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Tollion Fabel, "...Stop using my full name."
Houdini
post Jan 1 2012, 09:46 AM
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Name: Tollion Fabel (Nickname: Tolly)
Age: 17
Hometown: Floaroma Town, Sinnoh

Appearance: 5'8", 140 lbs., normal build. Tolly's hair color is dark grey and his hairstyle is Aero. (kinda like this). He has a pinkish-white skin tone, hooded eyes, normal-shaped nose with a slightly broad tip, sharp lips, and thin eyebrows. He kind of looks like a girl whenever you look at his face. He wears a spiky collar that looks like a neck shackle but it does not really contain sharp metal spikes, only white plastic ones for accessorizing. And the collar also has silver chains dangling in the middle. He also wears a dark gray tank top and a long black sweater that is tattered on the bottom which he uses as a cape by tying the sleeves on his chest. Sometimes he wears it as what sweaters are supposed to be worn, whenever it's cold. He also wears gray cargo pants with a belt that can hold pokeballs of his current party for convenience. He also wears black sneakers with white outsoles. His messenger bag is red and is at regular size and he wears it normally.

Personality: Quiet / Timid / Impatient / Hot-tempered / Unpredictable

Tolly likes to be alone quite often. He rarely socializes with people, even to the ones he knows. He is always deep-in-thought, and always likes to wander off alone to somewhere peaceful and quiet.

He likes the color black, because it suits his current nature. He is a pessimist and he always gets the bad thoughts on his head go ahead of him but in some situations, he ignores them.

He doesn't like to wait a lot, since he gets angry very easily and he throws tantrums, even it's just a long line from the amusement park, waiting to ride on a roller coaster. And he is quite spoiled when it comes to getting his requests done. His maids and butlers do his orders as fast as they can. But he can get angry at times when there is a flaw, especially when he asks them to cook for something. He loves food, but he doesn't like "messy" ones.

Even if he is not really a people-person, he likes to be surrounded with pokemon. Apparently this is one of his few and favorite sources of happiness. It may not look like it, but he does have a soft side with them. This is his other hobby other than always thinking and having conversations with himself. This is one of the reasons he tends to be like a ninja. One minute, you're talking to each other, leave him quiet for a few moments and bam! He's gone.

Biography: Tolly was born in a high-classed family with both parents as business people. He lived in a mansion with his grandmother and a lot of butlers and maids. He was the eldest of three brothers and he was the black sheep of the family. He didn't always get what he wants and he was always scolded for minor disregard of rules. But his brothers were pampered and spoiled and the treatment between him and them was very obvious. His parents did not like pokemon because they think they were all wild and reckless. Tolly tried to explain their true nature, but they wouldn't listen. That was why he always tries to break out of the house to play with them.

He wasn't really like his current character when he was younger. He was extra happy and playful but he still got scolded every now and then, but he tended to ignore them and moved on. He also wore bright-colored clothes to match the surroundings. That changed a lot because of one tragic request.

When he was 10, he tried to convince his parents to send him to pokemon school to learn more about pokemon, but his parents denied his request because they wanted him to take over their business when he is old enough. So he ran to his grandmother and talked and wept about it. After he explained the whole situation, she totally supported his decision. So she gave him money to enroll himself to the school. Without any authority in the house other than his grandmother, Tolly always went out with her everyday right after his parents leave for work to learn. Right after class, they went to the flower garden to play with pokemon.

How I met treecko.gif (click to show)


During his graduation day, Tolly had mixed emotions before the ceremony. He contemplated about telling his parents the truth or not. His grandmother suggested to tell them after he gets his diploma. And so he did. He went to the ceremony with his grandmother and got his diploma and his first starter, Tuck. And when they got home, Tolly nervously told the truth. His father was so enraged that he threw his documents from the desk to the floor and punished him for not telling. He took away his diploma and Tuck and he was grounded for five years.

Because of that, Tolly made a tantrum inside his room, threw away all his bright-colored clothes, got all of his money from his savings and even stole from his own siblings, broke out of the mansion and bought new dark-colored clothes. His favorite was a very long sweater that was bigger than him, so he cut off the bottom part in a tattered style and used it as a cape until it fitted him. He also started to become more quiet and insensitive as the years pass by.

Even though he was grounded, he still went out to interact with the pokemon in the outside world.

How I met murkrow.gif (click to show)


After the grounding was over, they returned back Tuck and his diploma, and Tolly did not show any emotion. Instead he packed his stuff, took all of his savings, and walked to the door. His parents, brothers, and grandmother all stared behind him.

"Where are you going?" His father said with a mad tone of voice.

"Away." Tolly said callously.

His mother cried and his two brothers tried to convince him not to go.

His grandmother gave him a ticket to a ferry to Furoh. "Here. You need this."

Somehow she knew what Tolly was gonna do after his grounding was over. And because of that he went back and hugged her for the last time.

"Thanks Grammy. I'll miss you the most."

He then went outside, released his pokemon out of their pokeballs, and started an adventurous journey with unpredictable results, and he never looked back.

Class: Trainer.

Starting Pokemon:
Tuck treecko.gif Lv. 10 (click to show)

Renai murkrow.gif Lv. 10 (click to show)


Items:
x5 Pokeballs
x5 Pecha Berries
x5 Oran Berries
Savings (About P 10000)

What is the biscuit's name? The answer is... Scheherazade!

Other Notes: Tolly graduated when he was 12. He met Renai when he was 14.
Renai won't show signs that she can learn Brave Bird in the first two stories but on the third maybe she'll show a very faint sign. Don't know what level she could master it though.


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post Jan 1 2012, 02:07 PM
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Appearance: I'd like to see a paragraph on his physical features. His hair is a good start, but I also want to know what his face looks like. The clothing description is great though happy.gif.

Personality: Keywords are helpful, but use sentences to go into detail about how these characteristics play into Tollion's life and interactions with others.

Bio: Try and keep your sentences in past tense. You keep switiching tenses in the middle of paragraphs.

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post Jan 1 2012, 08:46 PM
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Sorry. I accidentally clicked the 'submit post' instead of the 'preview post' so I forgot to add the facial features.

Added descriptions in personality, and edited the tenses and added some details in the bio.


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post Jan 1 2012, 11:16 PM
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