[X] My Assistant

[Actinium]

Name: Dawn Randall
Age: 12
Hometown: Village Bridge, Unova, but currently lives in Gigarte

Appearance:

Being tall for her age, Dawn is a a little less than 5 feet tall, and weighs about 90 pounds. She has short, messy brown hair that’s sometimes in her face, with natural, light brown highlights. She has light skin, and bright blue eyes, and has freckles. She also has feet slightly larger than the normal 12 year old. Dawn wears a white t-shirt with a PokeBall design on the front. She wears boot cut jeans, with a PokeBall patch on the left back pocket. She has a plain, solid brown belt, with a normal buckle. She wears purple, mud-cut sneakers with plain whit socks that covers her ankle. Dawn has a white bag with her name stiched in the front. She also has a denim jacket that she wears when it’s a little cool out. She doesn’t wear any jewelry.

She also has a swim suit. It’s a two piece, with the top peice the color of a oshawott body with a picture of a scalchop on the belly, and the bottom piece the color of an Oshawott’s feet. She also has sky blue goggles that cover her nose.

Personality:
Dawn is a fun person. She gets bored easily, though. She’s friendly, and is friendly to Pokemon, too. She loves to take care of and play with Pokemon. SHe thinks it is wrong to keep Pokemon inside PokeBalls, so she keeps her Pokemon out most of the time. Dawn will do her best to help others when they need it.

Dawn also likes to eat. Her favorite foods are Macaroni and Cheese, pizza, and ice cream (Her favorite flavor is french vanilla). She likes to draw and read, and also likes computers.

She isn't very dependable, though. She's often late to things, and is easily distracted.


Biography:
Dawn was born on Village Bridge, and was an only child. She had a normal life, and when she was 5, began playing outside with other kids. When ever a Pokemon came on the brige, Dawn was one of the first to know. She would stop by the resteraunt every once in a while, to take home extra berries. She had a small Pokemom bed in front of her house, and would place some berries there to see if wild Pokemon would come. IF they did come, she would watch it eat and rest, because she thought Pokemon where really interesting. Of corse, she would get bored with it easily and most likely play with her friends.

In summer she would swim with her friends, and sometimes on nice days look for a Lapras. They only saw the Lapras that was said to inhabit the waters about 2 or 3 times, but when they did, they would try to play with it. Dawn usually gave the Lapras an extra berry or two, and then the Lapras would give rides. On the last time that it happend, Dawn saw an Oshawott resting on the shell, and it looked very sick. Dawn took it home, and nursed it back to health. The Oshawott liked Dawn, and he decided to stay.

A year after, the gym leader Burgh visited the bridge, and brought some baby Sewaddle. He gave one of them out to Dawn, and he commented on her excelent Pokemon care skills. Dawn happily accepted it, and the Sewaddle really liked her. They were very good friends.

Two years later,when Dawn turned 11, Dawn and her family prepared to move to Gigarte. Her aunt visited from Gigarte, and she was a Pokemon breeder. She persuaded the Randalls to come, and they did, knowing how much Aunt Julie would like it. Dawn was always a fan of her aunt, but she didn't want to leave her friends behind. The community on the bridge threw a little party. One of her friends gave Dawn a photo album full of pictures on the bridge and her friends. Dawn was still a little sad, and she didn't want to go, but she knew her parents wanted to live somewhere else, and being near a relative helped them in picking Furoh. After saying goodbye to everyone, she and her family picked up thier things and went.

Once there, Aunt Julie showed them around the dome that was Gigarte. Dawn thought it was lovely. The Randall family lived in an apartment, and Dawn had made some friends. She liked Gigarte, but she missed her old home on the bridge. Every once in a while she would look at the album, and remember the good times she had back then. Every day she liked her new home even more, but she still remembered her life on the bridge. On Dawn's 12th birthday, her friends and family gave her a lot of cool things, inculding the iPokeDex and a berry bag, sent by the resturaunt owner back on the bridge, and a picture of the lapras sent by the same friend that gave her the album. Those things gave her happy memories, and Dawn cried a little when she got them. Aunt Julie also gave Dawn a Litwick. Then, at the start of the next day, Dawn's parents (after a little more persuasion) let Dawn go on her jouney, alone. Dawn knew that her aunt understanded her. Her parents where a little worried, but Aunt Julie assured that she would be fine. Dawn was worried, too, but she had always wanted to go on a jouney, mostly because of the tales she has been told by traveling trainers that have crossed her home bridge. She was always interested in hearing the stories that they told, asking trainers who pass to tell her tales of their adventures. Plus, her Pokemon have been a bit bored, and she didn't want to let them down.

Class: Trainer and Coordinator

Starting Pokemon:

Conch the Oshawott
Male, Level 10

Personality: Conch is a bit of a show off, and always tries to get respect and praise from Dawn's other Pokemon. He isn't as though as he looks though, but is still a tough oppenent.

Moves: Tackle, Tail Whip, Water Gun

Willaim the Sewaddle
Male, Level 5

Personality: William is a friendly Sewaddle, who is creative. He likes to have fun with Dawn, and tries to whenever he can. He sometimes makes little leaf and string art for Dawn, and also likes to swing with his string.

Moves: Tackle, String Shot

Shine the Litwick
Female, Level 5

Personality: Shine is the only girl of the trio, but is a bit of a tomboy. She is miscevious, and gets into a lot of trouble. She steals life from people she doesn't like, even though Dawn tells her not to.

Moves: Ember, Astonish, Minimize, Smog

Items:
iPokeDex (a mix of an ipod Touch and PokeDex)
PokeBall x3
Berry Bag
x2 Cheri
x2 Chesto
x2 Pecha
x2 Rawst
x2 Aspear
Bag
Denim Jacket
Swim Suit
photo album

What is the biscuit's name? Scheherazade

This post has been edited by PokeCutie999: Oct 8 2011, 02:29 PM

[Toogee]

This is a pretty nice profile. I like Dawn's simple beginnings. There are a few things that could be added:

Appearance: Her height and weight appear closer to a 14-15 year old. If that was your intent, you could mention that she's somewhat taller and larger than most girls her age (though not obese). Otherwise, here's a calculator you can play with and adjust to your needs.

Dawn has a white bag with She also has a denim jacket that she wears when it’s a little cool out.

This sentence doesn't make sense.

Bio: Speaking from experience, kids don't like to move. How did Dawn feel about leaving everyting behind to go to some foreign country? She seemed to enjoy spending times with her friends, the berry restaurant, and the lapras in the lake. Did she learn to like her new home in Gigarte? I ask because this was one of the two most important events presented in Dawn's bio. There should some emphasis on this event.

The second important event, going out on her own, should also be presented with more detail. Why does she want to go on a journey? Was it her choice or was her aunt being pushy? Perhaps a little more detail on her parents' thoughts.

Other than that, it's good .

[Doctor Fuji]

I.... Love it. Exspecially William and Shine....I want to call her lexi so bad. Anyway i love the bio. She sounds like a fun character. I like her pokemon except Oshawott's don't find me fun. They like to use water gun on me. well if this is a journal i plan to read it daily or whenever posts are made.

[Toogee]

Do not post in another member's profile thread unless you are a PANE mod!

Fuji, if you have something to say to PokeCutie999, say it elsewhere. This is not the place.

[Actinium]

I'll get right to changing it~!