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Aris Tsuchi
Lasy Vira
post Mar 10 2013, 03:50 PM
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This is where I go to make the character, right? Don't know if this is good enough or not, but I like it, so I hope you all do too!

Name: Aris Tsuchi

Age: 17

Hometown: Goldenrod City

Appearance: Wearing an orange jacket all the time and thin glasses, he's a complete mess. His white hair is often combed down, getting in his eyes and screwing up his battle "strategies". he never wears shorts, only pants, and his pale white skin makes him stick out. His eyes jade-green-ish and his arms are scrawny as heck, making him look like a wimp. He's also slightly on the tall side.

Personality: Quite the talker most of the time. He's always in a rush and can't keep his mouth shut, often getting into trouble, which his friends, Pokemon, or sometimes even rivals have to help him get out of. He spends most of his time at home, watching TV, wasting time on the internet, watching porn, and playing video games. He loves talking to people and making friends, but easily screws up and gets shut out, so it's either hit or miss when it comes to making these friends. Even though he talks a lot and can't sit still, he's a lazy moron in the end.

Bio: Aris grew up in Hoenn, with workaholic parents. His father was a Gym Trainer, and his mother worked at the Pokemon Center. So, most of the time, he was home alone with their Skitty and Arcanine. Not that they belonged to him...the Arcanine was his dad's, but it wasn't really used for Pokemon Battles. And the Skitty belonged to his mother, and it was rather old, so it was no fun to play with. So, as a result, he constantly begged his parents to buy him his own Pokemon. They said no, only because of lack of money. At the age of 10 he was given a Pokemon Egg, which hatched a few months later into an Absol, who he named Katana. He had raised Katana, giving her anything and everything she needed, and the Absol lived quite a happy life (feeling rather close to her Trainer in the process, eventually developing a special care for him). The family wasn't rich, but wasn't exactly poor either, so his life was decent. In Hoenn, he had constantly dreamed of going out and becoming the Champion, and "kicking ass". Of course, this didn't happen. Still in school at the time, and with crap grades, too, despite the fact he brags to everyone he would be a Researcher one day. Which he could very well do, because he had absolutely loved his Pokemon, but it didn't help that he didn't care about anything else in school. He strayed away from friends over time, and got into quite a bit of trouble. He fooled around in town, the police hated his guts. Unable to stand the cops' constant attempts to take Aris away, the Tsuchi family moved to Johto, living at Goldenrod. Here, the first thing he did was challenge Whitney, the Gym Leader. He lost, horribly. Not that he never trained, mind you. He never had the money to get any items, and ran through like he could take on everything. With his Absol at such a low level of strength, he may have well just taken a Skitty and tried to solo the Elite 4. Of Sinnoh. Eventually, he found his way inside the Game Corner....Voltorb Flip, slots, roulette, ticket drawings, lotteries, poker...this was the perfect place! Aris a ticket drawing there, gaining an Eevee, who he named Sena. Unlike Katana, Sena was selfish, ungrateful, and went out of her way to piss everyone off. Despite the trouble she always got in, Aris kept her, and she would get in trouble again sooner. The family moved to the region of Furoh, as Sena had caused just too much trouble in Johto. Aris's parents were very tempted to take the Eevee away, but didn't....he would need it. They couldn't just let this keep happening, but they also couldn't let it die in the wild! After growing tired of his laziness and the trouble Sena caused, Aris's mom kicked him out and forced him on a Pokemon journey with Katana and Sena, the former was overjoyed to finally get to spend every minute of every day with her Trainer, and the latter was none too happy about being taken away from a home which gave her free food.

Class: otaku Researcher

Starting Pokemon: Katana/Absol F level 10. Sena/Eevee F Level 10.

Items: Quick Claw, Sitrus Berry x5

What is the biscuit's name: The answer is Scheherazade.
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post Mar 12 2013, 06:33 PM
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A few things before I can approve this profile:

1.) I think the history section is a little lacking. The history focuses almost more on the personalities of his pokemon, rather than Aris' life. Did Aris attend school? Pokemon School? Did he work a part time job? What did his family do? I like to see histories that help and empower the personality section, by reinforcing the choices through a biography of events. Please flesh this out with more of a backstory. It doesn't have to be extravagant, but it should focus more on Aris, rather than explaining what Katana and Sena are like.

2.) Why did Aris go to Furoh? Why didn't he just start his journey at Johto, where he was living at the time?



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post Mar 12 2013, 07:01 PM
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Edited! I'll admit, I did focus quite a bit on Katana and Sena. And I almost forgot I was making a character, and I just went on rambling :v

But I hope it's good now! To be honest, I always have trouble with back stories in general. It's not the appearance or personality, just history that takes me so long to write. I always think my back story will be unoriginal :P
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post Mar 12 2013, 07:50 PM
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So if his class is researcher, is that a profession he wants to pursue, or one in which he's already engaged.

Also, the question of why he went to Furoh is still unanswered.


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