultimate purpose.

I guess my biggest issue with this is that the biggest obstacle the two trainers overcame happened in the first half - The Braviary attack. It seemed like it was getting scarier when they were captured by the natives, but they ultimately got out of that because Lori is well connected and it was pretty clear they were never in any real danger. It made for a somewhat anticlimactic plot, in my opinion. Still, it was well written on both parts, and we can't expect young trainers with low leveled pokemon to be involved in epic stories.

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post Dec 19 2012, 08:19 AM
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Battle Bounty has been completed

In this short, two on two RP, Gaven and David work together to fight a large Heatmor for a bit of Poke. I'll be honest, the only reason I participated in this was because I was waiting for my friends down at the GTS Roleplayer's Coalition to sign up, so I don't expect high marks.


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post Dec 20 2012, 12:26 PM
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I'll take this. I should have time to read and get a proper review in by Monday.

Unless the world explodes.

So Monday.


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post Dec 24 2012, 07:50 PM
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Barley Bounty

The RP is super quickly done. One minute David and Ganym meet, are suspicious of one another, their pokemon interact, then suddenly they're already fighting the thing they were searching for.

It goes through the motions of an adventure, but, for me, there's a real lack of connection between the two outside of their teamwork. Gaven's suspicion disappears almost immediately, and there's no real denoument to the story. Heatmor captured and it's over. I think both of you could take just a little more time to go deeper into your writing.

But the story is a good traditional one, both of your writing is pretty good, and the battle was nicely done, even if there was only one.

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post Dec 31 2012, 12:27 PM
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Collective Insight and Chaotic Intentions at Crescent Inn has now been completed!

As a recap of events, Douken and Pan decided to get ready to call it a night when a large new building caught their eyes: Crescent Inn. Landing, they were able to see what the hype was about but lacked the money to rent the room for the pair. Douken tried to make a deal by using Darryn's name, which made Pan angry and storm off.

At the same time, Justin and his friend got a mission up in Arasam, but after a phone call from Pan, he chose to make a detour over to the inn. However, peace would not last long as an outside force decided to call it a night for everyone.

Each trainer was sent over into one of their Pokemon's dreams. Douken was sent into Maya's, Justin was sent into Octillary's, and Pan was sent into Frog's. However, with Dream Eaters invading these worlds, pathways into other dreams started to come forth, letting them come together until they reach the final dream, where they met Cressilia being held captive by a Gengar and his army. Fighting back, they were able to take down the boss.

Waking up from the events, Pan let them know about her pregnancy and Justin let Pan know about his work with Team Deception. With the events ending, Justin headed back into Arasam as Douken and Pan got ready for their last adventure together in Lenolia.

((Lilly made one post, but that was it. She never got there to join in the dreams.))

Key things:
Douken obtained a Dratini
Dratini evolved into Dragonair
Everyone obtained a Lunar Wing

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post Dec 31 2012, 02:51 PM
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I've been reading along as you post, so I'll take this one.

I should be able to have a grading up by Tuesday or Wednesday.

Happy New Years!


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post Jan 5 2013, 02:31 PM
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post May 10 2013, 09:10 PM
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Since my RP partner has not replied for several months and has disappeared almost all together, I would like to submit the incomplete RP Island Escape for grading.

Participants:
Protoman - Tyson Parker
rt117 - Tikal Faylen

Start Date: 15 July 2012
End Date: 10 May 2013 (Incomplete)
No. of Posts: 20

Summary:
In this RP, Tikal awaits her friend's arrival on the island of Fidona while getting some training done with her Charmeleon and Jigglypuff as she awaits Tyson's return from his 'overnight training', as he prepares for a rematch against the local gym leader. When they finally meet up, they proceed to the gym, remembering that the way up the stairs is host to a number of traps. Prior to entering the gym they make plans to go on a picnic, though before they can they must see if Tyson is ready for his rematch. The story got stopped at this point, currently at the start of the gym battle.

Notes:
- The picnic was supposed to be where Tikal battled and captured her Dratini. Im assuming that since the RP did not reach that point, I will have to reapply for the capture
- At the beginning of the RP, Tyson's Squirtle evolves into Wartortle.
- Tikal's Jigglypuff learns Nightmare, and Charmeleon learns Swords Dance.

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post May 11 2013, 01:23 PM
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Sorry it didn't work out for you guys. I'll grade it.


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post Jun 1 2013, 07:05 PM
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Yeah! Three weeks, that must be a damn record to read like 20 posts (which I already read a while ago haha)

Sorry about that. I moved last weekend so things were a little hectic all month, and on top of it, I still had to work of course. Anyway, the RP obviously didn't go for very long. Each of you had a small battle, and your posts were good (Protoman's were a little on the short side)

Tyson - 5 levels. You put in some work, but you gave up, so I can't justify giving any more than this. (These are, of course, assuming you ever come back sad.gif )

Tikal - 8 levels. Your posts were strong, and you stuck it out until it was clear Protoman wasn't coming back.

Hope it works out better for you next time!


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post Jun 1 2013, 10:44 PM
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Dancing to Darkrai's Destined Dirge is complete!

Pan and Douken traveled back to Lenoilia to meet up with a group of scientists researching cubone colonies. Turns out that was a ruse by Team Deception, who wanted them to enter the graveyard and face off with Darkrai's Disciples. They did just that...only to die trying. Luckily, their grim reaper was merciful and they were revived in time to stop Darkrai from conquering the world! They were victorious in battle, but Team Deception swooped in in the end and captured Darkrai!

It was a very crummy way to end Pan's adventures, but with a baby on the way, she had other things on her mind. She flies off to Barley to a ship headed for Kanto and her hometown of Celadon City. Well, that's what she thinks...

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