[X] My Assistant

[Spokesman]

Name: Shawn Kries
Age: 12
Hometown: Eterna City(Everyone there favores grass-types, except him)

Appearance: (Credit to Tekno for sprite, but I just did some recoloring)
He gives an appearance of being very smart, although not really. His signature outfit, the light blue long-sleeve, light green vest and grey pants is just odd. The colors crash like a car crusher crushing a car. Everyone else always questions why he dresses like that, but he always replies, "Because. I just do." Being a blonde, he gets blonde moments every now and then, really embarresing himself.

Personality: He's a fighter. He looks like he combines brains and brawn to make him seemingly unbeatable, but he usually just fights all-out offensive. Often strikes out with girls, but yet he keeps it up. Favors types super-effective against the grass-type. His main weakness: Bagels. He loves bagels.

Biography: Living in Eterna all his life, he longs to see other pokemon other than grass-types. He only saw grass-types because Gardenia, the gym's leader, used the grass-type, so everyone esle in Eterna followed her lead. He never saw other trainer's pokemon who challenged the gym, because he was eithier at his trainer school or stuck doing homework. He favored winter months, not only because he was born then, but because the grass-types hated it. With Gardenia growing up with him as a close friend, he was always surrounded by grass types. One day he decided to go into the forest to look for pokemon he'd never seen before. He was feed up with all the grass-types in his life so he wanted to expand his horizons to some other types of pokemon. So he went out west to the forest, and met a Nincada. The Nincada showed him to a place with alot of other pokemon, and he was fascinated. He'd never seen such beautiful pokemon before. He was surprised to see some flying, because all of the pokemon his friends had walked on the ground. He ended up chosing a Baltoy (Due to Psychic>x2>Poison, most grass-types are also pioson-types) and Riolu (Heard of their magical aura traits) to come with him. Now he lives with those three pokemon, the first ever non-grass types he'd ever seen. Nincada always stays out of his poke ball, but the other two stay in theirs. Nincada will some times cling to Shawn's back like a backpack. Those pokemon sparked his motive to become a trainer and find many more pokemon he'd never even seen or heard about. He heard about the Furoh reigon, and after completing his trainer school and getting his trainer's licence, he asked his parents to let him journey to Furoh, hearing about its beauty and adventurism. Eventually, his parents let him, and he now arrived in Furoh, eagerly awaiting what lies in store for his future....

Starting Pokemon: Nincada Lv.5, Baltoy Lv.5, Riolu Lv.5

Items: Miracle Seed, 3 potions he found in the forest on his way back, and a poke ball (Suppost to be Nincada's but he never enters it.).

What is the biscuit's name? The answer is... Waldorf!

Other Notes: Reason he is weak to bagels: he loves how awesome they taste. Also, he eventually wants to battle Gardienia and show her he's just as good.

This post has been edited by Gliscario: Sep 8 2010, 07:47 PM

[Toogee]

Don't post until you're done with your profile.

Please read the second post in this thread. Your profile is way too short.

If you're going to create a town, you'll need a better description and permission from the mods.

[Spokesman]

Don't post until you're done with your profile.

Please read the second post in this thread. Your profile is way too short.

If you're going to create a town, you'll need a better description and permission from the mods.

Thanks, I'll be sure to edit it.

[Toogee]

You have written absolutely nothing for appearance. In that post I referred you to, it specifically says that a picture is not enough for appearance. Again, please read that post.

Bio: You need to explain why he only saw grass types in Eterna City. It's a gym city, so trainers all over will bring pokemon of all types to go challenge the gym.

"He also grew to be very comfortable around fire, so he was important to put fires out in the city." What does this mean? Why would a 12 year old be important in fighting fires?

Why does he dislike grass types?

Finally, why is he in Furoh rather than traveling around Sinnoh?

[Spokesman]

I finished editing it, and I hope that I have really explained my character to you.

[Toogee]

Approved. Go post in the Current Levels thread. Have fun.