[X] My Assistant

[Euphraim]

Name: Sora Hikari

Age: 15

Hometown: Little Root Town

Appearance: Sora is 5' 5'' and has black semi-spiky hair and blue eyes. He has a black head band on his head with a black and red pokeball on it. He is often seen wearing a black t-shirt with black pants and a black jacket with his pokeballs on the sides of his jacket. He also has a red flame and a blue water droplet pendant. His shoes are black and have a grind plate on the sole. He has a black and red pokeball shaped hip pack were he puts most of his items.

Personality: Sora does not often talk to other humans that he has met for the first time. Though after a while he begins to open up and is a bit more lively and talkative. With Pokémon, whether there wild or not, he opens up almost immediately and will protect any in harm to prevent what happened to Zach's mother from affecting anyone else. Without his telepathic powers, he can't read a person's emotions that well unless he knows that person. Sora also does not like to invade the confides of another beings mind and will only open a link to talk to that being.

Biography: Sora has had his powers of telepathy since he was five. Because of this, Sora has never had many human friends because they usually were freaked out when Sora talked to them from within there mind. When he was ten he found a wounded Pikachu carrying an egg within the forest that he loved to travel around. When he got closer he saw that the pikachu would not likely survive long enough for him to get it to a Pokémon Center. He talked to it using telepathy to try to help ease its suffering in its last moments. When the Pikachu's live was near its end, she gave the egg she was holding to Sora and told him to take care of it. Her death didn't affect his psyche but it did cause him to try to save any Pokémon, no matter the danger involved. Sora did and several days latter it hatched into a healthy male Pichu. When he was 14, Sora's parents gave him a young male Riolu by the name of Kio and said that he could begin his journey. Sora decided to begin his journey in the new region of Furoh. Were will his adventure take him in time.

Starting Pokémon:

Name: Zach
Species: Pichu
Gender: Male
Level: 10
Moves: Thundershock, Charm, Tail Whip, Quick Attack
Ability: Static

Name: Kio
Species: Riolu
Gender: Male
Level: 8
Moves: Quick Attack, Foresight, Endure, Counter
Ability: Inner Focus

Tag Moves (Moves that combine two Pokémon's attacks):
Quick Barrage: All Pokémon with the move Quick Attack in the battle work together to barrage the enemy with attacks.

Items:
A jet black Poketech
Pokeball X 6
Potion X 5
Revival X 1
Elixir X 2

What is the biscuit's name? The answer is Bertha

Other Notes: Psychic type Pokémon and other telepaths are able to detect if Sora has established a mental link with someone nearby. Sora's Psychic abilities are limited to only mental communication. He can communicate with all Pokémon, but he will only do so if its one of his own or he needs to apologies to it.

This post has been edited by Euphraim: Sep 25 2009, 04:56 PM

[Master Houndoom]

Well thought out, you've put some thought into your background, which is a good thing at all times.

I've seen more than one psychic, and I'm always wary about allowing them. So I'm going to ask you to limit the psychic powers at the beginning. I am always wary about psychic powers being the instant win button. (As a note, I don't allow Aura at all in beginning profiles).

I want to see more in the personality. How does he react when meeting people, how well does he read people, how well does he get along with pokemon, both wild and other people's, etc, etc.

Everything else is fine, but I'd like to note that there is no reason to put down the combo. We'll figure it out through the RP.

It's a good combo, though.

[Euphraim]

Ok edited. I hope this is okay.

[Master Houndoom]

OK, a few more notes. I was travelling when I responded before (web-capable phone + unlimited internet plan = travellin' mod). So there are points I missed, and some I didn't see until I re-read. I apologize for the confusion.

It would seem that you used the Uprising template. While this isn't a problem, I want to be sure you didn't mean to post this in the Uprising forums. If not, that's fine, but there's no faction in PANE.

The telepathy still bothers me. Is he going to be able to communicate with all pokemon that he runs across? Will he be trying to do this, or will it be automatic?

Also, the fact that he was mentally linked/communicating with a pikachi as she died... did that have any effect on him psychically?

I need these questions answered, otherwise I won't be able to sleep.

Feel free to take this to PMs.

[Master Houndoom]

Approved. Welcome to PANE. Put a post in the Current Levels thead.