Keith Roke |
Mar 29 2011, 01:22 PM
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Name: Keith Roke
Age: 14 Hometown: Gigarte, Furoh Appearance: Keith has moderate skin. His eyes are golden amber like wheat. His hair is semi-short and shaggy and brown. He is about 5 foot 6 and around 110 pounds. He wears a white t-shirt with black jeans. He also wears a white beanie with a black Pokeball symbol on it. He has normal, black backpack that has a Pokeball design on it. Cynder sometimes will ride and sleep in the main pocket. Personality: Keith likes to play with his Pokemon, and he also plays several sports, such as football and basketball. He’s calm under pressure. He doesn’t bug or ghost types, because bugs they’re weak and they’re ugly. Ghosts just creep him out and occasionally sneak up on him. He wishes to be the best Pokemon Master. Biography: Keith found Cynder when he was 3, the same day Felisha Roke found Terry the Shinx. Cynder had wandered into their backyard. Keith noticed and ran out to grab him and brought him in. "Mom, I found a sick Pokemon too!" He said. "He looks fine," his mom said. "No! His back was on fire, so he must be burned," He said. "That’s a Cyndaquil. They do that whenever they are mad or upset," She said. "Oh, I didn’t know that…" He said, hanging his head. Keith met James in his basement, Keith was 11. James had eaten the sewer pipes causing the basement to flood, and James couldn’t swim nor float so Keith and his dad lifted James and brought him up stairs to heal. The pipes were soon replaced with PVC pipes (strong plastic) so James wouldn’t be tempted to eat them. As a kid Keith was usually the one to start trouble, for instance, he taped bubble wrap to peoples tires so they thought that they were being shot at (Felisha's idea), put a tack on his teachers chair, and other almost harmless pranks. He did bad things not for attention but for entertainment. They occasionally fought, though Keith normally won. Once, they had a pretty bad fight, and in it, Felisha got a broken nose. Keith was grounded for a month, but he kept entertained by playing with James and Cynder. Class: Trainer Starting Pokemon: Cynder () Male Lv. 10 Tackle, Leer, Smokescreen, Ember Blaze James () Male Lv. 10 Tackle, Harden, Mud-Slap Rock Head Items: Potion (x2), Pokeball (x4), Cheri Berry (2x), Rawst Berry (2x), Chesto Berry (2x) What is the biscuit's name? Waldorf Other Notes: Identical twin brother of Felisha Roke. -------------------- |
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Mar 31 2011, 08:16 AM
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Weak Livered Milk Drinker Group: RP Moderators Posts: 3 412 Joined: 19-August 07 From: Sitting in an English garden, waiting for the sun Member No.: 208 And a Golurk |
I'd like you to expand the appearance, personality, and bio. Look at other profiles for examples. I don't have enough time to be too specific, but I will say something about the bio. You need to mention why he's in FUroh and why he didn't travel with his sister in the first place.
THat's all I really have time for, but there is much more to add. Please look at several different profiles for ideas on what to add. -------------------- PANE Mod PANE x2 (click to show ) Credit for 2gamer's Seel of Approval (click to show ) |
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