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Posted by: The Sexy DJSanders Sep 25 2008, 07:56 PM

Name: David Anderson

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Trainer Class: Trainer

Hometown: One Island

Appearance: David is 6'2 and he weighs around 210 pounds. He has long black shaggy hair that he leaves hanging to his shoulders. David always catches glances from strangers due to his pitch black eyes, so dark it's impossable to tell the pupils from his dark iris. He wears a torn black shirt with cut off sleeves matched with his dark green camo swimming trunks. He also wears a faded blue and gold hat that he took from his father during his childhood. Due to always being in the sun David has a pretty decent tan. He spends free time swimming, running, and assorted exercises like pushups, situps, and pullups on any near-by tree branches. From his life style and eating patterns David is more built and stronger than most boys his age.

Personality: Due to the early loss of his father, David usually sticks to himself and sometimes neglects himself and his pokemon in the process. He is constantly trying to become physically stronger. He never is caught around a crowd but will sometimes find someone he can tolerate for short amounts of time. The only weakness he has is his Charmander. He will not tolorate anyone messing with it and if it is within his power he will make them pay.

David has three things that make him happy. Winning Pokémon battles, seeing his Pokémon happy, and becoming mentally and physicaly stronger. The probable cause for this is the promise his father made to him. He gave up everything to save David and without a doubt he would do the same for his Pokémon.

Bio: David was born on One Island. At age three, he was the normal island kid with lots of friends and loving parents. Shortly after his toddler life, his mother left and never returned. His dad swore to take care of David and never let anything hurt him. One day, David was playing in the street and did not notice an oncoming truck. David's father knocked his son out of the way just in time, but was severely injured. Later that day, the doctor informed young David of his father's death. Utterly shocked, David asked if he could see his father one last time. Looking upon his deceased father's face changed his life forever. David removed his father's blue and gold cap and walked away, never turning back. With the death of his father and the disappearance of his mother, David went to live under the watchful eye of his aunt in Fiore. For seven years he obeyed his aunt's strict rules, but one day, with the same cap on his head, he managed to steal a pokemon, a Charmander, from a man who had just received it in a trade. The unknowing Charmander looked into David's eyes and the two almost instantly formed a bond. They were the closest of friends.

When it came to David's Totodile it was a compleatly different story. As David was getting a drink with Charmander from a nearby stream when the Big Jaw Pokémon jumped out of the water and clamped down on David's hat and refused to let go. Even with the help of Charmander he was unable to get his hat back. Every time David attempted to grab it the Totodile it would laugh and dance out of the way. At this point David lost his temper and told Charmander to unleash everything he had of the Pokémon. After many Embers to the face and a couple of scraches the Totodile finally let go. In the process of retriving the now chewed and slightly schorched hat David grew respect for the little blue Pokémon. Seeing how he was already exausted David simply dropped a Pokéball on his head and finally got the well deserved drink he was after.

Pokemon: Lv.16
Lv 18 (Gator)
Lv 12
Lv 12 :snivy:

Items: Five Pokeballs, Five Potions, an outdated Pokedex, a wristwatch, only a couple changes of clothes, a small backpack, a comb, and enough food for himself and his Pokemon to last a few days on the road

What is the biscuit's name? The Biscuit's name is Waldorf, and I would like some

Posted by: Falkyn Sep 26 2008, 02:59 PM

I regret that I must decline this profile, but I have to for a few reasons.

1. I'd like to see more in the appearance and the personality areas. They way they are, they're too short for me to accept. Go more in depth with the descriptions, and that should work.

2. Starting out with rare candies is a way of getting free levels. If rare candies are ever put in this RP, they'd be given out by mods, and not just randomly found. Sorry.

Work on those, and I'll accept this, kay?

Posted by: The Sexy DJSanders Sep 27 2008, 08:36 AM

How about now?

Posted by: Falkyn Sep 27 2008, 05:25 PM

That'll work. *approves*

Posted by: 2gamers Jan 22 2011, 01:47 PM

To get this profile reapproved, we'd like to see improvements. I think I've told you everything I'd like to see lengthened in the PM, but if you have questions, post here. Post here when you've finished editing too.

Posted by: DJSanders Jan 22 2011, 06:07 PM

Okay how's that? I assumed I could keep the levels they already gained from my last RP. Also I know the eggmoves are given with mod's permission but I was wondering if Charmander could keep Aerial Ace? If now I'll leave it out when I update their Move Sets.

Posted by: 2gamers Jan 22 2011, 07:11 PM

Aerial Ace won't be able to be used until Lvl. 25, but he can have it.

Everything else is great, so if you're done editing, I'm ready to approve .

Posted by: DJSanders Jan 22 2011, 07:59 PM

Approving now would be great so I can finish everything else up and start an RP

Posted by: 2gamers Jan 22 2011, 08:39 PM

Approved. Please post in the Current Levels thread. Have fun!