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Kazill Ventile, Charizard rider apprentice.
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post Jul 12 2010, 06:30 PM
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Name pronunciation
kah-zeel ven-ty-ul

Quick Stats
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Gray

Appearance
Her eyes are stone gray. She's nearsighted(meaning objects in the distance appear blurry), so she wears glasses. Her hair is brown and medium length. Caucasian complexion. Prefers casual style clothing: T shirts, shorts, windbreaker pants, jackets, hoodies, tennis shoes, sandals, etc. Has a lot of different T shirts, and wears them often with simple shorts in warm weather. In cool weather, she wears a hoodie or jacket with windbreaker pants. Doesn't always wear a specific color, and hardly ever wears matching colors. It's common for her to wear red and purple one day, then yellow and green the next. Hates jeans because they're too uncomfortable. Also hates dresses and skirts. Almost always wears the orange wristbands that serve as the uniform for the group she's a part of. Height is in the 5 foot range, weight is around 170.

Personality
She's bold and outgoing, at times hyper and childish. Anything can become a joke when she's in a good mood. Isn't afraid to laugh at herself, an incident like not paying attention and putting a bag of chips away in the refrigerator results in a comment like "Looks like I let my mind wander and it didn't come back." She's violent with words when she's angry, saying things she'll regret later. Her biggest pet peeve is people who are cruel to pokemon. When Team Rocket killed the mother marowak at Lavender Town, she saw it on the TV news. The news station even filmed the orphaned cubone being bottlefed, tears rolling down its face. That pulled on Kazill's heartstrings and made her vow to find Team Rocket and give them what they deserved.

Biography
Born and raised in Kanto's Pewter City. Her father is a merchant, but her mother is an assistant at the Oak Pokemon Lab. Her mother would always come home and talk about the newest discoveries, as a result, Kazill quickly became the walking pokedex of the neighborhood. The more she learned, the more she enjoyed the local museum. And one day while she was examining a kabutops fossil, a man came in with a newly hatched charmander. "This little guy needs someone to train him." The man told her. "You look like a good match."
Kazill happily accepted the offer. The man happened to be a charizard rider, a member of a growing organization that helped fight the evil Teams, raised the charmander line, and stood for the good of all people and pokemon. By taking the charmander, Kazill automatically became a charizard rider apprentice.
Six years after receiving the charmander, Kazill is still training. She came to Furoh to hone her skills and carry out a mission that she volunteered for. The charizard riders are interested in Charizard Isle, because there are few places where the charmander line runs wild, and they are rare even in their natural habitat. An island where they are common could be a huge break for the conservation efforts. Kazill's task is to go to Charizard Isle and study it.

Inventory
Poke Balls
Revives
Potions
Full Heals
Sitrus Berries
Pecha Berries
Cheri Berries
Chesto Berries
Rawst Berries
Persim Berries

Pokemon

Inferno
Species: Charmander

Gender: Male

Ability: Blaze

Moves: Metal Claw, Ember, Smokescreen

Appearance: Dark orange with orange claws and belly. Yellow eyes.

Description: Kazill's first pokemon. He's the son of the Charizard Riders' leader's charizard, so he feels pretty special. He doesn't act like King of the World, but he often thinks he's entitled to be the boss. Once you get past that part of his personality, he's quite a sweetheart.

Racket
Species: Mankey

Gender: Female

Ability: Anger Point

Moves: Karate Chop, Focus Energy, Fury Swipes

Appearance: Pure cream colored. Blue eyes.

Description: She held the lowest rank in her troop since her birth. In mankey/primeape troops, the lowest ranking individuals are allowed only shriveled and rotten food, and are always being shoved around. When Kazill found her, she willingly hopped into the pokeball in exchange for a banana that was actually edible. She got her name from the fact that she's so dang noisy, banging on pots and pans and shrieking when she's bored.

The biscuit's name
Waldorf

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post Jul 12 2010, 08:33 PM
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I'd like you to expand on the Appearance, personality, and Bio. Go to the Profile Template page, specifically the second post.

No TM moves/move tutor/egg moves to start. You may request to add them once you've gotten used to PANE.


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post Jul 12 2010, 09:28 PM
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Okay, can do. I understand how I should expand the bio and personality, but what about the appearance? Do you want me to specify the colors of the outfit?


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post Jul 12 2010, 10:12 PM
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Well, for one, use complete sentences (that goes for all the sections). How about her face? Does she wear make-up (if so, to what degree?)? Any other facial features (freckles, acne, etc.)? What about her eyes?

As for clothes, a favorite color may be good to know. Maybe more on the clothing style: Are her outfits more conservative, or are those shorts actually hot pants?


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post Jul 13 2010, 01:42 PM
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I fixed the appearance and personality. Still working on the bio...


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post Jul 13 2010, 01:49 PM
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Those sections are good happy.gif.

Your charmander can't learn Metal Claw yet; it's a tutor move. I should also add that your pokemon aren't limited to four moves either, so anything they learn at their level they can keep forever wink.gif.


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post Jul 13 2010, 05:35 PM
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In Firered/Leafgreen, charmanders could learn metal claw by leveling up. But if you're not allowing movesets from previous generations, I'll change it to scratch.

Kudos for allowing different colored pokemon, btw. I'm for the fact that they can't all look exactly the same.


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post Jul 13 2010, 05:48 PM
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Since there have been plenty of people requesting third gen moves, I guess I'll allow them. That being said, Charmander can't learn Metal Claw until Lvl. 13, so wait a little bit.

I'm still on the fence on alternate colors schemes. We've recently made them contest prizes for our fan-fic contest. We've allowed different eye colors, gray hair for age, and other small altercations, but I'll get back to you on your pokemon.


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post Jul 13 2010, 10:19 PM
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PMed Master Houndoom. He said (I agree) that these particular colors are too much of a deviation. I would allow different eye colors and/or slight changes to skin/fur color (ex. lighter or darker orange for charmander). Right now, they would qualify as contest prizes.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but change that and fill in the bio and you should be alright wink.gif.


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post Jul 14 2010, 12:22 PM
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Ok. Can I keep the mankey's appearance though?


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post Jul 14 2010, 01:29 PM
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QUOTE(Ruby Charizard @ Jul 14 2010, 12:22 PM) *
Ok. Can I keep the mankey's appearance though?

I'm afraid not. You may keep the blue eyes and make slight adjustments to the fur though (similar to the charmander).


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post Jul 14 2010, 02:12 PM
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So getting rid of the paw/tail tips and adding a raccoon mask doesnt count as a slight adjustment? I kept the colors...

I can put the paw/tail tips back, but I really want the mask.


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Can the mask just be an accessory that she wears? I guess the paws and tail aren't that big of a deal.

Also, don't forget your bio


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post Jul 14 2010, 02:46 PM
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The mask is a marking. Not an accessory. It's dark fur around the eyes that looks like a mask.

Yeah, the bio...once I get done with the new sprites it'll be updated.


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post Jul 14 2010, 05:50 PM
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Bio done.


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QUOTE(Ruby Charizard @ Jul 14 2010, 02:46 PM) *
The mask is a marking. Not an accessory. It's dark fur around the eyes that looks like a mask.

Yeah, the bio...once I get done with the new sprites it'll be updated.

I know it's a marking. I'm asking if it can be an actual mask. I won't approve of the marking, but I'll be fine with an accessory.

Bio is good.


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post Jul 14 2010, 07:27 PM
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I can't see why the marking's not allowed, but I don't want to get in trouble for arguing with a mod, so I took it off.


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Like I said, markings like that are contest prizes.

Approved. Go post in the Current Levels thread. Have fun!



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