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Sep 29 2010, 09:15 PM
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Avatar credited to Mr Spaz! Group: Members Posts: 2 728 Joined: 12-August 09 From: your evil self's head Member No.: 56 338 Felisha's Team! |
Name: Felisha Roke
Age: 14 Hometown: Gigarte, Furoh Appearance: Felisha has moderate skin. Her eyes are a golden amber like wheat. Her hair is long and curly and brunette. She is about 4 foot 9 and around 110 pounds. She wears a loose-fitting, new white tank top and slightly tight, new black-with-pink-stripes biker shorts. She wears diamond earrings that are as shiny as disco balls. She also wears a waist pack, with a main pocket (zip), two side pockets (button), and three front pockets (button) and Pokeball clips. She never goes anywhere without it. Personality: Felisha is very fit and active. She also has lot of friends, so she is not a social freak. She knows first aid, so if a friend (or herself) is hurt, she can help. If a friend is sad, she tries her best to cheer them up. She is a leader, and reacts rather well in dire situations. She is hardly bossy, if at all. She loves playing with her pokemon, but hates bug pokemon because they're slimy, disgusting vermin, with the exception of Beautifly (and any other butterflies, for that matter), the Caterpie evolution chain, and Combee/Vespiqueen. She hopes to become a top breeder and coordinator, as well as her being an avid Pokeringer fan. Biography: Felisha had a great life as a kid. She found Terry, her Shinx, companion, protector, and friend, when she was 3. He was abandoned and lonely, starved half to death, scared the other half. She took him in immediately and loved him instantaneously, as he did her. Her dad brought her to see her first Pokeringer match when she was 7. Ever since, she loved Pokeringer. Felisha got Jamie after watching a battle. The trainer that had Jamie lost and was such a know-it-all, that he gave Felisha Jamie saying, "Take it, leave it, do whatever you want with it, just make sure I never see it again." Then he just walked off. She had a few other encounters with him where they battled, until she learned his name, Jake Triumfur. She is now his self-proclaimed rival. Felisha did her first contest the day Terry was all better due to her mother's urging. She got through the performance round barely, but was picked right off in the first battle round. Ever since, she has avidly loved being a coordinator. Being a breeder, just came to her as a sudden urge when she was 11 and never went away. Now she wants to be a top coordinator, Pokeringer, and breeder. She watches Pokeringer whenever she can, learning strategies to use in the future. She practices Contest techniques (as well as battling), too. She's always making Poffins and having her Pokemon try them. She has always wanted to go to Sinnoh and Hoenn for contests, but her parents wouldn't let her. Starting Pokemon: Terry () Male Lv. 10 Tackle, Leer, Charge Intimidate Jamie () Female Lv. 10 Fury Swipes, Low Kick, Scratch, Covet Vital Spirit Items: Potion (2x), Pokeball (4x), Cheri Berry (2x), Rawst Berry (2x), Chesto Berry (2x) What is the biscuit's name? Waldorf Other Notes: Identical twin sister of Keith Roke. This post has been edited by Pibbler: Mar 21 2011, 05:49 PM -------------------- Awesome And Funny Quotes (click to show ) Rank 28 overall poster Aug. 19 2009 rank 4 poster Oct. 22 2009+dec. 23 2009+June 25 2010 rank 16 poster March 22 2010 rank 13 poster March 31 2010 rank 8 poster June 26 2010 rank 7 poster December 28 2013 rank 2 poster |
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Sep 29 2010, 10:46 PM
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Bet On Me Group: Members Posts: 953 Joined: 5-July 08 From: Schiliro Drive. Member No.: 2 282 Active Squad |
No. Turn around and go read the rules, then edit accordingly. All sections of the profile need to be bigger, (what does Felisha want to be? why is she going on this journey?) a beginner trainer wouldn't have access to such high-end equipment, and for God's sake, you can't have a dang shiny.
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Sep 30 2010, 09:14 PM
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Avatar credited to Mr Spaz! Group: Members Posts: 2 728 Joined: 12-August 09 From: your evil self's head Member No.: 56 338 Felisha's Team! |
I have not finished my editing, but I need to get off.
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Sep 30 2010, 09:26 PM
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Bet On Me Group: Members Posts: 953 Joined: 5-July 08 From: Schiliro Drive. Member No.: 2 282 Active Squad |
Tell us when you're -done-.
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Nov 20 2010, 12:43 PM
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Avatar credited to Mr Spaz! Group: Members Posts: 2 728 Joined: 12-August 09 From: your evil self's head Member No.: 56 338 Felisha's Team! |
Finally finished my editing (got my computer privilages back!)! Hope it's good!
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Nov 20 2010, 10:04 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
My only concern would be height and weight. That seems a bit large for a 14 year old girl (I'm close to both her height and weight, and I'm no where near 14 >_>). You can look up the link thread in the PANE RP School for some height weight calculators or note in the appearance that she had some sort of massive growth spurt.
Other than that, it looks good. Maybe you could add something about her beginning her journey around Furoh (and reasons for not going to other coontest countries like Hoenn and Sinnoh). -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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Nov 22 2010, 09:37 AM
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Avatar credited to Mr Spaz! Group: Members Posts: 2 728 Joined: 12-August 09 From: your evil self's head Member No.: 56 338 Felisha's Team! |
Ok! It's finished!
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Nov 22 2010, 12:57 PM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
Approved. Go post in the current levels thread. Have fun!
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