[X] My Assistant

[saifors]

Hiya I saw some comic's and they were fun so I thought why not make one myself so that's what I did character bios well I will only post it of a caracter who is set in my comic in more than one chapter I will actually post every comic I make some might be found funny and some not. But who said it has to be funny and please don't post only things about my grammar everybody makes mistakes some more than others but if you only can post bad things about it try to find the good things about it and post it too if you'd please anyway comic :

[Xires]

I don't get it.

[saifors]

I don't get it.

It's simple actually Dugtrio has been alone in that cave for years then when Mankey comes Dugtrio starts off to show about his emo problems (he became emo of lonelyness) you are supposed to do 3 things to read know about Dugtrio being emo and watch the face while reading the text PS: please note that this is my very 1st comic
and you know here is the 2nd one if you want to know what happens next:

if you don't get this one well that Mankey thought he'll never get out of that cave ( he was lost for 3 days in it) then with emotrio (dugtrio) was met it became like a long creepy jail with a really strange/creepy emo that relates to the freedom and the joke then is yay freedom pokeball apears and he qets catched then he loses his freedom forever and his trainer get's more known in the next Comic *evil laugh cuz Mankey won't like it a bit*

[stbyleth]

eh the second one is very cliché, and not in the good way.

also, the grammar needs worked on.

[saifors]

eh the second one is very cliché, and not in the good way.

also, the grammar needs worked on.

uuhm I don't really know what you why is it not in the good way? and I only had a spelling error in Pokémon and I wrote Pokemon and very much people make that mistake oh well

the trainer is emo and let's see what will happen

[Rantick]

your spelling is pretty bad, even outside of the comic. For example:

"...and very much people make that mistake" = "lots of people make that mistake"

"..............
.................
.....Im bored" ="...I am bored..."

use correct spellings and if you have Microsoft Office, then that will automatically correct words for you, or even writing your scripts in a reply box on these forums will spell check. Just make sure not to actually post it :P

[stbyleth]

no really. your grammar is atrocious. there is no reason for there to be a bajillion and one exclamation points. Only one is needed.

[bowlda]

I'm not gonna keep criticizing what everyone else is talking about, so I'll say this, for one, sprite comics are kinda old. Try digitally drawing one or something, and spend a little bit more time on the jokes, they are somewhat cliche.

[saifors]

I edited the 1st post read it before you gonna post again
comic:

[Rantick]

umm, just a suggestion, but people aren't neccesarily saying it is bad. They are telling you how to improve :/

anyways, it was quite a funny idea to have Mankey kill himself =)

[saifors]

umm, just a suggestion, but people aren't neccesarily saying it is bad. They are telling you how to improve :/

anyways, it was quite a funny idea to have Mankey kill himself =)

Oh Ok it seemed like tat cuz they weren't saying sny good things about it.
thanks I knew that people could find it funny seeing losing like that
Edit: well here is a new comic:

[saifors]

now time for a completelly random Pokémon comic

I wonder what happened to Onix
PS: why didn't anyone post on the edited post

[saifors]

well here is:

Don't forget random I choose loks randomly and I choose winers randomly that you know it

THIS IS NOT SUPPOSED TO OFEND ANYONE ON THE WHOLE WORLD NO MATTER WHO THEY ARE!

[saifors]

well I haven't posted any comics (I need imagination :/ )