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Posted by: Tortelo Jan 21 2010, 01:55 AM

The Light Spirit Dex






Hi I am Yannick and I gonna work on a Light-Spirit dex it's based on the province spirits(faron,eldin,etc) from Zelda TP but there are much pokémon so I make this Topic so you can request a pokémon/fakémon and I make it a Light Spirit you can claim it but give me credits.



Rules:

1.Only Request two at once(from the same people)
2.If the two are made you may request more.
3.you may request a fakémon of you to become light spirit.
4.I do also eggs.
5.If you put a claimed pokémon in your sig plzz make it a link to the Dex
6.you can only claim one pokémon.


Example's





Kanto (click to show)


Jotho (click to show)


Hoenn (click to show)


Sinnoh (click to show)


??? (click to show)


Claim List (click to show)



Total Requests so far: 41

Posted by: Marcus Felding Jan 21 2010, 02:43 AM

I think a Tauros would suit Ordon.
I think a Vigoroth would suit Faron.
I think a Noctowl would suit Eldin.
And I think a Gyarados would suit Lanayru.

This isn't really a request. Just some random gibberish.

This is a request; Gyarados and Noctowl please.

Posted by: Shiny Ponyta Jan 21 2010, 02:50 AM

light ponyta please if u can

Posted by: Pizza Guy111 Jan 21 2010, 03:12 AM

Those look really good!

I'd like Wailord please.

Posted by: ShinyLugia Jan 21 2010, 03:45 AM

..Skarmory please.

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 21 2010, 12:07 PM

Okay finishd with all your requests,
Nice the first day so much people Request are open aigain.

Shiny lugia:



Pizza Guy:


Marcus Fleding:





Shiny Ponyta:


Posted by: ShinyLugia Jan 21 2010, 02:47 PM

Oooh, I love it. <3

Can I claim it? ;3

/skarmoryfan

Posted by: binderboy23 Jan 21 2010, 03:16 PM

Larvitar Please:)

Posted by: Fourtales Jan 21 2010, 04:05 PM

Your work is well done. I'm actually kinda surprised I haven't seen this concept before.

Ninetales and Leafeon please!

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 22 2010, 01:54 AM

Binderboy,Fourtales They are Made,

Binderboy:



Fourtales:





I hope you like it !

Posted by: Rumia Jan 23 2010, 07:41 PM

Can I have a Nidorina?

Posted by: DrMcCoy Jan 23 2010, 07:45 PM

How'd you like to do a Blissey?

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 24 2010, 01:29 AM

Okay I finishd them both,
I hope the dex stays alive I worry nobody will make a request next week sad.gif



Rumia:



DrMcCoy:


Posted by: DrMcCoy Jan 24 2010, 11:12 AM

Blissey Is So cool! Keep on Making these!

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 24 2010, 11:14 AM

QUOTE(DrMcCoy @ Jan 24 2010, 11:12 AM) *
Blissey Is So cool! Keep on Making these!


Thx cat.gif

Posted by: HueyLawliet Jan 24 2010, 06:19 PM

8D This is a request. Could you make a light Lugia and Raikou? Kaythanks~

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 25 2010, 01:31 AM

Okay made Lugia and Raikou.

HueyLawiet:




Posted by: Gallade3 Jan 25 2010, 05:10 AM

A Gallade and a Honchkrow shall be nice.

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 25 2010, 12:42 PM

Finishd them all,




Posted by: BORED TO DEATH Jan 25 2010, 03:35 PM

im an absol addict, soo... Absol and Giratina, plez cat.gif

Posted by: Gallade3 Jan 25 2010, 07:06 PM

I love it!

Posted by: Sea Salt Jan 25 2010, 08:17 PM

Light Corsola and Piplup, please? grin.gif These are awesome, by the way. awesome.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 26 2010, 12:21 PM

Made I hope you like it
I think Giratina looks crappy srry...

BORED TO DEATH:





Sea Salt :




Posted by: BORED TO DEATH Jan 26 2010, 01:06 PM

thanks! giratina normal looks quite awsome with it.

Can you do Lunatone?

For now on im adding a torterra to you.

torterra.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 26 2010, 02:16 PM

QUOTE(BORED TO DEATH @ Jan 26 2010, 01:06 PM) *
thanks! giratina normal looks quite awsome with it.

Can you do Lunatone?

For now on im adding a torterra to you.

torterra.gif


Okay but what is that torterra stands for grin.gif


Posted by: Sea Salt Jan 26 2010, 05:19 PM

Too cute~! awesome.gif May I claim them? If I'm only allowed to claim one, then I'd like it to be Corsola, please. cat.gif

Posted by: pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp Jan 26 2010, 07:26 PM

These are SUPER AWSOME!!
May I please have a light Manaphy. Thanks!!!

-wow, I just noticed how obsessed I am about Manaphys-

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 27 2010, 01:49 AM

QUOTE(pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp @ Jan 26 2010, 07:26 PM) *
These are SUPER AWSOME!!
May I please have a light Manaphy. Thanks!!!

-wow, I just noticed how obsessed I am about Manaphys-


Manaphy is quite cool but am a Shaymin guy xD

Here you are:



torterra.gif*added Manaphy egg*torterra.gif


torterra.gif*added claim list Sea Salt claimed Corsola*torterra.gif

I maybe gonna hold a contest wich Light Spirit is the best
So far

Posted by: binderboy23 Jan 27 2010, 01:39 PM

Thanks

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 27 2010, 02:51 PM

QUOTE(binderboy23 @ Jan 27 2010, 01:39 PM) *
Thanks



np I am happy if i can help grin.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 27 2010, 02:57 PM

QUOTE(binderboy23 @ Jan 27 2010, 01:39 PM) *
Thanks



np I am happy if I can do a request:D

But could you make the light larvitar in your sig
a link to the dex plz

Posted by: Pizza Guy111 Jan 27 2010, 03:01 PM

Coulod I get a Murkrow and a Swellow please? grin.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 27 2010, 03:18 PM

yup but you need to wait till tommorow srry

Posted by: Sarean Jan 27 2010, 07:51 PM

Not to be rude, but besides the beige color, I don't see the connection between the sprites and the Light Spirits. It's really just a one-set recolor recolor (which has caused many issues in the sprites I've seen) and single-shaded crescents that are kind of scratchy. The lines should flow with the shape of the Pokemon, and at least have the mystical coloring in them. And you should add lots of shades to the single pallete you're using, that way you won't have a problem with the different colors of the sprites.

I hope this helps.

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 28 2010, 12:20 PM

QUOTE(Sarean @ Jan 27 2010, 07:51 PM) *
Not to be rude, but besides the beige color, I don't see the connection between the sprites and the Light Spirits. It's really just a one-set recolor recolor (which has caused many issues in the sprites I've seen) and single-shaded crescents that are kind of scratchy. The lines should flow with the shape of the Pokemon, and at least have the mystical coloring in them. And you should add lots of shades to the single pallete you're using, that way you won't have a problem with the different colors of the sprites.

I hope this helps.

Thx for the help but,

1.It's BASED on them it's not the same
2.These are Light spirit's not Provincie spirit's
3.your right there is only the colour that's the same
4.I found it out so I do with it what I do.
5.I see much people like it but I don't see why change it now.
6.I shall maybe work on a new style but I don't think I change It

I don't want to be rude but this is the style you know ?
It's the Light Spirit Style not Zelda Province Spirit style.

I hope your way of thinking has changed and know what it normaly is.

Posted by: Sarean Jan 28 2010, 03:29 PM

Alright, here's the lay down. Your patterns NEED WORK. They're simply crescents made of one color giving no regard to texture or smooth lines. Second, the pallete needs work. It's obvious, ESPECIALLY on the Giratina. Just because people like your work doesn't mean it can't be improved.

There's a difference between STYLE and QUALITY. Look it up.

Posted by: Nyctea Jan 28 2010, 03:43 PM

I love the main idea, but the sprites could be much more improved.

They don't really seem majestic like the light spirits they're based on... the pattern is just...flat.

May I suggest that you maybe experiment with making the pattern slightly transparent? I have a feeling that after experimenting with that, it could turn out slightly better.
And if you look at the pictures of the light spirits, you see the pattern is almost "etched" into them. Perhaps add a darker outline around the pattern to give it that effect.
And I suggest paying attention to shading, please.

Sure it will be more work, but the quality will be greatly improved. Quality is better than quantity, and that rule is extremely important in all art.

But I'm glad someone had this idea of basing sprites of the light spirits. I hope my tips help so this idea can be even better.

Posted by: Sarean Jan 28 2010, 03:55 PM

Another thing- Not to be rude, but judging by your work here, I doubt you made your Tortelo sprite. Did the artist not ask for credit AND give permission to edit it into this? I doubt it.

Posted by: Luminey Jan 28 2010, 10:17 PM

jiracho pretty please?

i don't get on much and might forget my request. can you pm when you are done with it?

Posted by: Tortelo Jan 29 2010, 10:47 AM

Closed until the expirimenting is done.
The requests that not finishd should be made when it's open again srry

Posted by: MystykFyre Jan 29 2010, 06:39 PM

These are beautiful! <3

Tauros and Shuppet, if you please. =3

Posted by: pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp Jan 29 2010, 06:47 PM

QUOTE(Tortelo @ Jan 27 2010, 01:49 AM) *
QUOTE(pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp @ Jan 26 2010, 07:26 PM) *
These are SUPER AWSOME!!
May I please have a light Manaphy. Thanks!!!

-wow, I just noticed how obsessed I am about Manaphys-


Manaphy is quite cool but am a Shaymin guy xD

Here you are:




Shaymins kewl too.

Can I claim it?!?
Thanks! Going in my siggy now!
If you click on it, it brings you here.

Posted by: Kellan Feb 3 2010, 05:32 PM

Very nice sprites. ^_^.gif
How about an Umbreon one? The yellow rings could become black spirals.

Posted by: MystykFyre Feb 4 2010, 04:33 PM

*just read the last page*

...You don't mean to be rude? Seriously, guys? I don't know who you guys are trying to kid. These sprites are amazing. I love the creativity, and they turn out beautiful. Probably half the people who order these don't even know what the spirit thingies are, myself included. Tortelo's style is completely different from anything that most people have seen before. I'm not sure about you, but just bluntly coming out and saying that the sprites aren't good enough for you is rude in my book. Have YOU ever tried to work against your style? Have YOU ever tried to change the way you do things? It's like me trying to write with my right hand - it's nearly impossible to train yourself to do it, and then afterwards it's still sloppy and unnatural. If you've got a problem with this style, just go away and don't order any. I doubt you could make them any better. Everyone's good at something, and this is what Tortelo's found to be good at. Self-doubt is the worst thing a person can feel, and you're now making Tortelo doubt his/her sprites, and that's just not okay. So just let it go. Go away, and let Tortelo do his/her thing.

*/anger*

Posted by: DeusSuetonius Feb 4 2010, 06:44 PM

the only problem with your "light spirits" is that the spirals on the Light Spirits are purposful, and they're also gold, not black...

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 6 2010, 03:17 AM

QUOTE(MystykFyre @ Feb 4 2010, 04:33 PM) *
*just read the last page*

...You don't mean to be rude? Seriously, guys? I don't know who you guys are trying to kid. These sprites are amazing. I love the creativity, and they turn out beautiful. Probably half the people who order these don't even know what the spirit thingies are, myself included. Tortelo's style is completely different from anything that most people have seen before. I'm not sure about you, but just bluntly coming out and saying that the sprites aren't good enough for you is rude in my book. Have YOU ever tried to work against your style? Have YOU ever tried to change the way you do things? It's like me trying to write with my right hand - it's nearly impossible to train yourself to do it, and then afterwards it's still sloppy and unnatural. If you've got a problem with this style, just go away and don't order any. I doubt you could make them any better. Everyone's good at something, and this is what Tortelo's found to be good at. Self-doubt is the worst thing a person can feel, and you're now making Tortelo doubt his/her sprites, and that's just not okay. So just let it go. Go away, and let Tortelo do his/her thing.

*/anger*


Thx grin.gif
I gonna open It agian And Yes the Giratina is crappy so I gonna make a new one !!

What you say Is traight out of your heart grin.gif

Posted by: MystykFyre Feb 6 2010, 10:16 AM

I have the support of a few of my friends on what I said. You don't have to change the way you do it - if people want to be snobs, either let them be snobs or do what I do and kick 'em out of your shop for flaming, then report them for spamming if they post again. Almost everyone loves your work, so don't fall prey to a few people who think that this isn't good enough for them. To thine own self be true.

*/motivational speech* XD

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 6 2010, 12:38 PM

QUOTE(MystykFyre @ Feb 6 2010, 10:16 AM) *
I have the support of a few of my friends on what I said. You don't have to change the way you do it - if people want to be snobs, either let them be snobs or do what I do and kick 'em out of your shop for flaming, then report them for spamming if they post again. Almost everyone loves your work, so don't fall prey to a few people who think that this isn't good enough for them. To thine own self be true.

*/motivational speech* XD


Your right but I don't think I gonna delete there post grin.gif
for someone reason you find much jerks on a forum not only this one
but there are more good guys here than bad guys oh and finishd !!

Made them ALL :

Luminey:



MystykFyre :





Kellan :



Pizza Guy111 :





Redone :


Posted by: Sheepies Feb 6 2010, 02:26 PM

Once you make a pokemon, can someone else besides who you made it for use it? [Lugia]

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 6 2010, 02:28 PM

QUOTE(Sheepies @ Feb 6 2010, 02:26 PM) *
Once you make a pokemon, can someone else besides who you made it for use it? [Lugia]


Yes If it's not claimed do you want to claim it ???

Posted by: Sheepies Feb 6 2010, 02:30 PM

Then I claim Lugia and Tauros!!! :P (Fav pokemon)

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 6 2010, 02:33 PM

QUOTE(Sheepies @ Feb 6 2010, 02:30 PM) *
Then I claim Lugia and Tauros!!! :P (Fav pokemon)


I need to Disapiond you because you only can claim one noes.gif

Posted by: Sheepies Feb 6 2010, 02:34 PM

QUOTE(Tortelo @ Feb 6 2010, 02:33 PM) *
QUOTE(Sheepies @ Feb 6 2010, 02:30 PM) *
Then I claim Lugia and Tauros!!! :P (Fav pokemon)


I need to Disapiond you because you only can claim one noes.gif

Then I claim Lugia! xP

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 6 2010, 02:37 PM

QUOTE(Sheepies @ Feb 6 2010, 02:34 PM) *
QUOTE(Tortelo @ Feb 6 2010, 02:33 PM) *
QUOTE(Sheepies @ Feb 6 2010, 02:30 PM) *
Then I claim Lugia and Tauros!!! :P (Fav pokemon)


I need to Disapiond you because you only can claim one noes.gif

Then I claim Lugia! xP


Fine you may use it but make it a link to the shop and I have credit but if you read the rule's then you should now it grin.gif

Posted by: Sheepies Feb 6 2010, 02:48 PM

There, check my siggy. It's got lugia and the link.

Posted by: madarawolf Feb 6 2010, 09:15 PM

can I please get an arceus?

Posted by: Kellan Feb 6 2010, 09:37 PM

Ah! Thank you! I love Umbreon most of all Pokemon! I'll put a link to this in with the image. ^_^.gif

Posted by: Pizza Guy111 Feb 7 2010, 12:52 AM

Swellow and Murkrow. Awesome. awesome.gif I hope this is OK, but I'm going to use the three you made for me (Wailord, Swellow and Murkrow) in an avatar image, and I'll credit you in my sig.

QUOTE(DeusSuetonius @ Feb 4 2010, 06:44 PM) *
the only problem with your "light spirits" is that the spirals on the Light Spirits are purposful, and they're also gold, not black...


If they're gold then that would be really hard to see don't you think?

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 7 2010, 07:37 AM

[quote name='Pizza Guy111' date='Feb 7 2010, 12:52 AM' post='812455']
Swellow and Murkrow. Awesome. awesome.gif I hope this is OK, but I'm going to use the three you made for me (Wailord, Swellow and Murkrow) in an avatar image, and I'll credit you in my sig.

np but you can only claim one grin.gif
you may dicide wich one.

But you may use them the claiming is not really necesary xD

Posted by: MystykFyre Feb 7 2010, 11:10 AM

Can I claim the Tauros? IT LOOKS SO AWESOME =D It makes me wish, yet again, that Pokémon were real so I could hug it! XD

Put them both in my sig, they link here, and thank you so much!

Posted by: Pizza Guy111 Feb 7 2010, 02:19 PM

Oh nah I don't wanna claim any =P
I don't really see the point in that. =/
Thanks for the permission. happy.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 7 2010, 02:45 PM

QUOTE(MystykFyre @ Feb 7 2010, 11:10 AM) *
Can I claim the Tauros? IT LOOKS SO AWESOME =D It makes me wish, yet again, that Pokémon were real so I could hug it! XD

Put them both in my sig, they link here, and thank you so much!


About that wish me too am almost born with pokémon and there is a 5th Generation going on !!!
PizzaGuy np I like it seeing my dex bacame poplair if I may say that :P

Okay Tauros claimed and Madarawolf srry I finishd it this morning but I don't uploaded yet but here is it

Madarawolf:


Posted by: BORED TO DEATH Feb 8 2010, 10:04 AM

-arms in teh air- WOOPWOOP!
Got banned for like, 2 days. not very long grin.gif

Make Heatran PLEZ? grin.gif

P.S: torterra.gif is because your name is Tortelo? grin.gif grin.gif grin.gif grin.gif so, emh.

torterra.gif


Posted by: DevilsNestKimblee Feb 9 2010, 09:41 AM

First of All, I LOVE Twilight Princess(best one yet IMO)


So I would light a Light Spirit Dusknoir and a Froslass.

happy.gif


and I would like to claim it.

dusknoir.gif froslass.gif

Posted by: Courtney Flamesong Feb 9 2010, 12:43 PM

Grovyle please? =D And I would like to claim him.

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 9 2010, 01:19 PM

Okay gonna work on it when my RP char is finishd

Posted by: DevilsNestKimblee Feb 9 2010, 08:20 PM

Cool happy.gif

Posted by: pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp Feb 9 2010, 11:06 PM

I am taking the vibe that I got to claim THE GODLY MANAPHY?!
I lovez it, if you didn't know.

Posted by: Tortelo Feb 10 2010, 12:54 AM

QUOTE(pokemonpuzzleleaugechamp @ Feb 9 2010, 11:06 PM) *
I am taking the vibe that I got to claim THE GODLY MANAPHY?!
I lovez it, if you didn't know.


okay grin.gif

Posted by: AnimeWolf Feb 14 2010, 09:58 PM

How about a light spirit Articuno and Arcanine?

Posted by: Lord of the Fly Scorpions Feb 16 2010, 06:33 PM

Light Gligar plz happy.gif

Posted by: DevilsNestKimblee Feb 21 2010, 12:53 PM

*lurk* sealed.gif

Posted by: Mextax Feb 21 2010, 06:18 PM

How bout Glaceon and Shaymin(Sky if you can)

Posted by: Mangetsu Ryuu Feb 28 2010, 02:31 AM

Request: Can you do Swampert for me? Oh! And Salamence or Zangoose.

Posted by: Tortelo Mar 22 2010, 01:37 PM

Srry for the long long waiting I gonna work on it now !

Lord:



BORED TO DEATH :



DevilsNestKimbelee :





Courtney Flamesong :



AnimeWolf :





PalkiaLollipops:





feudelacour :





Mangetsu Ryuu :




Posted by: Lord of the Fly Scorpions Mar 22 2010, 02:13 PM

Thanks for the Gligar! Claims plz!

Dusknoir is epicly awesome

Posted by: feudelacour Mar 22 2010, 02:18 PM

Seeing as you're back, can I have a light pachirisu and shinx please and thank you

Posted by: DevilsNestKimblee Mar 23 2010, 08:45 AM

Thanks! and yes Lord of The Fly Scorpions, he is wink.gif

Posted by: Tortelo Mar 23 2010, 10:50 AM

QUOTE(DevilsNestKimblee @ Mar 23 2010, 08:45 AM) *
Thanks! and yes Lord of The Fly Scorpions, he is wink.gif


yeah first the lord then is servants smirk.gif

Posted by: Mangetsu Ryuu Mar 23 2010, 02:04 PM

I love them but what about my Salamence?

Posted by: Tortelo Mar 23 2010, 02:08 PM

QUOTE(Mangetsu Ryuu @ Mar 23 2010, 02:04 PM) *
I love them but what about my Salamence?


2 requests at a time ^^

Posted by: Mangetsu Ryuu Mar 23 2010, 02:13 PM

Oh...woopsies. ^^ Could I request now?

Posted by: Tortelo Mar 24 2010, 01:36 AM

QUOTE(Tortelo @ Mar 23 2010, 02:08 PM) *
QUOTE(Mangetsu Ryuu @ Mar 23 2010, 02:04 PM) *
I love them but what about my Salamence?


2 requests at a time ^^


of course ^^

Posted by: Mars Adept Enten Apr 2 2010, 11:24 AM

Ooh. Nice. Me likey. I'd love to have a Light Spirit Entei and Suicune, plz.

Posted by: Tortelo Apr 6 2010, 09:03 AM

QUOTE(Mars Adept Enten @ Apr 2 2010, 11:24 AM) *
Ooh. Nice. Me likey. I'd love to have a Light Spirit Entei and Suicune, plz.


Request :




Posted by: Mars Adept Enten Apr 6 2010, 12:11 PM

*squees* I love them! Thankies! happy.gif Could I have the codes for them so I can put them in my sig?

Posted by: Pirate Pete Apr 6 2010, 12:23 PM


don't care how long I have to wait could you sprit light my OC sprite ?

Posted by: Tortelo Apr 6 2010, 02:43 PM

QUOTE(Pirate Pete @ Apr 6 2010, 12:23 PM) *
don't care how long I have to wait could you sprit light my OC sprite ?


OC?
do you mean fakemon ?
otherwise what is his/her name


Posted by: Pirate Pete Apr 7 2010, 02:39 AM

QUOTE(Tortelo @ Apr 6 2010, 08:43 PM) *
QUOTE(Pirate Pete @ Apr 6 2010, 12:23 PM) *
don't care how long I have to wait could you sprit light my OC sprite ?


OC?
do you mean fakemon ?
otherwise what is his/her name




oh yes fakemon I keep mixing the two up..he's Curtis the karate squirrel.
thanks for the sprite

Posted by: Mangetsu Ryuu May 1 2010, 01:05 AM

Could you do Salamence?

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