[X] My Assistant

[DragonTamerChris]

Here is my profile

Name: Chris
Age: 14
Hometown: Blackthorn city( johto)

Appearance:
He has brown hair with brown eyes. He doesn’t have acne or freckles. Nether does he have dimples. He is Caucasian. His height is 5-12 and his weight is only 120 pounds. He has no jewelry or anything. He has straight teeth. His ears are a bit small. His eyes are normal size. His head is just a bit bigger then 'normal'. He likes wearing shirts with no designs. He mostly wears his blue, green, and orange shirt but occasionally wears his red, or yellow shirt. He has a brown belt and he has blue jeans. He also has brown non fancy sneakers.

Personality:
He is calm and very imaginative. He is quite smart for his age and sometimes makes little inventions when he thinks of something. He loves researching about pokemon and seeing what they do throughout the day. But he also has dreams of catching all the pokemon and winning in the pokemon league. In stressful situations he closes his eyes, calms down and thinks of solutions. In a battle he is very calm and he doesn’t give commands too much. He lets his pokemon do what they are going to do and commands them when there in trouble or when he's using one of his many strategies he discovers when facing tough opponents. He has a unique way of connecting with pokemon since he studied them a lot.

Biography:
Sense he was a little boy he loved watching pokemon. His mom and dad were pokemon fans too they bought lots of books to study about pokemon. They used to live in new bark town but after they saw blackthorn city they loved it and moved there. He has an older brother who is on his pokemon journey. He is 20 years old. Seeing his older brother start his adventure when Chris was four he devoted his time watching and interacting with pokemon. He got his first pokemon riolu when he was 7. A riolu was badly injured from a trainer trying to catch it and he took the riolu and brought it to the pokemon center and after it was healed it decided to join him. He found his chikorita being attacked by a magmar. He saved chikorita with the help of his riolu. His cyndiquil he found in dragon's den. It was being sucked into a whirlpool and he saved cyndiquil with his good rod. Totodile was given to Chris on his 12th birthday by his dad as a reward for doing so well with training his other pokemon. He chose furoh other the other regions because he wanted to help it grow even more sense it's newer then the other regions. He also chose it to make discoveries, as a lot of furoh isn’t discovered yet.

Inventory:
Poke gear
Berry mixer
Poke ball*10
Levealing poins ganied: 0
?/15
?/15
Riolu
Started out at level 5.
Caught at ?

Chikorita
started out at level 5
caught at ?

Cyndiquil
Started out at level 5
Caught at ?

Totodile
Started out at level 5
Caught at ?


Biscuit’s name:
Waldorf

This post has been edited by cannillo123: Jul 20 2010, 10:04 AM

[Toogee]

Since you included a Faction category, I can't tell what RP this is for. Are you applying for PANE or Uprising? I can't make any other comments until you give me an answer,

[DragonTamerChris]

I'm aplying for pane.

[Toogee]

Please put this through a word processor. There are capitalization, spelling errors all over the place.

Appearance: What kind of clothes does Chris wear? A specific outfit would be great, but if you can put enough detail in a general style, that would be fine.

Bio: I could see Elm giving away one starter to a promising trainer, but not all three. This just seemed like a lazy explanation; be more creative. I'd also like to know why he's in Furoh and what made him choose this region over all others.

Obviously, there are no factions in Furoh, so this isn't needed.

[DragonTamerChris]

I edited it. But how do you get to a word prosescer?

[Toogee]

A word processor is a computer program, the most common being Microsoft Word. I believe you can download one at openoffice.org for free. The Firefox web browser has spell checker built in. Anything with a spell check should work. Of course, you can do it the old-fashioned way and read through it. Seriously, it will get very annoying to others reading your posts.

Appearance: What about lower wear (pants, shorts, kilts (!), etc)? Shoes? Accessories?

Almost forgot: what is the biscuit's name? It's our way of making sure new members read the rules before applying. Go to the Rules board and find it. While you're there, go look at the profile template thread and see what else you're missing.

[DragonTamerChris]

ok I edited it.

[Toogee]

Not Ludiwig. Keep looking.

Everything else is satisfactory though.

[DragonTamerChris]

I looked throught the forums and I still don't understand what a biscuit is.


Edit:
never mind i found it.

This post has been edited by cannillo123: Jul 19 2010, 11:33 PM

[Toogee]

Approved. Go post in the Current Levels thread. Have fun!