[X] My Assistant

[Douken Sota]

Name: Seican Serroc
Age:18
Hometown: Slateport City, Hoenn

Appearance: Seican stands at about 6'1”, 170 lbs. His head is covered in ashy black hair, falling down on his shoulders (kept long for “proper headbanging”) along with his forest green eyes. He wears an unbuttoned onyx black overshirt, with no shirt underneath to show off his slight 6-pack build body, along with tattered blue jeans, color faded from its deep blue, and threaded at the knees.

Instead of formal outfits Coordinators wear during contests, Seican goes and takes a more Metal attire, replacing the overshirt with a black leather jacket with a white undershirt to cover his chest. His pants are black leather as well, just to give the punk look and to stand out from the others. Gotten no complaints about it so far...

Personality: Seican is the arrogant, cocky, stubborn loud mouth who rarely knows when to shut up and stop boasting about himself, although not as comparable as to some other popular anime characters. However, if you look past his obnoxiousness, he gets very chilled, and no matter the situation, the threat level seems to fly over his head, completely oblivious to dangerous moments.

His battle style also has a sense of rhythm to it, in some cases, having an actual beat. This can be told if his foot starts taking to the combat, finding the opponent's "tempo" and matching his his own team to it to try and counter, although this i usually used more against him when they read it and find out his style.

Biography: Seican grew up on music. His family were both part of an old band known as the Royal Knights, yet disbanded when his mother was pregnant with him (things weren't going well with the others anyways). At the age of 10, he began to learn to play the guitar, starting off with soft songs with an acoustic, but soon developed into harder music at the age of 13, picking up his first electric (which he still uses to this day). At 15, he was given Whismer, telling him that he should also learn to take care of Pokemon, not taking them long to learn from each other.

Taking a small vacation to Dewford Island, he watched a gym match go down. He didn't get as excited as some of the other watchers, but was amused my Brawly's Haryama, thinking how cool it would have one, bashing that belly like a drum, which lead him to search the mountainside for the fighting type, Makuhita. When it came down to power, the fighting type clearly had the advantage. However, when it came down to stubbornness, Seican was at his peak. In the end, Seican chased down the fighting type for a week, using any window he can to get a sneak attack of Uproar before the fighting type's ears were ringing as he tried to sleep, admitting defeat as long as the Whismer stopped screaming.

More time past, and Seican was well equipped to care for himself, his Pokemon, and his instrument, but he had nothing to prove it. Surfing the internet for a way to get his name out, he read about the Furoh Coordinator League, seeing Pokemon being shown off, and most cases with music tracks. With a grin on his face, he packed his bags and ordered the next ticket to Furoh. He was going to become popular in a foreign country, which should also boost his popularity in his home country as well.

Class: Rock Star Coordinator

Starting Pokemon:
Speaker (Whismer)
Female, Lvl 10
Ability: Soundproof
Pound – Uproar

A gift on his 15th birthday, Speaker has been anything but quiet. Through the year of having him, more training was spent adjusting his voice to guitar notes and memorizing the fingering more than actual battle skill. With than that skill, Speaker's biggest characteristic is her curiosity, taking the better of her.

Drummer (Makuhita)
Male, Lvl. 10
Ability: Guts
Tackle – Focus Energy – Sand-Attack – Arm Thrust – Vital Throw

Just the fact to know Belly Drum was the reason caught a Makuhita. Unfortunately, he learned AFTER he caught it he had to wait for him to get stronger before the move to be used, so Makuhita became one of his main hitters. Drummer is known to take things too literally, and has some hearing damage. He gets constantly annoyed with Seican trying to associate things with music.

Mara (Maractus)
Female, Lvl. 10
Ability: Storm Drain
Grasswhistle - Peck - Absorb - Sweet Scent - Growth - Pin Missile

Seican's payment for performing at a circus. She is very shy and gentle, often seen with a slight blush on her face. She will spazz out when nervous or scared, giving the rattling from her body an extra effect.

Items: Blue electric guitar, spare strings and pics
“Contest attire”
Set of Pokeballs

What is the biscuit's name? The answer is... Waldorf!!!!

Proof

This post has been edited by Douken Sota: Jul 10 2011, 09:31 AM

[Toogee]

Everything seems good, but I'm lost on the personality.

However, if you look past his obnoxiousness, people could see he has a bit of rhythm to himself, as if the loudness is the chorus, and the rest is the body. However, even when relaxed, he has himself a high beat, as if taking part of a high beat song.

His battle style also has a sense of rhythm to it as well, in some cases, actually having an actual beat.

I know you're trying to go for a musical theme, but I have no idea what any of this means in terms of personality. From the meaning of rhythm, I'm guessing Seican keeps to a regular pattern in daily life, perhaps prefers not to deviate from his pattern. As for beat...I've got nothing. Elaborate please.

[Douken Sota]

This is what happens when you try to make something at 4 in the morning...

*tries to remember*

Okay, I think when I said that, high beat is supposed to be a positive attitude through most things.

Battle, he will actually have the "1 2 3 4" thing going through his head XD

[Tymid]

It might be slightly easier to understand if instead of the words "high beat", you used the words "fast tempo". A beat is a unit of time, and tempo is the time itself.

Also, the part about where he catches the Makuhita is slightly confusing to read, in terms of sentence structure and how the paragraph is put together. Do you think you could edit that, a little?

Other than that, it looks good.

[Douken Sota]

Alright, I toyed with the personality a bit to try and be a bit clearer and tabbed around with Makuhita's battle, also giving him some hearing damage.

[Tymid]

Much better. Go post in the Current Levels thread, and have fun!