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GPXPlus Haiku Game, Count your syllables
Rhea Knight
post Feb 20 2013, 09:59 PM
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Mass click boredom?
Mash up some words together;
and write GPXPlus haikus.

(I suck at making these. XD)

Haiku rules?

First line is five syllables;
Second has seven syllables.
Third also has five.

For your convenience-
I have created examples.
Don't cheat by stealing them!

(Also make them Pokemon or GPX related. XD)

Examples:

Floating through my brain;
Dreams of summoning items.
Backroom hunting time!

Long have I hunted
For a shiny Ferroseed
Many spiky eggs!

Crazy Lilligant
throwing green petals about.
Grab hayfever pills.


A message to the mods;
Sorry if thread is misplaced.
Feel free to move/delete.


(Also thanks to Gambrinous Antiscian for the fixed examples. You're awesome. grin.gif)

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Carefactorzero
post Feb 21 2013, 12:34 AM
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I would recommend
checking all your examples.
They all have mistakes.

QUOTE
Floating around my brain; (6)
Dreams of summoning items. (7)
Backroom hunting time! (5)

Long have I hunted (5)
for shiny little Ferroseed. (8)
Too many spiky eggs- ouch! (7)

Lauren, the Lilligant 6
Likes throwing green petals. 6
Hayfever strikes! 4


For your convenience, I bolded where you've miscounted. cat.gif

Now, a GPX+ related one:

It has been too long
since I hatched my last shiny.
Let one hatch today!

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Rhea Knight
post Feb 21 2013, 11:22 AM
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Well, don't I now look
like a complete idiot!
Thanks for the warning!

(examples are now fix'd grin.gif)

(Also, another!)

Battle Subway streak
very close to fifteen wins!
Beaten by Gallade...


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Tazii
post Feb 21 2013, 11:32 AM
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^ I believe your last line had six syllables.

Lady Patrat, why?
Your shinyness escapes me.
Please, be kind to me.

Rayquaza of black,
Long have I searched for your shine.
Forever, I search.

Mewtwo, my old friend,
Too many berries you've fed,
Your thighs are too fat!


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Yamper
post Feb 21 2013, 11:35 AM
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Oh why, Subway streak
Why won't you let me be top
Why hate me so much?

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post Feb 21 2013, 11:44 AM
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Way of the aura
Lucario has spoken
Mentioning Flora

Approving the hope
A destiny forsaken
Rise, oh thunderstorm

I deem thee worthy
The almighty creator
Of the human dream


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My body...
is made out of swords.
Iron is my blood
and glass is my heart.


I have overcome countless battlefields undefeated.
Not once have I retreated,
Nor once have I been understood.
Always alone....
On the hill of swords...
intoxicated by victory...


Thus, this life has no meaning...
This body...surely was...
Made out of blades.


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