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Rosebel Frye
Ageha1304
post Aug 23 2012, 05:25 AM
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Name: Rosebel Frye, called Rose or Rosy by friends


Age: 17

Hometown: Hoenn, Littleroot Town later moved to Furoh, Daas Town

Appearance: Rosebell is pretty short around 1 meter and 65 centimeters tall (that’s about 5 foot 4 inches) and weights around 50 kilograms (that’s 110 pounds). Her skin is very, very pale due lack of sunlight, however cheeks are always flushed red giving nice lively accent to her face. Eyes are emerald green with big pupils and long eyelashes. Hair is chestnut brown, perfectly straight and very long – goes all the way over her butt. Hairstyle is usually free, however sometimes she makes ponytail for bigger comfort. On some more important occasions she might make her hair into bun. On her left elbow Rosebel has a scar which she got in childhood when she fell off bike. However scar is not big and is barely noticeable.

Usually Rosebel wears clothes that are both comfortable and stylish. The most common outfit she uses is dark purple top, short black skirt, black knee-length socks and purple flat shoes. On events she wear long, green dress that perfectly envelops her body and shows off her slender figure and shoulders. Dress has cut on one side of the leg which gives bit playful look to Rosabel. Together with this dress Rosebel also wears green sandal high-heel shoes which she uterly hates because they are very uncomfortable. Also Rosebel always has silver chain with double Yin-Yang charm. For now she’s holding onto both sides of charm, but Rosebel hopes that one day she can thrust someone enough to give one side of charm to him/her.

Personality: Rosebel is very hard to predict and guys don't understand her at all. She doesn't depend on other people, but does all by herself no matter how hard the task may be. Many people come to ask for her help and she never rejects it. Overall she's a really nice and caring person, which will never let down her friends. However she can also be impulsive and quite hot-tempered. Sometimes 1 wrong word could make her go furious, but other times she can be insulted for an hour straight and Rosebel still wouldn't react. When in trouble Rosebel first tries to solve it without thinking which usually doesn’t end well, however after failing Rosebel thinks all possibilities over and comes up with solution without a fail. If there something she really wants, Rosebel will work very hard to get it and so far she had always suceeded.

Rosebel hates lies above all else. If she catches someone lying to her she will never thrust that person again, maybe even never speak to him/her again. She also hates cold and rain, on such days she won't even leave her house and sometimes lay on her bed all day long without doing anything.

Rosebel loves sunny weather, when sun is up you couldn't get her inside even if you threatened to kill her. When in good mood she draws beautiful paintings which usually include people or pokemon who made her happy or scenery which she found fascinating.


Biography: Rosebel's childhood was tough. She was abandoned by both of her parents, but luckily she was taken care of by her grandparents. Grandparents are the most important people in Rosebel's life and she would do anything to make them happy. However even with loving grandparents by her side, absence of parents left quite a scar on Rosebel's heart. She could never open up to people completely and could never thrust them either. That's why she was always left out by other children.

While being younger she was very vulnerable to insults and such things so she often cried when other kids picked on her. However at some point Rosebel understood that all of these things are not worth crying for so soon she stopped crying and with that bullying towards her stopped as well. Ever since then she has not let out a single tear no matter how hard the pain was.

When Rosebel was 15 her grandmother won quite a big sum of money in lottery. Rosebel’s grandparents decided that they should move away from Littleroot Town to Daas Town in Furoh region as it was such a beautiful and natural place. Rosebel of course was thrilled that she will have new home and that she could make new friends (she didn’t really have any important friends in Hoenn).

After year of living in Daas Town, something unexpected happened to Rosebel. One day some thugs broke into Rosebel’s house and robbed out all her grandparent’s money they had saved up over years. Rosebel was so angry and frustrated that she decided to chase thugs however things didn’t quite go as she would like them to go. Thugs turned out to have some pokemon on hand to fight back. Just when Rosebel thought that she would never see her family again, something big shielded her body from attacks of unit pokemon. As she looked up she saw Aggron which now tossed Team Deception units around like little bugs. Trainer of this Aggron returned stolen money to Rosebel and left without saying a word. But Rosebel knew that she had to become trainer just like man who saved her in order to protect herself and ones she loves.

On her 17th birthday Rosebel decided to start her journey by taking one of starting pokemon from Daas Town’s Pokemon Laboratory. She was given choice from 3 different pokemon: Charmander, Totodile and Turtwig. It was hard to choose but in the end she decided to take little fire dragon as that one seemed to match her better then the others. She decided to name her first pokemon Blaze due the bright flame blazing on his tail.

Around two weeks after acquiring Blaze, Rosebel had some weird encounter… in her own house. As usually in the morning, she went down to kitchen to eat breakfast and this time her grandmother was sitting on chair as if waiting for her to come. It was nothing unusual however what struck Rosebel as odd is that grandmother didn’t say anything and was grinning bit creepily. Blaze sensed what was wrong and came out of his Pokeball and without warning shot flames at grandmother. At first Rosebel was shocked but once she saw her grandmother transform into Zorua she understood what happened. Zorua came like this to Rosebel’s house for about a week until Rosebel finally decided to take Zorua with her on journey she would soon set onto. Rosebel named little Zorua – Chaos, because he liked to cause trouble and did all sorts of little misdeeds.

Soon an unexpected visitor came to Rosebel. It was her older brother which had been living with her and her grandparents until age of 14 when he set on his own journey. Right now he was going to travel to Sinnoh but before heading there he came to visit Rosebel and grandparents. Rosebel and her brother usually didn’t get along too well, but sometimes they could understand each other perfectly. This time he came here to present Rosebel something she had not expected. It was a little baby Ralts. It was brother’s Gallade’s and Gardevoir’s baby and he had named her Harmonia. Rosebel was overjoyed that her brother brought her such great gift and she promised to take good care of little baby pokemon.

Class: Trainer

Pokemon:
Blaze – Charmander ♂ (Level 7)

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Chaos – Zorua ♂ (Level 7)

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Harmonia – Ralts ♀ (Level 6)

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Crystal - Horsea ♀ (Level 7)

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Items:
Pokeballs x 4
Potion x3
PokeNav x1
PokeDex x1
Luxury Ball x1 (Gift from Rosebel’s grandfather)

This post has been edited by Ageha1304: Sep 23 2012, 08:23 AM


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post Aug 25 2012, 10:54 AM
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It concerns me already that you have a character with the same name and two Pokemon also with the same nicknames in the Uprising roleplay forum... Although we do not have a rule when it comes to duplication like this, I really do encourage you to rethink these namings and appearances so that you have 2 defined characters rather than one which seems to have been split in half.

You've also referenced Team Deception. This is a bit of a no-no. If you read the rules thread for TD here, you'll see that they are not recognisable by sight and they are not a 'famous' evil organisation. This means that Rosebel wouldn't have known it was Team Deception (even though they may have been) and would probably have just assumed they were just ordinary thieves.

Your grammar is a bit of a concern to me - you have written a lot sentences in broken English. For example:
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If you don't clear up little things like this then I'm afraid the 'skill' portion of your RP grading may suffer although we do make some minor allowances for people who do not speak English as their first language (I'm assuming you fit this catergory).

Otherwise I like the depth of detail and look forward to seeing what ideas you can come up with for Rosebel in Furoh! Please edit out the Team Deception references and make a current levels post here. Once complete, you're good to go!


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post Aug 25 2012, 03:59 PM
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Well, I decided that I won't play Uprising so that's why I didn't bother to change name.

Also I apologize for my English grammar mistakes as native language's grammar strikes me first and only then come English, but mostly I recheck what I write so there shouldn't be too many of such mistakes.


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