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Name: Terry Kelley
Age (Now): 13
Home Town: Gigarte.
Appearance: A little tall for his age Terry has light brown hair and weighs about 80 pounds (he is a little lanky ) He wears a T-Shirt that has a Poke-ball design on the back and a Ralts on the front. He wears blue-jeans that are a little worn on the knees.

Background:
When Terry was a little boy he fell down and his head hit a rock. When he was passed out he saw a house that was on fire and that house looked like his house!
When he woke up he was in the hospital. By his bed he saw a Poke-ball. Not knowing what it was, he opened it and a Bulbasaur popped out! He and the Bulbasaur became best friends over the next few years and then all of a sudden his Grandfather urged them to move to Furoh. His family didn't know where to go in Furoh so they chose his Granfather's town, Gigarte. Almost instantly Terry made many friends including a Ralts, Terry always liked Ralts. Once the Ralts showed him a blurry picture of his house burning. The Ralts also showed him a picture of his Grandfather so Terry interpreted that as the Ralts used to be his Grandfather's. But he wasn't shure.

Personality:
Terry is a fun loving, smart (maybe a little geeky) kid that makes friends really quick. He prefers not to nickname his Pokemon only really doing it if he finds one really special. When he is mad he trains his Pokemon to cool off. When he is happy he is well, Hyper! (He has ADHD (Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder) and ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) )

Class: Trainer

Starting Pokemon:
Bulbasaur (No Nickname)
level 10
Personality: Bulbasaur is a bit shy but an awesome opponent always doing his best in battle.
Moves: Leech Seed, Tackle

Ralts (No Nickname)
level 7
Personality: Ralts seems to like Bulbasaur but every once and a while Terry catches them fighting at night.
Moves: Confusion

Items:
5x Pokeballs
A Pokedex (National Edition)
Berry Pouch
6x Oran Berries
1x Pecha Berry
Messenger Bag
8x Potions
What is the biscuits' name? Scheherazade
Other: None.

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Appearance: What your character looks like. At minimum, this must be two 5 sentence paragraphs. You can make it as long as you like though. Mention things like the colour of your character's hair, skin, and eyes, their clothing, their height and weight, etc.

Personality: You are not Denning. Here you can tell all about your character's personality quirks. Do they like to fight? Are they hot tempered? Laid-back? Happy-go-lucky? What are they like when they're happy? Sad? Angry? What are they like during a battle? Things like that go here. At minimum, this should be a fair sized paragraph.

Biography: The story of your character's life from birth to whenever the RP starts. Things like their home lives and how they caught their first pokemon go here.

Appearance: Back in high school English, when I had to write up a descriptive paper, I was told to write as if describing something to a blind person. This section is no different: spare no detail! This will tell your fellow RPers whom their characters are talking to.

Let’s begin with skin and facial features. This includes things like skin color, eyes, and hair. What color are those features and to what degree (light, dark, medium). How is the hair styled (curly, straight, long, short, bald). Are there any scars or acne breakouts? If there are, where are they? It helps to include adjectives and comparisons; they help the reader better visualize your character.

Next, what does our character wear? Include tops, bottoms, shoes, jewelry, and anything else that would apply. Personally, I like to describe a main outfit, but you’re welcome to put more than one or just a general style. Once again, describe colors and state of the outfit. Is it in good condition or is it wrinkled and dirty? Is it tight fitting or loose? Is it a solid color, a pattern, or is there a logo? What about function (pockets for storage, jackets for warmth)? These are only suggestions, but you should include lots of detail. I don’t want to see “red shirt and blue pants”.

It might help if you have a picture/sprite of your character as a reference to help write this section. It’s not necessary, but it can be helpful. A sprite, however, does not replace the Appearance section, it merely adds.

Personality: This one is perhaps the most difficult section for most (for me at least). Luckily, you’re reading this, so you should be OK . This section will particularly help when you’re starting to RP your character, so make it good .

What is your character like? Does he/she like people or more of a loner? If he/she is nice, throw in some scenarios as to how they would react. If a friend is sad, what does your character do? If there’s a dangerous situation, how does he/she react? What interests your character? What does he/she dislike? Also, add explanation to specify how and why they act in a particular way.

Biography: This is the story of your character’s life. In short, this is the section to explain characteristics in your character’s appearance, personality, and pokemon team. Try and keep it in chronological order, as if you’re writing a story.

A good place to start would be childhood. Was he/she raised in a good home? How did your character spend his/her days? This is likely the period where your character’s most defining characteristics formed, so don’t exclude this section.

Next, when did they decide to pursue a life as a trainer, coordinator, etc? Was there a major event that led to this decision, or was it more gradual? This may be a good time to explain how your character met his/her pokemon team.

Appearance, personality, and bio need to be fleshed out more. I highly recommend looking at other profiles for examples.