[X] My Assistant

[krazyokami]

Name: Okami E Amsel

Age: 17

Hometown: Sinnoh

Appearance: Okami has pale skin seeing as she likes to stay inside and draw most of her time. But her skin is starting to regain its natural glow thanks to Crush. She has a lot of hair. Its spiky and practically unmanagable. She wears it in a high ponytail. It tends to touch the ground, she doesn't believe in cutting. Though there are times Crush will cut it himself with his teeth. She rarely brushes her hair, leaving it spiky and a bit tangled.

She does enjoy wearing black shirts and tank tops. She likes wearing dark jeans too. She doesn't like wearing long sleeves. The most she'll do is where a scarf in cold climates. She has Dizzy's wool to keep her warm at night.


Personality: Okami is fairly hyper at times, but can be stubborn at times. She doesn't enjoy being told what to do. She's used to being her own boss, so she doesn't take to being bossed around at all. She likes to do things at her own pace. Rushing her is not a good idea. She'll most likely forget and never finish anything. Okami does have a temper. When's she is trying to do something, is doesn't do to interrupt her. She gets angry when she's being interruprted, because it makes her forget what she was doing in the first place.


Biography: Okami was born at Snowpoint City to Lylah and Dean Amsel. Lylah was a pokemon breeder while Dean was a poke writer, so to speak. He enjoyed writing the legends about different pokemon. Okami enjoyed hearing them as she grew up.

As a child, she helped her mother with pokemon breeding. So she learn how to take care of new eggs. She also how to get to the feelings of a pokemon. But with Okami being so hyper, she stopped and began learning more of what Dean was teaching her. She learned about the legendary pokemon and the rumors about them.

Crush, her Totodile and frst pokemon, was given to her by her mother. She received him only a few months ago. He was bred by Lylah's male Blastoise and her female Feraligatr. Okami carried the egg everywhere. Even drawing it at multiple angles. It took a while, though it seemed like weeks to Okami, Crushclaw fanlly hatched.

Dean and Lylah allowed Okami to partake on her own pokemon journey. You see, they had been afraid for Okami. As a child, they didn't want her to go exploring because of her attitude. She quickly trusted strangers and helped everyone. Her hyperness could've gotten her into plenty of trouble a few years ago. They thought that she was good enough to start her own journey.

Okami chose to go to Furoh because there was nowhere else she wanted to go. She wanted to go somewhere new and exciting. Before she left, Dean gave her a pokeball, so she could catch her own pokemon. The first pokemon she encountered was a Mareep! Okami was so pyched, she forgot that it had a very strong type advantage over Crush. They managed to weaken the Mareep and catch it.

Okami named it Dizzy because the Mareep had no sense of direction. The wool on its head covered its eyes. Okami used it in a few battles and found that this fact didn't hurt it. Dizzy could see afar, but not upclose.

Starting Pokemon:

Crushclaw aka Crush
Male


Level 10//Torrent//Impish///Scratch, Leer, Water Gun, Rage///Has Mystic Water charm


Dizzy
Female


Level 9//Static//Jolly///Tackle, Growl///Soothe Bell



Items:
x2 Pokeballs
x2 Luxary Balls
x3 Oran Berries
x1 Sitruis Berry


Pokedex
Pokétch (The watch)


What is the biscuit's name? The answer is...Waldorf
Other Notes:

This post has been edited by krazyokami: Jun 15 2010, 12:05 PM

Reason for edit: Formatted for easy reading

[Toogee]

Improve the appearance. Since you have a picture, describe that. This is a text RP; you need to be used to describing things without pictures.

Personaity could be a longer. Can you elaborate on it (maybe through examples)?

You missed a few things in your bio. How did she get her mareep? Why didn't she go on a pokemon journey when she was younger? Why did she decide to go to Furoh? Also, that last paragraph has several incomplete sentences in it. Those need to be fixed.

She can't have a Master ball. What is PokeTech?

[krazyokami]

EDITED it~!

[Toogee]

She does enjoy wearing black shirts and tank tops.

Shirts or skirts? I'm not sure since you don't mention any lower wear. Some girls perfer jeans, others skirts, shorts or various lengths.

Aside from some spelling errors, this looks all right. Don't let the spelling get out of hand in your posts though.

[krazyokami]

It's shirts. I forgot to add that she wears dark jeans too.

[Toogee]

Approved. Go post in the Current Levels thread. Enjoy!