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Toogee
post May 18 2010, 01:01 PM
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Review of “Nocturnal Hunt”

Sometimes, it’s good to have a nice simple get-together rather than an epic adventure every single RP. Though a bit shorter than most RPs, “Nocturnal Hunt” managed to fit nicely; I can’t think of anything to add.

Note that since Marquis only posted once, no points were awarded for that character.

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post May 30 2010, 10:44 PM
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The Ubiquitous Umbra of the Unending Underground is complete! Starring:

2gamers- Pandora Gibbs
Yzarc Drowsnam- Justin Smart
Moonlight Zelda- Diana Wolfe
Tysm- Andrew Simons

With special appearance by Living Arrow- Darryn Kellor

In 4U, Pan and co. journeyed through Furoh’s underground network in search of buried treasure. They started their adventure in the underground town of Under Hill. From there, they dug through the walls to find a bounty of treasures. In addition, Pan caught a cleffa and an absol joined Andrew’s party.

Tensions rose as Justin and Pan argued over sharing treasure. Tensions from that argument vanished once the team discovered an ancient temple dedicated to the legendary Groudon. They found that this temple was being raided by construction team, whose leader tried to eliminate Pan and Justin with a drilling mech. The good guys came out the winners, not knowing that the plot ran far deeper than their encounter.

The RP ended with Pan eying her next mission and Justin facing an uncertain future towards a life in crime. Who knows where this will take them.

This is the first RP I completed without having to write up a giant summary to tie up loose ends. Unfortunately, Moonlight suffered from health issues and other real life issues that didn’t allow her to keep posting. I nearly forgot Tysm was even in the RP :P.

Mod note: I believe Living Arrow reserved this RP for grading. I could be wrong though.


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post May 31 2010, 03:43 AM
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Review of “The Ubiquitous Umbra of the Unending Underground” (ugh, writing that out is a chore!)

One of the first RPs I’ve graded in a while and although I loved parts of it, I was a little disappointed in others. It was clear from the start that activity was going to become an issue and so grades have suffered as a result for certain players. That said, the RP as a whole fit nicely and it was good to see the Furoh Underground being used and Team Deception truly being used properly. That said, read on for character specifics:

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post Jun 2 2010, 11:50 AM
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Stranded on Charizard Isle has come to an end. The ending was a bit rushed due to inactivity from people apparently going off PANE I'm such an inspiration.

To summarise it, the group made their way to a volcanic island. Once there, they met up and entered a cave, but were trapped by a cave in. The only way of getting out was to go further in and try to find an alternate exit, but found a cavern filled with fire types. They turned out to be aggressive, and a battle followed as they attempted to escape through a river/cave.

This lead to Magikarp evolving after battling a group of Wartortle, and as they escaped on Gyarados Govannon captured one of the weakened Ponyta. Malcolm wasn't best pleased with that and made his exitfrom the island on the back of Fishy as soon as possible, leading to him being flown to the Furoh mainland when he got swept in to the sea.

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post Jun 8 2010, 12:11 PM
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Trainer Training has come to a dead stop.

knil1 - Koryu Hiroki
Dragava - Elizabeth "Lizzie" Verillo
Gearbits - Sawyer Lewis
Lux Cruxis - Waker Faland
Euphraim - Sora Hikari


In the Town of Barley lies a small building located a little bit off the Boardwalk. This building is currently home to a little non-for-profit business called Trainer Training.
Here, a Trainer can learn a variety of skills, such as General Battle information and how to better bond with your pokémon. It's great for starting trainers, but an even better refresher course. Trainers are given hands-on learning experiences that allow for a better knowledge of how things are performed.
Trainer Training is "a school for trainers old and new".



I'd post a summary, but nothing happened....


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post Jun 8 2010, 03:50 PM
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Stranded on Charizard Island was a short RP which was, to be perfectly blunt, driven by one person alone. In the end, that one person ended up alone, leaving even his Partner behind. The RP was enjoyable in parts, and the ending gave me a smile. However, short posts, spelling problems, and a lack of battling drove scores to record lows.

Malcolm Smith: 13/15 (click to show)


Vincent Lance: 5/15 (click to show)


Franny 'Frosty' Jalms: 5/15 (click to show)


Paul Charbon: 2/15 (click to show)


I want to end by saying that we, as mods, understand when real life gets in the way. However, we, as mods, do not grade at ALL on how long it takes to finish a post, and, if your fellow RPers are agreeable to wait, it's better to do an average or long post over months than it is to do a short post over days.


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post Jun 9 2010, 10:22 PM
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School’s Out: Review of “Trainer Training”

This RP had a really good plot perfect for the Barley setting. The gateway city had a place for trainers to learn the tricks of the trade. Unfortunately, reality did not want you to finish this RP. It’s disappointing to see it die off before everyone actually got to know each other. At least you guys can move on to more successful endeavors.

Note that I’m only grading kni1, Dragava, Gearbits, and R3ignlasting. Lux has left PANE and Euphraim wasn’t even in this RP.

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post Jun 12 2010, 05:35 PM
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And now, An Obstacle Known as Mount Carello has come to a close.

In this small adventure, Douken Sota (played by me) gets ready to climb the mountain base when Pandora Gibbs (played by 2gamers) meets up with him, joining in his journey to the city. However, Pan was asked to visit a cave for archeological purposes. On the way uip the climb, Pan falls, but Ivysaur catches her, soon to evolve into Venusaur and pull her up, leaving Douken to climb the rest of the way.

Soon after, they find the cave they want, and soon some tomb raiders, a gothica lolita named Kym who loves treasure, and a Mohawk-wearing punk named Drake, who loves Kym. The two take them hostage after blowing the only known entrance and forced to find what they believe is treasure. However, they get led to two paths. Kym took Douken down one, and Drake took Pan down the other.

While split up, the two decided to damage their relationships, Douken by getting Kym to love him, and Pan to have Drake hate her. Drake's hate was enough to distract him and send out the wrong Pokemon, allowing Pan to escape with everyone else. When the four meet up once more, they get into a Double Battle and fight them off, Douken's Croagunk getting some relief for beating an Ursurang, though still annoyed that he had to team up to do it.

With the thieves gone, they soon find what they were after, which would of disappointed them anyways, and managed to get out and straight to Arasam.

Biggest things:
Turnip evolved
Double battle ensued, victory to Douken and Pan.


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post Jun 14 2010, 02:45 PM
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A review of An Obstacle Known as Mount Carello:

First off, it was good to see this pair team up. I thought they played well off of each other, and that enhanced the RP experience. There were some places where it seemed as if wires had been crossed; Actions by one person did not match actions by the other. These, however, were small and not overly detrimental. After splitting up, having one character play the villain that had gone with the other was great: It allowed for the players to interact even when the characters couldn't.

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Pan Gibbs: 15/15 (click to show)


Well read, and I look forward to more. I would be quite pleased if this team up didn't end for a while.


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post Jun 18 2010, 06:03 AM
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post Jun 18 2010, 08:52 AM
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Due to the shortness of the RP, I cannot grade this. My general rule is 2 pages (MH says 10 posts per RPer minimum or 1.5 pages).


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post Jun 27 2010, 08:48 PM
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Operation Wounded Snake

Summary: Justin Smart and Nate Guzman have just met and are partners in Unit 101 of Team Deception. Their first mission is to find and capture, without using a pokeball, a live seviper. After quickly realizing the danger of carting an unconscious seviper all the way back to Petropolis, however, they deceptively enlist the help of two passerbys, Tag and Malcolm. Another unit in Team Deception (the specific number and even names of members were left unidentified) decided to try to sabotage the mission under the belief that Team Deception only ever has 100 units at a time, and that hiring Justin and Nate meant getting rid of one of the other units.

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1. Yzarc Drowsnam (Average level: 11)2. Kamaitachi (Average level: 10)3. Xal (Average level: 20)
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Justin's Tyrogue evolved into Hitmontop
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post Jun 29 2010, 10:51 PM
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Snake Beater: Review of “Operation: Wounded Snake”

This RP was a nice showing of Team Deception in action. I’m really happy how it turned out. I liked how Malcolm was oblivious to the interactions between Justin, Nate, and Tag. I can’t think of much more to say, so on with the scores!

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post Jul 21 2010, 05:19 PM
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Gigarte Grotto has been finally completed.

The Characters-

Daniel (Amissa AKA the person who kept the RP alive)
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Delainey(Ozzy)
Iko(KingBirdy)
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Amelia(Jonahman10)
Crystal Halo [Who's profile cannot be found by me] (Logan assuming this will help find the profile)

Summary-
Amelia and CO. look into mysterious happenings in a strange Grotto in Gigarte. Pollution, fire, and an {Assumedly) evil plot of a mysterious group are all trials they face. We never explained the group but a couple RPs based off what the group was and what they are planning could spring up.

Note- Sorry about my bad muse most of the time. Amissa and Ozzy were the ones that prodded me to make most of the posts.

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post Jul 21 2010, 05:56 PM
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I'll take this, though it would be nice if you told me who caught what. Also, Kingbirdy's Arayl's, and Logan's profiles are dead, so they won't be getting grades.


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post Jul 23 2010, 08:55 PM
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Of Seals and Men

Vincent Waters & Joey Sweet


Joey starts off his Furoh adventure in Barley where he meets timid Vincent. Vincent had been meaning to kick off the classic journey through the region but has remained comfortably at home instead. After getting to know each other a little better, the two decide to set out and explore the world, choosing Fidona as their starting point. As they wait for their ride out of Barley, they spend time together at a fair and later learn the basics of coordinating. Vincent and Joey then embark on a boat and await what fate has in store for them.

*Squirt the Squirtle receives name change (now Typhoon)
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post Jul 24 2010, 10:00 AM
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Review of “Of Seals and Men"

This RP had it all in my opinion and I'm very happy to say that the scores reflect it! Both of you keep things realistic, grounded and humorous all at the same time - it was a great read and I recommend other players watch out for your little duo!

Unlike for other roleplays, I think you were both fairly even so I am marking you together:

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post Jul 26 2010, 07:26 PM
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Fire and Brimstone: Review of “Gigarte Grotto”

This was a pretty good plot; I’m glad it’s continuing in a separate RP. There are a couple of things on the setting though. First, Gigarte is completely underground, so snowfall wouldn’t be a problem. Second, the group probably should have picked up some gas masks around the work site. As they went deeper into the cave, there would be less outside oxygen and more hydrogen sulfide (that rotting egg smell).

I’m going to try and make this short and sweet, so if you need more details, let me know.

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post Aug 2 2010, 09:42 PM
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Absolutely Awesome in Airy Arasam is complete!

Pandora Gibbs- 2gamers

Douken Sota- Douken Sota

Pan and Douken were playing in all the major events in Arasam. First, they participated in the Arasam contest. Unfortunately, neither could obtain a ribbon from the hall leader Troy. After finding out about Pan and Darryn, he made it up to her and Douken by taking them out for a night on the town. This ended with a drunken joyride across the town, but everyone made it out OK.

The next day, Douken challenged gym leader Otis and came out the winner. The RP ended with the pair leaving Arasam on a hot-air balloon for destinations unknown…

Other stuff:

Douken received a magnamite and won the Emberwing badge.
Pan got her Fire Stone back from the museum.


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post Aug 5 2010, 11:40 AM
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Sorry for the long delay before a reply. Work and Real Life™ has picked up for the vast majority of the mods that are not involved in this roleplay, and I was the first to get a modicum of free time. This is not an excuse, merely an explanation.

I will read it ASAP, and grade it very shortly after that. If I have gone longer than a week, please contact me via PM and remind me that my job is important, but this is no less so.


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