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Undecided name for this so far, R/S/E comic(please, don't be rude) |
 Jan 5 2012, 05:40 PM
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http://i42.tinypic.com/de6829.jpg
Chapter 1 Page1 I am aware of the crap-tastic shading and unstraight lines(i didnt use a ruler) and the terrible whatever else but i dont have photoshop and my only tools are a sharpie, computer paper(folded) and a pencil (If you have any ideas or help on how i can improve this, feel free to tell me) Here, i use the word slack not to slump but slack as in to avoid responsibilities and work or to be idle -------------------- BERRIES. NOW.
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Jan 5 2012, 06:29 PM
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 Envy!  Group: Members Posts: 6 427 Joined: 5-April 09 From: Trapped under a couch Member No.: 8 637 War's Bane 
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Looks pretty good, congrats for making a sharpie look good. ^^
I have a few tips- One, I would avoid using arrows. People can usually tell what panel to read first, especially since this isn't the classic backwards manga-style. Another thing- I can see that you used the pencil to shade. That's a good idea, and if you don't want pencil marks after you darken over it with a sharpie, you can just erase them. You can always keep them, but just if you don't want pencil marks where you don't want shading. And I think you should color this, the lineart's nice. You of course don't have to if you're making it look like an actual comic, though. Whatever you want~ Hope this helps! This post has been edited by DireTylo: Jan 5 2012, 06:29 PM -------------------- ~Dire   I am a Symphonic 1st Violin Orch Dork! HATERS GONNA HATE DireTylo on deviantART.    サザンドラ • ギラティナ • ラティオス • ボスゴドラ • メタグロス • ゲノセクト  Random Derp (click to show) About Me (click to show) Credits (click to show) --Formerly known as Serene Cheshire, formerly Krona, formerly known as HydroForce, who was also known as the original SuzukiI was the first overall poster for a REALLY long time. That is my legacy here on GTS >w<-- Grab Your Gun Search and Destroy |
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Jan 5 2012, 07:17 PM
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It does. Thanks!
And i've tried to erase the pencil under the sharpie but it doesn't work -------------------- BERRIES. NOW.
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Jan 5 2012, 07:27 PM
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Envy! Group: Members Posts: 6 427 Joined: 5-April 09 From: Trapped under a couch Member No.: 8 637 War's Bane
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Glad it does~ You could get manga inking pens (It's what I use, it lets you erase pencil under the ink). They work really well and aren't too expensive. It mostly depends on what kind you get.
-------------------- ~Dire I am a Symphonic 1st Violin Orch Dork! HATERS GONNA HATE DireTylo on deviantART. サザンドラ • ギラティナ • ラティオス • ボスゴドラ • メタグロス • ゲノセクト Random Derp (click to show) About Me (click to show) Credits (click to show) --Formerly known as Serene Cheshire, formerly Krona, formerly known as HydroForce, who was also known as the original SuzukiI was the first overall poster for a REALLY long time. That is my legacy here on GTS >w<-- Grab Your Gun Search and Destroy |
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Jan 5 2012, 09:19 PM
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I'm not sure though whether Slakoth should be Brandon's already or whether it should be wild
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Jan 5 2012, 09:21 PM
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Envy! Group: Members Posts: 6 427 Joined: 5-April 09 From: Trapped under a couch Member No.: 8 637 War's Bane
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He should either be Brandon's and got away or a wild one Brandon had been chasing
-------------------- ~Dire I am a Symphonic 1st Violin Orch Dork! HATERS GONNA HATE DireTylo on deviantART. サザンドラ • ギラティナ • ラティオス • ボスゴドラ • メタグロス • ゲノセクト Random Derp (click to show) About Me (click to show) Credits (click to show) --Formerly known as Serene Cheshire, formerly Krona, formerly known as HydroForce, who was also known as the original SuzukiI was the first overall poster for a REALLY long time. That is my legacy here on GTS >w<-- Grab Your Gun Search and Destroy |
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Feb 20 2012, 04:39 PM
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Thats really nice!! You made Slakoth look adorable upside down!! x3 But yes, most defiantly use pencil to shade, and be sure you use a shading tool or even your finger, that works nice aswell. And hey, dont be so up tight on your shading, your better then what I do x) But totally keep up the great work!!
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