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RP Grading
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Living Arrow
post Jun 18 2011, 04:06 AM
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RP Grading – 20,000 Corsola Under The Sea


General Notes

Two introverted characters on a boat. Two characters unsure of their futures as trainers on a boat. Two characters… with awesome Roleplayers! Below are your grades (apologies for the wait) and I think you both deserve every point. I had been following this roleplay for a while and it’s not my first time grading you both either so I’m pleased to see you both taking on board comments from before and am keen to see Darryn or Lori come your way. ^__^
I love little Joey and Twila. They are a little naďve when it comes to being a trainers but they are beginners and it’s great to see that you haven’t lost sight of that just yet. Though, with the way they’re progressing, I’m sure Badges/Ribbons/Medals/Fame will be on their way soon!
Great use of PMs for your battle and everything was well written for the entire roleplay.

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post Jun 22 2011, 08:45 AM
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The Wonders Of Port Barley has been completed.

Xepidental as James Stanley (left)

Jansen as Willow Deacon(left)

Asterna as Rose Fiore

FirePower as Kaya Rovera


IMPORTANT EVENTS
*Willow, James, and Kaya arrive in Port Barley and decide to eat in a pizzeria
*Rose arrives, goes to the same restaurant as the others, and joins their group.
*James sees a pokeathalon poster
*Kaya meets Luke
*A double battle is proposed, but it never got started. RP turned in for people dropping out and inactivity.


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post Jun 22 2011, 06:48 PM
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I'll take it, but since we're running an event, this will be delayed.


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post Jun 26 2011, 06:37 AM
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The Wild Chills and Thrills of the Safari is now finished. This time the group heads to the Safari Zone to get some of them Pokémon. After the trip they decide to grab something to eat at the restaurant, only to get rudely interrupted by a group of rich teenagers. Simple plot, everybody made it to the end except DJSanders who disappeared during the final battles.

The cast:


Noteworthy events:
  • Liz catches a Zorua
  • Zach catches a Sandile and a Rufflet
  • Kenz catches a Tropius
  • David catches a Snivy
  • Tyson catches an Elekid
  • Tyson's Chikorita evolves into a Bayleef
  • The gang makes a bunch of rich kids going back crying to their mommies!


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post Jun 26 2011, 08:02 AM
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The Wild Chills and Thrills of the Safari

I , for one, have difficulty in writing up very long posts, so I understand. However, I noted that a majority of the posts are fairly short. Oftentimes, they fall within the realm of a few sentences. It doesn't hurt to add descriptions, rather than glaze things along for the sake of posting, or for the sake of moving things along. Sometimes, we, the readers, like to enjoy the moments, rather than being rushed through them.

Part of what it was is that many of you posts too frequently. Sometimes it's better to wait for everyone to post before you make your next statement, thereby giving you more things to respond to, and thus elongating your posts. It makes things flow easier that way, and you can fit several lines of dialogue in, rather than simply performing a single action and saying a single line.

Continuing on this trend, each of you have some wonderful moments of personal characterization. The drawback is, with such short posts, we really don't get to see more of it. You, the roleplayers, simply state something either as a thought or as a narrative sidebar, and never really give examples of exactly how the character portrays this. For instance: David Anderson parting with Charmander for the first time. It's merely a blip, and it's not really mentioned anymore in that post. We don't get to see how nervous or anxious he is without his dearest pokemon.

When your posts do get longer, they're definitely more enjoyable to read. There are so many little details that I could pick up from people, which increased the enjoyment tenfold.

Since you each only had one battle, I can't rightly give you full marks for your battle scores. But they were well done, and nice to see people playing with type disadvantages.

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Just so you know, on occasion, you'd refer to Gator as 'Crock'. I'm wondering if this was intentional?
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Pokefan209 - Kenz Issone
Be careful, your posts are very short, and it doesn't let us know too much about how Kenz reacts to her surroundings.

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Other than my few criticisms, this was pretty nice. It's great to see everyone improving more and more with each roleplay. Keep it up!


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post Jul 3 2011, 11:35 AM
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Review of “Wonders of Port Barley” With Bonus Musical Short!

The Wonders of Port Barley,
The surfers are totally gnarly.
We’ll all comb the beach while we sing Bob Marley,
The Wonders of Port Barley!

*jazz hands*


There’s not much to work with in this RP. Much of it consisted of ordering pizza and not much else. Had this RP continued with the two remaining members, you could have received more points. The double battle could have happened off-screen, with James and Willow going off to explore the Pokeathlon afterwards. This leaves Kaya and Rose to explore…wait for it…the wonders of Port Barley oh.gif! They could have explored the shops and beaches together, perhaps developing a good friendship. For a twist, one or both of them would run out of money; how would they continue their adventure? Luckily, there was a newbie tournament taking place on the beach. Grand prize was…enough cash to start a journey! Kaya and Rose could have entered and eventually had to face each other. That battle would decide the winner, but rather than one girl taking the money for herself, the two would share it and continue their adventures together. That would have been a pretty god way to continue and receive much more points.

As it stands, I’ll see what I can do.

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post Jul 9 2011, 10:04 PM
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On the Edge of the Ocean

RP THREAD
OOC THREAD

Stranded in Fidona still, Finnley has been not having the time of his life as he would have thought. First he misses his kick, second, which isn't really a bad thing, he meets a woman, and third he gets attacked by fish. The woman he meets is Jill, and he begins a good relationship with her right away. She offers to buy him food and their night goes quickly by as they finish off with dinner and head their separate ways.

But they soon meet back up again, when Finn is attacked by wild Carvanhas. With the help of Jill and her two Pokemon, Pele and Vinyl, along with a wild Krabby and Finn's Torchic, Nihall, who evolves into a Combusken, they defeat the raging fish. Right after the pairs part again, with each leaving an imprint in the other, even if they didn't intend on it.

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Finn Oakley - Angels Fall First - Profile|Current Levels
Jill Laurent - Yzarc Drowsnam - Profile|Current Levels

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post Jul 10 2011, 01:02 AM
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Sur le bord de l'océan

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Thanks you two!


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post Aug 22 2011, 12:59 AM
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A Tale of Two Kitties is now finished!

Terra Hunter's grandfather calls her up, reporting to her that his glameow, Aurora, was pokénapped! At the Pokécenter, she (literally) ran into Branwys Muphenz, a young lady with the odd predicament of being roughly half normal size. The pair had barely collided when Franscesco "Cesc" Rojas also collided - with the ground - on his way to make a delivery in Port Barley. The three agree to work together to recover Aurora, and, after a confrontation with the kidnappers, split up to follow two different leads. Cesc and Branwys encounter the kidnappers and rescue Aurora, and take her to Terra's grandfather. That night, they enjoy a little dinner and a little romance, opening possibilities by exchanging phone numbers... or DID they?!

(Please note: Terra's player pulled out of PANE in the middle of the RP. It was continued by Branwys' and Cesc's players, hence the split.)


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post Aug 22 2011, 03:44 AM
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Par-Tay in Gigarte is also over, meaning both of my PANE characters are up for grading at the same time!!!

Taggarty Lee is searching for Raven Amaranth after they split up, heading over to a circus where he believes she is. Seiccan Serroc attempts to make his Contest Circuit debut, but doesn't have enough pokemon. He winds up taking up a small gig at the same circus. Naturally, Justin Smart also happens to take a gig at the circus, but he's working security.

So, Tag and Justin separately stumble across a Move Master, teaching both of their pokemon several new combat techniques. Tag also stumbles across a very familiar Seviper, but then finds Justin and Nate, causing Tag to realize that this is the same Seviper from "Operation Wounded Snake", where they all first met.

Tag is talked out of a fight, and ends up attempting to rescue some of the pokemon there, capturing a Slowpoke in the process. Meanwhile, Justin and Nate work their security gig for Seiccan's show.

Tag and Seiccan bump into one another, and start a fight. Things get out of hand when the man who had guarded the Slowpoke appears, and then proceed to get more out of hand when Justin appears.

After dispersing once more, Tag attempts to rescue the Seviper, somewhat aided by Seiccan, but they're ultimately thwarted by Justin. In lieu of fighting, (well, major fighting), they talk it over (sorta). A peaceful, non-violent solution in reached, and all three head their separate ways again.


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post Aug 28 2011, 12:54 PM
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Review of “A Tale of Two Kitties”

It was the best of kitties; it was the worse of kitties… Yeah, I went there.

I have to admit, once Bronze Charizard left, I thought this RP was written off. Luckily, you two managed to finish the job and rather well. Enough of the chit-chat, let’s begin.

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post Aug 29 2011, 06:23 AM
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Review of “Par-Tay in Gigarte”

The whole Tag/Justin/Nate combo gets me every time - LOVE it. I've not had any exposure to Douken's secondary character, Seiccan, before but it's clear that he'll be a fast-rising star in our PANE community. Below are your scores but I can make it easy for you and just say: "Holy crap! Well done!"

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post Oct 8 2011, 01:49 PM
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The Mirrormist at Twilight is now complete.

Darryn, (joined quickly by his cousin, Lyla), Tuesday, Jaima and Meiko show up in Petropolis and go on to forget their previous troubles as much as possible. Tuesday performs in her first contest, and Darryn in his second, while Jaima gets his third gym battle in. Easy as 1, 2, 3, right? NOT right. There's returning rivals, mischievous mirages, and particularly petulant pokemon in the mix!


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post Oct 10 2011, 09:59 PM
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The Mirrormist at Twilight

Well, I've been reading along this entire time, and needless to say, I think this was an excellent done roleplay, from start to finish.

I've grown very fond of Darryn, Lyla, Jaima, Meiko, and Tuesday, because I've been an avid reader of all of their roleplays thus far. There's a lot of definite character interaction, growth, and drama, which I enjoy greatly. It'll be sad to see Team Rogue disband, but it'll be interesting to see where your characters develop from here.

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post Oct 27 2011, 01:07 AM
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Meh. Double Post.

The Judged is in need of judging.

Taggarty Lee ventures to Aridana, where he meets and quickly engages in a battle with Vernon "Luck Truck" Blazena, whose Pokemon Egg has just hatched into a baby Riolu. The match ends poorly for Vernon, as Tag's Ledian, Suzu, sends Vernon's Tepig, Razor, to the infirmary with some serious wounds.

After the battle, some old acquaintances from Tag's past appear. Pino and Lily Graham, from Blackthorn City. Pino challenges Tag to a battle, and after a fairly extensive match, Pino wins, knocking Tag unconscious and taking his pokemon. As Vernon springs to Tag's aid, he's barred by Lily, who his a neophyte trainer in her own regard. Pino and Lily make a hasty getaway, while Tag recovers.

In need of a team to recover his companions, Tag races out into the desert, snagging two pokemon with quick balls. Tag then summons up his Snorunt, Orin, who evolves into a Froslass, and Zuki, his Poochyena.

Vernon stumbles across a wounded mudkip and takes it to the pokemon center.

Tag and Vernon engage Pino and Lily in their respective matches. Tag, using excellent tactics, defeats Pino in the rematch, reclaiming his pokemon. However, their battlefield is set aflame by a stray Fire Blast, causing Vernon to suffer a Post-Traumatic-Stress-Disorder Flashback. Tag paves the exit with Orin the Froslass, Ray MK III the Croagunk, and Lily's Trapinch, carrying Vernon to safety.

I'm bad at summaries.

Vernon "Luck Truck" Blazena - Royal Summoner Kitten
-Tepig, Croagunk, Zorua, Riolu

Taggarty "Tag" Lee - Kamaitachi
-Ledian, Nidorino, Bellossom, Vulpix, Froslass, Slowpoke, Poochyena, Spinda, Nosepass


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post Oct 30 2011, 11:22 AM
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Judgment Day: Review of “The Judged”

Another great story. We get to see more of Tag’s background and a little bit of Vernon’s. My only complaint on that front was that it was a bit short for my tastes. Very little time passed between Tag’s defeat and his victory. Alright, on to the reviews!

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post Oct 31 2011, 10:38 AM
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Beginnings, Bullies and a Beatdown in Barley has finished!

Just starting out, new trainers Lori and Will find themselves to be the punching bags of a local gang of bullies in Barley. To get the older kids to leave them alone, the pair challenge them to a Pokemon battle but will these young trainers have what it takes to win?

Lori Pardare - Living Arrow -Piplup, Snivy
Will Soraka - Zohariel - Baltoy, Sentret


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post Nov 7 2011, 07:56 PM
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I'll take this, since it slipped under the radar. I should have it up by the end of the week at the latest.


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post Nov 10 2011, 01:17 PM
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Too long in the waiting

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post Nov 30 2011, 04:28 PM
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Theft at Barley



OOC = http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=60022
RP = http://forums.gtsplus.net/index.php?showtopic=60044

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1. Allie Snow - Profile
2. Nathan Packerman-Profile
3. Hunter Price - Profile

Summary:
Allie arrives at Port Barley and hears about a thief stealing items from shops. Soon, she gets her bag stolen and meets Nate and Hunter as they help her find it.

Events-
* Hunter's Tyrogue evolved into Hitmonchan
* A giant battle with Meowth and Persian and win



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