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[Godamn Robot]

Magneto-Magnezone Lvl 100
Leftovers
Modest
Ability: Sturdy
Moves
Discharge
Zap Cannon
Flash Cannon
Charge Beam
This guy is my main damage guy, He can get rid of entire teams with discharge. I always use Charge beam first to get the special attack boost up, plus with leftovers on em, he is very difficult to kill.


Homeboi- Scrafty Lvl 100
Metronome
Brave
Ability:Moxie (Aw Yeah)
Moves
Hi Jump Kick
Stone Edge
Karate Chop
Crunch
My second Damage pokemon, with Moxie and Metronome, he is also unstoppable, along with his moveset. He has a tendency to die quickly If hit with the right attack, but he is better at killing things in a row.


Weeboo - Cinccino Lvl 100
Razor Claw
Jolly
Ability: technician (AW YEAH)
Moves
Rock Blast
Bullet Seed
Tail Slap
Work Up
My favorite 5th gen pokemon, I was very happy to hear that she was able to have so many of secession moves, she does alot of heavy damage, and work up helps alot If I have to deal with a wall pokemon. Razor claw adds a higher critical hit ratio, making her very powerful.


Anton - Vaporeon lvl 100
Sea Increase
Calm
Ability: Water Absorb
Moves
Ice Beam
Hydro pump
Rain Dance
Surf

Yet again, another Damage pokemon, Special attack is the main game for Anton though, along with that monstrous amount of health, he is very difficult to kill. Rain dance, along with mystic water, adds a fierce combination


Nightwing-Honchcrow lvl 100
Sharp Beak
Naughty
Ability- Insomnia
Moves
Sucker Punch
Heat Wave
Pluck
Fly
Damage pokemon, Damage pokemon everywhere... My all time favorite pokemon, Nightwing is my pride and joy. she can kill things in one hit and is the best damage pokemon on my team. Heatwave is there just for the fact that it knows heat wave, in case I have to deal with a steel type.

Dooku - Toxicroak lvl 100
Black Sludge
Adamant
Ability- Dry Skin
Moves
Poison Jab
Revenge
X Scissors
Drain Punch
My professional troll pokemon, this guy has a moveset that would make people scream in anger, I have never lost many battles and Dooku is the reason why, he can take out the things he is weak against very well.

This post has been edited by The Doc: Mar 25 2011, 01:54 PM

[Black Ice]

Nature and item should be included.

[Godamn Robot]

Edited

[Praetor]

You should also have a description of what position they are (Lead, Tank, etc.) and an analysis of what they can do.

[Godamn Robot]

Double edit

[Yamper]

By the looks of it you have 4 Damage Pokémon... but what about a tank? o-o or am I missing something

[monster415]

I won't go too critical as not to sound offensive as I don't know how much you want to put into this team.

But some things that jump straight out at me, (Not sure if you are EVing then or not, so I will leave that out)

Lets start with the Magnezone, For one it doesn't have enough speed to be able to reliable set up with Charge Beam, and it easily gets walled by common ground, grass counters, Like Swampert, Ferrathorn to name a few. Second, Zap Cannon is just plain horrible with its 50accuracy rate, so you might want to replace it with Volt Switch to provide a way to deal and escape a countering switch in. Replace, Discharge with Thunderbolt as it has much better base power.

Next up Scrafty, a better nature would be impish/adamant/careful. Leftovers would be the better item for him too. Also karate chop is a poor moves in general. If you want it to last longer in battle a possible set could include Bulk Up + Drain Punch, Bulk Up boosts you attack and def and Drain Punch gives you a STAB fighting move (instead of High Jump Kick) and a way to recover more and more as your attack grows. The other 2 moves could be filled with Stone Edge and Crunch, or so I would do.

Honchkrow: Best suggestion nature for it would be Adamant. Also I would suggest getting rid of Pluck, Heat Wave, Fly. Possible Moves to consider would be Thunder Wave, to make up for its not so great speed and Brave Bird + Roost.

Other 3 I can see working, though I could have some small suggestions.....

This team has potential so I would give it 5-6/10.

If you want more in depth views, feel free to PM me or post, and good luck

[Silvoth]

Aside from what monster415 said, my advice would be to not have the same type of move on a pokémon twice.

Using vaporeon as an example, I would keep the moves Ice Beam and Surf, but replace Rain Dance and Hydro Pump with Hidden Power Electric or Grass and Substitute. The best item would be leftovers, I suppose...
(I don't use Vaporeon myself, but I'm pretty sure to get some use out of substitute you'd have to put a good bit of EVs in defense...)

If you are using Rain Dance for your Toxicroak too then forgo substitute. (Maybe someone else has a better suggestion for which would be better. I'm terrible with weather-based teams.)

Do you EV train?
If you do, could you post them?

I would probably rate this team 6/10. It does have a lot of potential.